Can you critique Gooey's Falcon?

[GooeyBanana]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=us9ZSUJB25s
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyESeKi-Hss
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OB4ej926XOU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mgwjm1xjgN0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyjArH6bOYQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sf-jolnD5eo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Q9cno3rDFs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FmF81SCEcg

First off, sorry for the sets on Brinstar/Poke Floats, but those matches are just too fun xD. Second, I apologize for the crappy quality, I'm still getting used to capping footage and it doesn't help when my computer sucks and I'm using an Easycap for the footage. Might as well also mention that I do a lot of stupid stuff, a lot of the time, I already realize this and you'll know what I'm talking about when you see these videos. Short hop -> over b SHOULD be a knee, but my fingers stupidly slide over the b button as I'm going to hit the c-stick and yeah. Some matches I'm not Falcon, but I tried to use him as much as possible, because my friends all play characters that I need help with in that specific matchup. DK is too fun though, and then green Fox dittos on Jungle Japes was choke/funtastic, so I couldn't help but do so rofl.

Thanks if you can help me out!!

 

[Archangel]

Your tech chasing is pretty good. All your Techniques are down it seems. I will say that your approach is somewhat Obvious though. You should try an hide the fact that you want to grab just a little. Maybe you just could tell that it would work. However a Fox player such as M2K would have a field day Up smashing you in the face. Aside from that I'd say your Falcon is pretty **** good sir.

 

[GooeyBanana]

Thanks for the compliment ^_^

Yeah I didn't really think about it but I have been trying to grab a lot lately...thanks for helping me notice =).