Can I get some criticism?

[DGoscar]

Any criticism is appreciated :D

Be prepared, I get styled on pretty hard in some of these...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19ZDMRsorHQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qYjCy0DxvI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wqeFgQZDXK0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S25Jt9k1wS0

(some silly missed L-cancels in there...)

 

[Palpi]

All that falco does is shine full hop dair....lol..moar retreating bairs and uairs oos will stop that.

 

[DGoscar]

Mods can close this, thank you.

 

[-ACE-]

Mods can close this, thank you.

Do you no longer want advice? I was going to respond eventually (when I have time to watch all the vids).

 

[DGoscar]

Ah, I made a post in Linguini's thread so I thought that this thread would be unnecessary. If you wanna post any advice in here that'd be cool though, didn't mean to come off as impatient. :x