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Ascetic [13+ - strong language, violence, adult themes]

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Note -- The forum I originally posted this on completely ignores the "stories" section of their "artwork and stories" forum, so don't be surprised if I overreact to criticism or praise because I'm not used to either. Also, there are about 13 chapters to copy/paste, so please wait a short while before replying so they can be continuous.

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p r o l o g u e

Have you ever lived through a traumatic incident? One that scarred you, left a drastic impact on your life for a long time.
Yes?
Has that same event repeatedly occurred for years and years?
No.
Such was the fate of the apocalypses of Soresa. Nobody knew why they occured. Suns charred the world, diseases spread rampantly. Few people were left after each cataclysm, staying in the barren and dead lands allowing reproduction and rejuvination of the planet through a mythical winged star. The star was an average shooting star, simply with wings. Nobody knew why it had its powers, they were simply thankful for them.
Every time the star was touched, the holder's wishes were granted true. Thus, the people of Soresa dubbed it the Wishing Star.
The Wishing Star descends from its home in the sky once every two thousand years. Every time it appears, the apocalypse is slated for ten years from its arrival.
Today marks the beginning of the last week before the next apocalypse in Soresa. However, that is not the focus at this time.

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2016 AD, Earth

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Amberlyn arose from her unmade bed, rolling out of it and standing firm. She walked over to the mirror, examining her currently astray shoulder-length light blonde hair. It had highlights of brunette in it, which she hadn't particularly wanted at first, but they eventually grew on her. Her emerald blue eyes were blinking rapidly, trying to adjust to the light seeping through the window adjacent. She had mild baggage under them, due to staying up night after night, until upwards of five in the morning, due to severe insomnia. She was clothed in a silky blue laced nightgown which didn't quite hug to her very slender figure, but did the job well. It was a hand-me-down from her mother, who had passed away a few years earlier, leaving her with nobody, as her father had walked out on them. At the age of 17, Amberlyn considered herself very ample to watch after herself, though, being an only child, she occasionally became lonely in her somewhat large placement. Her friends Senna and Auburne had helped her with the home's bills and mortgages, though since she had recently graduated high school, they fell out of contact. Today was the start of another dreary day of job-hunting. The thought caused her to cringe. Amberlyn had never quite been the best at working, becoming disinterested even while participating in her favorite pass-times, and opting to laze around, half asleep, not helped by her insomnia. Those qualities weren't exactly worthwhile abilities from an employee, as she had learned after being fired twice from separate jobs. Despite all of her problems, she maintained a rather consistently happy attitude, barring the occasional episode of depression.
"Ugh." Amberlyn sighed. She bent down, walking over to her nearby dresser and sifting through its mahogany drawers. The dresser had definitely began to show its own age, the wood forming it beginning to pale and chip away. Amberlyn dragged out a few clothes; women's underclothing, as well as a simple magenta tee, and dark blue jeans. She slid the drawer shut afterwards, bumping into her desk as she laid them across her bed. Her room was rather small and coddled compared the the spacious house that she lived in, as it was originally a closet. She didn't particularly five it much thought, as she enjoyed small and cozy spaces. She finished, turning around and swinging open her door, leaving it ajar and walking out into the hallway.
Amberlyn's home wasn't exactly a simple, modest estate. It housed three floors, each with plenty of rooms and elegant designs. She had occasionally even stumbled upon rooms that had no purpose, at least, upon first glance. She enjoyed the house, though paying for its expenses was a rather large thorn in her side. She made her way through the red-carpeted hallways, the diamond-patterned walls at her side. Amberlyn reached the third floor bathroom, turning its handle and sliding the door open. She walked in, closing and locking the door behind her. Despite being completely alone, she had a rather large paranoia, and thus locked most doors after she entered them.
The bathroom was a pale blue, the floors being a few shades darker, tiled with white grout. A glass-doored shower lied at one end, with a circle tub adjacent, as well as a silver-seated toilet, a large navy rug encompassing the distance between the three items. Amberlyn stopped on the rug, untying the lace of her gown. It dropped to the foor, wrinkling into a pile. She undressed, dropping her intimacies on top of the gown. She walked over to the shower, sliding the glass door open and stepping in. The water-control knobs were encrusted with jewels, showing the architect's care and precise designs even there. She turned the elegant knobs to her liking, a jet of warm water emerging from the shimmering shower head. It wasn't a typical shower head which was mounted on a wall; it was a spray head installed on the ceiling to allow the water to cover the entire area of the shower. As a result, with the normal water, a pleasant mist also rained down, tickling the bather's body and allowing a more enjoyable experience.
"More job hunting." she said to herself, bending down and picking up the bottle of shampoo to her right. She opened the lid, pouring a dime-sized portion into her hand. She lathered it into her wet hair thoroughly before letting the gentle waters rinse it out. "Isn't that pleasant?" she continued, shaking her hair out of her eyes. She picked up the white and pristine soap, cleansing herself with it. "More opportunities to get shot down. Hooray." she whispered to herself sarcastically. She walked to the back of the shower, opening the door and reaching a hand out, grabbing a washcloth from the cloth rack next to the shower. She dragged the wet rag across her form, cleaning any missing details. "Just have to stay calm, cool, and confident." she sighed, before reaching towards the knobs. She turned them to the right, the waters easing to a stop. She slid open the door of the shower, steam emerging from its interior. She retrieved a towel from the towel rack that faced parallel to the cloth rack, wrapping it around herself and sliding it across herself, drying off. She rustled the towel through her sopping blonde hair, absorbing excess water to avoid dripping across the floor. After closing the shower door, she picked up her discarded clothing, leaving the bathroom. She trekked through the empty hallways to the laundry room, dropping her used clothing into the hamper and leaving, heading towards her room.
Amberlyn entered her bedroom, closing and locking the door behind her. She walked to her desk, searching through the drawers of items. She eventually came across her blow drier, as well as her comb. Walking over to a nearby outlet and plugging it in, Amberlyn turned on the black drier, angling it towards her hair and gliding her comb through her untamed hair. After she had dried and straightened it into her normal fashion, parted to the left and straight on the back and bangs, she turned off the drier, stepping over to her bed. She dropped her towel to the floor, putting on her intimacies. She picked up the magenta tee, sliding her torso into it. She picked up the jeans, stepping into them before zipping and buttoning them.
"Let's go about this the right way." she said, picking up her purse that laid on top of the drawer. She left the room, walking through the open hallways into the foyer, down the stairs and to the exit. She slid on her white heels that stood by the door, which she opened, stepping out into the shimmering sunlight.
Amberlyn walked over to her dark grey car, which was purchased with the help of Senna and Auburne. She reached into her purse, eventually fishing out the key and sliding it into the lock on the door, opening it and entering, sitting down on the leather seat in front of the wheel. She inserted the key into its slot, starting the car.
"Senna has a job, so does Auburne. There's no reason I shouldn't be able to have one," she explained to herself. She pushed her foot against the gas pedal, driving down the linear road.
"Yeah, just keep telling myself that..."

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Auburne laid lethargically in his unmade bed, unwilling to rise. The past week had held a lot of surprises for him; he had finally moved out of his parents' house the previous day, overly tired from his long day of moving furniture and appliances in. To match that, he had received a promotion in his part-time occupation as a simple cashier; he had suddenly been promoted to the local manager.
"Ugh." Auburne sighed. He tossed his covers off, rising out of bed.
"Oh, right!" he exclaimed, looking over at the clock adjacent to his bed. He had a somewhat normal-sized room, though his house matched it; it was rather average in proportions. "Today was when Senna and I were supposed to meet up with Amberlyn... She hasn't seen us in such a long time, really. I feel wrong about spying on her, but I guess it's worth it to be able to surprise her by going to where she's applying..." he said to himself, subconsciously analyzing his plan. He picked up the brush that was lying on top of as-of-yet unopened packing boxes, running it through his long, dark brown hair, straightening it. It rested over his eyes, parted slightly to the side. He walked over to the boxes, ripping them open and rummaging through them for clothing. He eventually came across his overly large grey hoodie, as well as a dark blue shirt and black jeans. Also found was a pair of plain white socks. Taking his nightclothes off, he slid the shirt on, putting the hoodie on over it, and nearly walking into his jeans as he ran out of his room, grabbing his socks and putting them on as he sped through, reaching the door after a brief run through his averagely sized house. He stepped into his shoes.
"Damn. Where the hell are my keys? It's almost time for Senna and Amberlyn to meet up, I'm gonna be late..." he sighed frustratedly, running into the den. He picked the keys up off the table, rushing out of the door and into the sun.
Auburne's hazel eyes glinted in the bright light as he jammed the keys into the car's door, hopping in and starting its ignition, driving off to his destination in a frenzy.
"I took off of work for this?"

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Senna drove down the road calmly, her dark black hair lying across her back. Her elegant bangs covered most of the side of her head, coming to the front and parting to the right, its length cutting off slightly above her shining green eyes, which stayed intent on the road, making sure not to get into an accident.
"Can't wait to see her again." Senna said, steering the car. She was never quite the happiest of her friends, being the most easily depressed, and by far the most emotional. She was definitely not a stoic. "Might brighten up my day a bit."
Her black tee absorbed the sunlight, conforming to her ample figure. As for bottoms, she wore skinny jeans, of a faded tint. Her shoes were typical tennis-shoes, nothing special, but they got the job done.
"Psh, like something could cheer me up."
 
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Amberlyn drove, her black wheels rolling across the tarred road. The sun finally completely rose, illuminating the blackened path. She turned at east at an intersection, traveling down the lengthy road until she was topped by a red light. She rested her hands on the dashboard as she waited for traffic to clear up.
"Huh." she said. Something caught her attention out of the corner of her eye. She looked up to see something descending from the clouds, slowly albeit, from the clouds. "A... star?" she whispered to herself. She placed her hands back on the wheel as the light's pigment shifted to green, pushing on the gas pedal and driving forward.
Amberlyn came to a stop, pulling up at a local thrift store. She pulled the keys out the ignition, lifting her foot from the gas pedal. After pushing the lock down, she opened the door, stepping out. She closed it behind her, lifting her keys and locking the door back with the switch on the key. Amberlyn walked from the car, heading up to the transparent glass window next to the thrift store's door.
The exterior of the store was rather poor, to say the least. There were spots of mildew covering its ceiling, the "THRIFT" sign above the door was crooked, and many of the bricks that the architecture was built with were beginning to fall out of place. Regardless, the sign in the window read, in an awful, generic, and overused font, "HELP WANTED".
"Yes!" she said to herself, smiling with glee. "Finally, I've found another place that's hiring." she finished. Amberlyn walked up to the door, pushing it open, causing a bell to chime gently.
The interior of the store didn't look markably better than the outside. The linoleum floor was tearing in many spots, leaving the lines uneven. The wallpaper lining the surrounding walls was undelightfully decaying, showing a rotting brown color instead of its intended pale yellow stripes. There was also a pungent and sickly aroma, causing an overarching feeling of sickness to enter Amberlyn's stomach. Nevertheless, many people were still shopping in the store. It had many racks of clothing, assorted by size, gender, and type, as well as gently used electronics and novels. A counter was stationed on the right side of the store, an elderly woman operating it.
"Beggars can't be choosers..." she sighed, her stomach lurching. She walked over to the counter, bearing the load of the store's uncomfortable state. Amberlyn laid her arms across the desk, crossing them. "So I heard you're looking for someone to work here?"
The aging woman blinked looking at Amberlyn. "Yes, deary. You don't look like a particularly hard worker, though..." she croaked out. Amberlyn's eyes narrowed in disappointment.
"You're really judging me by my appearance?" she replied, closing her eyes. Amberlyn lifted her hands from the desk, crossing her arms in front of her chest. She began to pace left and right, deep in thought. A plan was formulating in her mind, a way to obtain the position. "Look, give me one day here." Amberlyn said, looking over at the woman. "If I'm not satisfactory, you can fire me."
"...Okay. Nothing too awful could happen." she responded. Amberlyn's heart soared as she contained her joy, standing still. "Please handle the checkout for me while I go line up the clothes in the back room." she finished, stepping out from behind the counter. The woman walked awkwardly to the end of the room and turned into an entryway to a back room of sorts. Amberlyn quickly ran around the counter, sitting down behind the counter.
Outside of the thrift store, two cars arrived, nearly at the same time. Both of the cars' doors flew open, figures stepping out of them, one male, one female.
"Auburne!" one of the figures said, the female one.
"Senna." the other replied. Auburne and Senna walked over to the wall of the store, leaning against it.
"This the place?" Auburne asked.
"I'm pretty sure." Senna said. She gazed through the window to see Amberlyn aiding people with their purchases left and right, handling surprisingly efficiently compared to her previous work endeavors. "Yeah, it is."
"How is she going to react?" Auburne said. He thrust his hands into his hoodie's warmers, tapping his feet on the ground. "If it's nothing special, I regret taking off work."
"It will be special. You know how much she loves us." Senna replied, sighing. She looked down at the ground, before a faint sound alerted her ears. Senna looked up, as did Auburne. Their eyes quickly fixated to a falling star, which, albeit sluggishly, was descending to Earth.
"Huh. A shooting star." Auburne said. "Make a wish."
Senna turned to Auburne, flashing him a disapproving look. "Do you really think I'd do something as childish as wishing on a star?"
As the clock turned to noon, the sun hit its apex. The light began to nearly blind the two as they stood outside, facing it directly. Auburne turned, walking up to the thrift store's door. Looking back, he noticed that Senna hadn't caught up with him.
"Are you coming or not?" he asked, looking impatiently at Senna. She had her eyes closed, with her head nodded down. "Wait a minute."
"What?" she said, opening her eyes. She looked up shockedly at Auburne, who began to quietly chuckle.
"You were making a wish, weren't you?"
"No, shut up." Senna replied angrily. She walked up to Auburne in a huff, walking into the store before him. The entry chime alerted Amberlyn from her position, causing her to bring attention to the door.
"Welcome to the Lashlake County thrift store, I hope you enjoy your ti-" Amberlyn started, before she realized who had walked through the door. Her eyes widened as she stepped from behind the counter, running over to the two figures who had entered the door. She came skidding to a stop right in front of Auburne and Senna.
"Auburne! Senna!" she exclaimed, awestruckedly. "It's been over three months!"
"Nice to see you too." Senna said, looking around. "This place smells awful. How do you put up with it?"
"I don't know if I will be putting up with it, actually. I'm not positive that I even have the job. She's just seeing what I can do so far, apparently." Amberlyn replied. Senna took a look around at the damaged exterior.
"The first thing you need to do if you get hired is get this place rebuilt. Damn."
"I love your new look, Senna!" Amberlyn exclaimed.
"Thanks. You don't look too bad yourself." Senna replied.
"Okay, let's not make this into Cosmopolitan. I'm still here." Auburne retorted, wryly.
"Should we meet somewhere after I get off of work?" Amberlyn said. Her heart was nearly beating out of her chest, after not seeing the two for so long.
"How about that new-ish nightclub, The Rift?" Senna said. "Apparently they have some crazy stuff going on in there."
"Sounds fine to me." Amberlyn replied.
"I'm cool with this." Auburne said.
"Let me see when I get off..." Amberlyn added. She walked back over to the work counter, bending down. Her foot pushed a tile of linoleum under the table and across the room when she kneeled. She opened the desk's drawers, sifting through papers. "Ah. There's the employee schedule." she said, pulling it up. She blew dust off of the paper. Evidently, it hadn't been used in quite some time.
"Well?" Senna said.
"I get off at five." Amberlyn chirped. "So, see you in five hours."
"Bro, ask your boss if we can hang around while you work. It can't be too incredibly stressing for us to be here while you work the checkout." Auburne said.
"She'd be fine with it, I guess. It couldn't cause too much harm." Amberlyn said. Senna and Auburne walked up, standing next to the counter as someone approached it. Amberlyn took the materials from their hands, checking the price tags. She inputted the amounts into the register terminal, getting the final price.
"Fifteen dollars and fifty two cents." she said. The woman who had approached pulled her wallet out of her pocket, handing Amberlyn a ten, a five, and a one dollar bill. She took them, stacking them evenly and putting them into the register. The woman was rewarded with her change as she picked up the items, exiting the store.
"Looks boring as hell to me." Auburne said, blowing out of the side of his mouth. He closed his eyes, nodding his head down. He began to tap his feet.
"Trust me, if you were me, you'd take any job you could get."
"Well, I'm not hormonally driven." Auburne laughed lightly.
"Shut up." Amberlyn giggled, shoving against his shoulder.
"...I don't get it." Senna said, breaking the laughter.
Amberlyn's monotonous hours of menial labor passed rather quickly with Auburne and Senna at her side, eventually finally whittling the time down to five P.M. .
The elderly woman left the backroom finally, walking up to Amberlyn's counter. She was checking the register, as all of the shoppers had longsince left after she closed shop. Only Senna and Auburne remained.
"You seemed to do a good job, even with these distractions, deary." the woman said. "You're hired. You worked so wel today, you can have all of the profit you raked in today."
"Seriously?!" Amberlyn exclaimed in shock. She had cashed in well over seven hundred dollars from the various consumers. "Thank you so much, ma'am." she said.
"Be back here at eight A.M. tomorrow, deary." the woman added on as Amberlyn removed her payment from the register. She reached into her purse, looking for her wallet. "Oh well. Must have forgotten it." Amberlyn said, easing the money into her bra due to lack of a compartment for it. "Anyway, yes, ma'am." she replied. She left from behind the counter, exiting the door with Auburne and Senna.
"Your boss is lame." Auburne said. "She has to be like, ages old. That money you have in your hand is equivalent to her age."
"You really need to improve your jokes." Senna sighed, as the three got into their cars.
Senna rolled down her window as she started the car's ignition. "The Rift is a couple of miles east from here." she called out through the window. "Just go straight here and take a turn left when you first hit Lafeyette, it should be in plain view." she finished.
"Got it!" Amberlyn yelled out of her own window.
"Okay." Auburne replied, in the same fashion. The three rolled their windows up, pulling out of the store's driveway.
"This has been such a great day." Amberlyn sighed contently.
 
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Amberlyn, Senna, and Auburne travelled, approaching The Rift, as the setting sun painted the roads a regal burgundy. Eventually, as the sun lowered behind the horizon, leaving behind a shaded quilt of inky darkness, the three arrived separately at The Rift.
Amberlyn took her keys from the car's ignition, pushing the door open. After getting out, she locked it, standing outside of the nightclub, leaning against her car. Eventually, she caught sight of Senna and Auburne, who she ran over to.
"Well." Aurburne said. He looked up the upper front of the club, which was emblazoned with a sign labeled "THE RIFT", in all capital neon lettering. It had a small icon of a winged star next to the name, flashing in and out in many colors rapidly. "Place seems like it's already pretty damn packed." he said, gazing around at the heavy traffic of card around them. Thousands of cars were placed around the lot, causing Amberlyn to realize how lucky she was to get a parking spot.
"Huh." Senna said. "It looks pretty nice out here." she said, as the moon shone radiantly on the lot. The lights on the sign mixed well with the moonlight, creating a pathway of sorts leading to the door.
"Nice." Amberlyn said, noticing it. She lifted her back from the car, walking ahead of the other two. Auburne dug his hands into his pockets, and Senna crossed her arms as they entered the nightclub.
The interior lighting was very atmospheric; the club itself was completely black, spotlights of varying colors illuminating the floor. Trance music blasted from the blaring speakers at the front of the area. The Rift was sheerly massive, the three not being able to see the back of the room from where they were currently standing. The cheers of the crowd filled their ears as they walked up to the admission desk, erxamining their surroundings.
"Nice place you got here." Auburne remarked. He pulled his jacket's hood over his head, nodding it down and tapping his feet. "Amberlyn, you're paying." he continued. "You're the one who got so much dough today."
"We haven't seen her in months, Auburne. Do you really expect her to pay for us?" Senna asked, glaring at Auburne disappointedly.
"Well, we paid for her damn house for over two years."
"Too bad." Senna replied.
"You two, stop. I'll pay." Amberlyn sighed. She walked over to the counter, leaning over on it. "How much?" she asked the attendee.
"Three hundred per person." he said, deadpan. Auburne's eyes widened in the shadow of the hood.
"Wow." he said, shaking his head subtly. "You're jacking these people practically."
"You'll find that in a club as quality as The Rift that this money is well spent." he continued, still as monotonely as before. He glared impatiently at the three. "Pay or leave." he demanded.
"Fine." Amberlyn sighed. She pulled all of her money out of her bra, seven hundred fifty dollars. "...I don't even have enough for all of us." she said, looking down at the money. "That's insane."
"Ugh." Auburne said. He pulled out his wallet, opening it before thumbing through the money he had stored in it. He pulled out a wad of bills, tossing them to Amberlyn. She haphazardly caught them, looking down. "Should give us a total of a thousand." he continued, closing the wallet and jamming it into his back pocket. Amberlyn handed the money over to the keeper.
"Oh, this price obviously doesn't cover beverages or snacks, which are fifteen a piece." he said, flashing a wry smile. "Have fun in The Rift." he finished. The man stepped out from behind the counter, moving over to the velvet rope. He unhooked it from its side poles, allowing the three through. They walked through, Auburne sneering at the man as he entered the room. The man reconnected the poll behind the three.
"Good job Auburne, you made her blow every bit of money she earned. That's probably coming out of her check, too." Senna sighed.
"Oops." Auburne said sarcastically. He tuned Senna out, losing himself in the music
"Something seems a bit odd about how overpriced this club is." Amberlyn said. "Egh. Oh well. Guess we should try to enjoy our time here as much as we can." she finished, walking forward. Her footsteps were barely audible under the heavy beats of the music.
"Easier said than done." Senna replied. She and Auburne walked ahead, stopping under the blue light, Amberlyn stopped under the light, as well. The three loitered idly.
"I'm not exactly here to start clubbing like some kind of ghetto trash." Auburne remarked. "Don't expect me to start spanking the air like a moron."
"I know you're not a person like that, Auburne." Senna responded, laughing.
"Just experience the music, chill out." Amberlyn continued for her.
"Exactly!" Senna interjected.
"Yeah, yeah, I know." Auburne said, irritatedly. He left the area, heading for the back wall, leaving Senna and Amberlyn behind.
"Ugh, he can be such a dick sometimes." Senna sighed. She began to run, trying to catch up with Auburne. Amberlyn began to follow before being caught offguard by an arm, grabbing her by the shoulder. She turned around with the quickness of lightning, seeing a man's hand laying on her shoulder. His face was obscured by the shadows of the club; he stood barely outside of the scope of the blue light.
"Have you made your wish?" his voice struggled out. It was dark and intimidating.
"...What?"
Amberlyn looked down to see that the hand was gone, letting out a sigh of relief. Possibly, she was hallucinating from lack of sleep. She ran out of the light, chasing after Senna and Auburne, the many lights of the club shining across her face radiantly as she ran through them. She passed by floor panels of the speakers, her feet colliding with them, briefly interrupting the music with each step. She and Senna finally caught up with Auburne, who loitered against the back wall. He stood alone, sighing.
"What the hell is your problem today?" Senna asked. "You're being stupid." she said, as the song faded out. Another one began immediately afterward.
"Don't know. Don't care." he said. He turned away from Amberlyn and Senna, walking off to the eastern end of the room.
"Ugh, Auburne, wait!" Senna exclaimed. She began to chase after him again, before being stopped by Amberlyn.
"Just let him go. He can sort his stuff out on his own. Don't let him ruin your night."
"Implying it's not already ruined." Senna sighed, turning away from Amberlyn.
"Fine, if you're going to be like that, then we'll leave. I had no problem blowing all of my money because I thought we were going to have fun here, but apparently it's angst central." she retorted.
"I'll go talk to him." Senna said stubbornly. "Stay here." she finished, before walking off in Auburne's direction.
"Fine." Amberlyn called. As she stood alone in the unlit area, she started to think about the man who had grabbed her shoulder, as well as his sudden disappearance.
"My wish?" she thought to herself. "Something just doesn't line up. Maybe it really was a hallucination." she said, thinking aloud. "I've been getting a pitiful amount of sleep lately. Still happy to see Senna and Auburne, though, even if they're intent on being butthurt today." she finished, as the current song faded out. Another one blared through the speakers, causing her to cover her ears with her hands. "Good lord, so loud."

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Senna stood next to Auburne.
"You don't have to be like this." she droned. "It's not as bad as you're making it out to be."
"How would you know? You're not the one being convicted."
"Convicted?! For what?" Senna exclaimed.
"I'm being framed for ****, evidently."
"Oh, that's pleasant."
Suddenly, as the song faded out, the lights of the club went out.
"...What?" Senna heard Amberlyn call from a distance. Everyone in the club was in complete darkness.
"Night's over." the speakers blared, the counterman's voice coming through them. The speaking echoed through the room, a groan of dismay arising from the crowd. They rushed out of the club, Amberlyn, Senna, and Auburne hunting for their way out. Eventually, as the crowd faded, the light of the moon shimmered in from the open door. The three ran towards it, stopping at the velvet rope.
"Gee." Auburne said. "We spent, maybe thirty minutes here. For over nine hundred dollars. "It's a nightclub. It's not supposed to close this early."
"Tonight's a... special occasion." the man said. "Shoo."
Amberlyn, Senna, and Auburne left The Rift disappointedly. They walked towards their cars, their footsteps clattering in the dead of night.
"Gah." Auburne groaned. "I have to be in court tomorrow." he continued, reaching his car. He leaned against the hood, lifting his hood off of his head and shaking his hair. "I'd love to sit around and play twenty questions and watch chick flicks with you two," he said sarcastically, "but I have Zs to catch. See you two if I don't get falsely put in prison."
"...For what?" Amberlyn asked, unlocking her car door.
"Someone apparently thinks I ***** my supervisor. They're prob'ly just pissed that I got promoted." he said.
"Ugh. People make me mad." Amberlyn said. She got into her car, igniting it.
"Amberlyn! Mind if I stay the night at your house? It would be a nice refresher. We could catch up." Senna called out.
"Why not?" Amberlyn replied.
"Hah." Auburne said. "I was right."
Senna got in her car, igniting the engine. She closed the door, rolling down her window, as did Amberlyn in her own car.
"I'm going straight home, just follow me there." she said. She pulled on the drive gauge, putting the car into reverse. She backed up, turning towards the exit of the lot, Senna following. She put the gauge into the drive state, the two leaving the parking lot.
"Fucking hooray." Auburne said. "I can't wait for my sentence." he said pessimistically. He unlocked his car's door, sliding in and shutting it behind him.
A voice suddenly alerted him. "Have you made your wish?"
Auburne turned around startledly, looking behind him. The speaker's face was hidden by the darkness of the night.
"Yo, bro, get out." Auburne said. "I don't need any of your crazy shit."
"As you wish." the man replied, He walked away, heading back over to The Rift's entrance as the neon lettering stopped glowing.
"The hell? Why is he going back in when it's closed...?"
 
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Senna drove down the road, following the backlights of Amberlyn's car. The night seemed abnormally dark, as if it was a forced darkness. Shockingly, a light suddenly glinted from the sky, somewhat illuminating the area, albeit dimly. Amberlyn looked up through the windshield of her car, gazing at the starlit sky above. The light was revealed to be emanating from a shooting star, much like what she, Senna, and Auburne had seen earlier. Memories of the man who confronted her her in the club caused Amberlyn to contemplate making a wish on the falling star.
"....Maybe I should, afterall." she said, looking up at the descending, firey mass. "It couldn't hurt." she said, coming to a conclusion. As the two arrived at Amberlyn's home, Senna got out of her car, walking over to Amberlyn's window.
"I'll be heading in." she called, tapping on Amberlyn's window. Amberlyn rolled her window down, handing Senna the house keys.
"Go wait on the couch." Amberlyn replied. "I'll be back in shortly." she finished, rolling the window back up.
"...Okay, I guess." Senna responded. She sprinted over to the door, digging the key into the door's lock. She turned it, the mechanisms in the knob unlocking the door. She walked in, closing the door behind her with a distinctive slamming.
Back in the car, Amberlyn was sitting with her eyes closed tightly. She briefly opened them, looking out of the windshield at the black sky, making sure that the shooting star was still there. After confirming its presence, she clossed her eyes again, clasping her hands together. She mouthed a silent wish, after which, she loosened her hands and opened her eyes. Amberlyn disignited the car and slid to the side of it, pushing the door open. She closed it behind her, locking it.
Amberlyn trekked inside, her feet colliding with the walkway up to her door. She reached the storm door, grabbing it by its elegant handle and pulling it open. She opened the interior door, coming to a stop in the foyer of the house. She entered the first floor den, finding Senna sitting calmly on the couch. The den was rather large, columns lining the entryway. A somewhat large television screen was placed adjacent to a couch, which also had a coffee table in front of it. Lining the walls were pictures of Amberlyn with her family encased in elegant framing. An electric chandelier loomed over the room, providing its primary lighting.
"So, what were you doing out there?" Senna asked, looking over at Amberlyn. She threw her feet up, resting them on the coffee table. She kicked her shoes off, allowing them to land at the room's nearby exit.
"...Nothing. Nothing at all." Amberlyn chirped nervously.
"Right." Senna replied sarcastically. "If it's something you don't want me to know about, just tell me that directly. Don't worry about hurting my feelings, I'm used to it." she finished, nodding her head down. She threw her arms out to the side, stretching her joints. Amberlyn approached the couch, sitting down next to Senna.
"You really shouldn't be used to that." Amverlyn said. "Has your depression been getting any better?"
"Nope." Senna responded, closing her eyes. "No reason for it to either. Auburne drops the freaking bomb on me that he's having to go to court, on top of my home life... My parents aren't having the greatest of relations at the moment." she finished, sighing depressedly.
"You could always stay with me..." Amberlyn responded, smiling. "I obviously have the room."
"That's true... but my parents would never let me."
"That's true as well... I don't really approve of it, but you could lie to them. Tell them you were accepted for some kind of college prep program or something?"
"Maybe."
Senna stood up, stretching again. She brought her hands behind her head, extending them into the air and clasping her right wrist with her left palm, yawning. "Today's been such a rough day." she said. "If you don't mind, I'm going to take a shower. I guess I could borrow some of your clothes." she finished.
"Fine with me. Also, is it just me or did night come really quickly tonight? It's barely 7 PM and it's already pitch black..." Amberlyn asked. She rose from the couch, walking out of the den as her feet clattered against the floor, the echoes of the footsteps resounding through the large room. "I'm going to wait upstairs for you, I guess. I have nothing to do. House is clean, laundry's pretty much done, you know."
"Got it." Senna said. She left towards the same direction as Amberlyn, though opting to head to the bathroom instead of Amberlyn's bedroom.

_~*~_~*~_

Auburne was on his way home, his tires moving swiftly down the road in the dark night. He was suddenly very tired, struggling to stay awake. He had been ever since leaving The Rift.
"Ugh." he moaned. A glint of light from the sky caught his eyes. Auburne looked up, seeing a shooting star descending. "You again?" he asked, slightly easing up on the gas pedal. "That guy asked if I made my wish... Maybe he could mean wishing on this star...?" Auburne finished. He pulled into the parking lot of a nearby gas station, stopping the car. He closed his eyes, nodding his head down. He clasped his hands together, silently making a wish in the dead of the night. FInishing, he looked back up.
"That was idiotic and childish." he sighed. "Of course, it'll get that stalker dick off my back, hopefully." he finished. Auburne pressed his foot against the gas panel, pushing the drive gauge to the reverse setting. He pulled out of the gas station's parking lot, gravel sliding as it collided with the tires. He left the parking lot, sliding the gauge to the drive setting. He drove forward in the night.
Eventually, after a long drive, forcing himself to stay awake, Auburne arrived at his home, pulling up under the carport. He slid the drive gauge to its park setting, turning the key and pulling it out from the ignition. He looked at the rear-view mirror, briefly seeing a silhouette sifting in the darkness behind him before disappearing.
"What... the fuck?" Auburne asked himself. He pusehd the car door open, his hair being thrown gently by the night wind. "You still there?"
"..."
"Guess not."
Auburne pocketed his keys, heading to his side door under the carport. He dug through his pocket for the house keys, sliding them into the door's lock and turning the key. The door unlocked, slinging open. Auburne walked gently through his unlit house, stopping by the laundry room to throw his jacket off. He walked upstairs, turning into the bathroom.
Auburne's bathroom was much less spacious than Amberlyn's, being a typical resident's bathroom. It had a standard toilet, and a curtain shower, as well as a sink. Inside the shower rested a window to the outside. The floors were small and tiled with white grout.
"Showering and getting my ass in the bed..." he sighed. Auburne slung the curtain open. He lifted his shirt off, tossing it over his shoulder outside of the bathroom. He then took off his pants and underclothes, throwing them out as well. Auburne turned around, shutting the bathroom door. He entered the shower, turning its knobs and starting a steady flow of warm water. He slid the curtain closed.
Being the bathroom, all of the materials were unpacked quickly, compared to the other items that had been packed when Auburne moved into his house. Thus, Auburne lifted the bottle of shampoo, squirting a bit into his hands. He wet his hair, bringing the shampoo to his head and lathering it. After his hair had gotten substantially clean, he lowered his head, letting the water rinse out the shampoo. As he closed the shampoo's lid, he heard a collision with the window. He looked over quickly to see a pebble falling. It had evidently hit the window.
"Probably fell from the roo-" he started, before another hit the window while he was watching. He looked down to see someone tossing pebbles up.
"...That guy... from The Rift?!" he yelled. Auburne lifted his hands, opening the window. He leaned his head out, calling to the man. "What the fuck are you doing here? Get your ass the fuck out!"
"Your wish wasn't substantial..." the same dark, intimidating voice sounded from below.
"Get your punk ass out." Auburne yelled. He grabbed the new bar of soap, chucking it out of the window at the man. He caught it, throwing it back up to Auburne, who ducked under it. The soap flew out from under the curtain, hitting the back wall and colliding with the ground.
"Get out, fucking stalker!" Auburne yelled again.
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Well, fuck you!" Auburne replied angrily. He turned the water off, storming out of the shower. He picked up a towel out of one of the moving boxes nearby the door, wrapping himself in it. His wet footsteps tracked across the floor as he looked for his cell phone.

_~*~_~*~_

Senna left the shower feeling refreshed, as she dried off, leaving the bathroom. A cloud of steam arose from the room as she opened the door, wrapping her towel around her. She walked into Amberlyn's room to see a set of nightclothes laid out for her. Amberlyn sat on her bed, reading a novel.
"Oh, you're out." Amberlyn said, turning around. "As you can see, I already got your clothes for you."
"Thanks a lot." Senna replied. She dropped the towel, picking up the nightgown and putting it on. She then lifted up the towel, drying her hair off.
"I wonder how Auburne is." Amberlyn asked.
"His night is probably going pleasantly."

_~*~_~*~_

"Okay, Lashlake police. Get your asses down here and get this punk ass stalker out of my yard." Auburne said, his hair still sopping wet. He looked out the window, the man still standing outside and staring in at him.
"What do you mean, I'm not eligible for your services?"
"Is this about that stupid **** allegation."
"Yeah? Well fuck you." Auburne said angrily. He ended the call, throwing his cellphone to the table in rage. He walked over to the nearby window, pulling it open.
"I will kill you. I have a gun literally five feet away from me." Auburn said. He did indeed have a gun for self defense, but it was packed deep in moving boxes.
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Cut the fucking shit." Auburne said, deadpan. "Get OUT."
"Your wish wasn't substantial!"
"Fuck you!" Auburne screamed. He slammed the window shut, storming off to his bedroom.
"I'll have to sleep with mister fairy wish psycho haunting me. He can stay his little ass there all night for all I care." Auburne said. He sifted through packing boxes and found a pair of briefs, putting them on and climbing into his bed.
"Your wish wasn't substantial." he heard one more time.
"My ass isn't substantial."
 
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Amberlyn woke up as the sun of the morning trickled through her blinds. The previous night featured Senna sleeping on the couch, thus she had her bed to herself. Amberlyn stood, stretching, before heading over to her room's door. She turned the knob, opening the door and exiting the room. Her groggy footsteps collided with the floor, creating soft footsteps. She turned, walking down the two sets of stairs and into the den to see that Senna was gone. However, she had left the gown that Amberlyn had lent her laying on the couch. Amberlyn walked over to the nightgown, picking it up. She folded it, then housing it under her arm and heading up to the laundry room, depositing it there.
"Huh. She must have left for work, I guess." Amberlyn sighed. She looked over at the clock.
"Eight A.M... Damnit... I'm late for work." she sighed. "Not enough time for a shower, either."
Amberlyn ran upstairs into her room, quickly shifting through drawers and drawers of clothes before coming to a suitable outfit for her job, a white v-neck and a pair of shorts. She quickly stripped of her gown, putting on the other clothes. She ran over to her dresser, rummaging through her drawers for her brush. Finding it, she brushed her hair straight, running out of the room after obtaining her purse.
Amberlyn came to a halt at the door, slipping her shoes on, and running out into the morning. The sun wasn't yet completely risen, She pulled her car keys out of her purse, digging them into the side of the car door. She turned them, flinging the door open and practically dashing into the seat. She slammed the door closed, igniting the car and slamming on the gas pedal, gradually lowering to fit the speed limit. She drove through town quickly, though trying her best to drive lawfully, eventually arriving at the thrift store. She pulled the keys out of the car and pushed the door open, slamming it behind her and locking the door. She ran into the store, stopping to rest at the entrance, her hands on her knees.
Amberlyn recovered, looking up at the clock on the adjacent wall.
"Eight ten... I guess I did good, considering I only woke up ten minutes ago..." she sighed. She walked over, stepping behind the counter and staring absentmindedly around the store as she awaited the influx of customers. After a couple of minutes of silence, her manager walked into the front of the store from the back room.
"Late. Ten minutes. That's ten dollars out of your paycheck."
"Ugh."
The first customer walked through the door, leading way to more and more entering, the store practically becoming a bustling metropolis in scale. Amberlyn checked her customers out tiredly, handing them their items and sorting money.
"Not exactly the easiest thing to do after a sleepless night... but it's better than rocket science, I guess." she thought to herself as she rang up countless articles of clothing and aging video tapes.
"This is going to be a long day..."

_~*~_~*~_

Auburne arose from his bed, glancing over at the alarm clock next to his bed.
"Hearing starts at ten A.M., it's eight thirty. Alarm's supposed to go off at nine. I am officially ahead of schedule." he said triumphantly. He turned around, checking out of his window. Surely enough, the same man was still standing in Auburne's yard, under a tree, so his face was still excused.
"Morning. Your wish wasn't substantial." he called.
"...This is going to be a long day." Auburne said. He stood, walking over to his closet. Opening it, he sifted through layers of clothes, eventually coming to a button-up white dress shirt. He unhooked it from its wire hanger, gently sitting it on the base of his bed. He also came to black dress-pants, doing the same to them. He bent down, scanning his shoes until he found a suitable pair of dark brown dress-shoes. He lifted them up, sitting them alongside his clothing on the bed.
Auburne walked over to his window, opening it. He leaned his head out.
"You can stay out there all you want, you know. I'm done."
"Fine with me. Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Okay, cool."
Auburne slammed his window shut, walking to his door. He turned the knob, exiting the carpeted room into the hallway. He walked down it tiredly, coming to the bathroom. He stepped in, closing the door behind himself. Auburne tossed his clothes off before stepping in the shower and adjusting the water to his liking. The calming water hit his tense back, He began to bathe as a droning call entered his ear, repeating.
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
Auburne grew more irritated with each call, still opting to ignore it. The man would eventually get tired of harrassing him. He had to.
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
Auburne cringed each time the phrase was uttered, as he grabbed a cloth from the cloth rack at the end of his shower. He glid the cloth across his body, washing himself into cleanliness.
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Your wish wasn't substantial."
"Youe wish wasn't substantial."
Auburne finally gave up, turning to the window. He pulled it open, soap dripped off of his body as he leaned out of the window into the chilling morning.
"Here's a suggestion, shut the fuck up!" he yelled, slamming the window closed. He reached for the cloth rack, putting his cloth up. He stepped out of the shower after turning the water off, closing the curtain behind him, obtaining a towel from the box of towels he had yet to unpack and drying himself off. He tossed the used towel into the laundry room as he headed into his own room to clothe himself. He slid the shirt over his head, buttoning it tight. He slid on the dress-pants, zipping and buttoning them. He walked over to his closet, pulling out a belt and a pair of socks. He looped the belt through the straps of the pants, tightening it and sliding the pin through the leather's tight hole. He sat on his bed, sliding his socks onto his feet before putting his shoes on. Auburne stood, walking back into the bathroom. Auburne looked in the mirror, remembering he still had to dry his hair.
Auburne left the bathroom, searching through moving boxes and moving boxes until finally finding the hair drier. He carried it into the bathroom, plugging it into a nearby outlet. The hot air flew through the grate at the center of the drier's tube, gradually getting warmer. Auburne dried his hair, using the mirror as guidance for the clean and formal style he rarely used.
"Looking good, I guess." he said. "It's best to look very presentable when you're going to a freaking **** hearing."
Auburne turned the hair drier off, unplugging and carrying it out of the bathroom and dropping it on his bed. He searched through more boxes before coming across his comb, straightening his hair. Auburne dropped the comb on the face of the box it had been retrieved from, walking through his hallway. He retrieved his car keys off of the table next to his door and left out of the door to his car, opening its door and getting in.
"And thus, I left on my journey to go to jail for no reason, knowing this town's shitty legal system."

_~*~_~*~_

Amberlyn had assumed Senna was at work, though she was completely wrong,. Senna's parents had come during the middle of the night, forcing her to return home to the constant chaos of the bickering couple.
Senna laid in the center of her bed, crying into one of her pillows as her parents griped at eachother about minor details, as well as complaining about the way she behaved.
"Your daughter is such a shame."
"My? Don't you mean ours?"
"I'm ashamed to have her as my daughter. All she does after getting home for her piddly job is lock herself up in her room and cry."
"Gee, I wonder why?!" Senna called out from her door, returning to crying.
"At least she's not in jail like the hoodlums around the neighborhood."
"She hangs out with the hoodlums. That punk Auburne is apparently going to a hearing because he supposedly ***** someone. Kids like him are the reason why the nation's jails are so overcrowded. He should die, along with the rest of them. He's a pathetic excuse for a person."
Senna, hearing this, stood. She walked through her spacious room, sprinting downstairs. She ran up to her father.
"Don't talk about Auburne like that, you bastard!" she yelled.
"Don't talk back to me!" he exclaimed, raising his voice. He drew back, striking Senna across the face. She stepped back, an enormous red mark forming across her face.
"Don't hit her!" Senna's mother yelled.
"I'll hit you too!"
Senna retreated upstairs to the hallway, a weeping mess. She opened the linen closet, pulling out a towel and washcloth, stepping into the bathroom, her wound beginning to sting sharply.
"And... I have to go to work like this..." she sobbed, softly. She undressed, throwing her clothes violently into the corner of the room, stepping into the shower and turning the water on.
"...I hate life..." she sobbed, her tears falling to the floor of the shower like the faucet's water. "Sometimes I don't think it's worth it to keep going." she sighed, dragging the tips of her fingers gently across her wound.
She stood still, crying in the shower, until she had no more time. She slowly picked up the bottle of shampoo, dripping a portion of it into her hands. She lifted her hnds to her head, latheting up her dull, sopping black hair, Senna rinsed the water from her hair, before picking up the soap from its rack. She lathered it against the cloth, glidng the cloth across her wet body, dropping it into the floor of the shower when she finished. She rinsed her figure off, soap sinking into the drain. She gave a heavy exhale as she turned the water off, thinking of an excuse for the huge handprint across her face. Senna stepped out of the shower into her modestly sized bathroom, drying off with her selected towel. She stepped out of the bathroom solemnly, hearing that the argument downstairs was still happening. She depressedly walked to her room, digging through her closet. She pulled out her underclothings as well as a plain white shirt and faded jeans. She searched through the closet for her jacket, laying all of her obtained clothes across the foot of her bed. She strapped her bra on, sliding her underclothing up from the bottom of her legs. She pulled the tee over her head, putting on, zipping, and buttoning her pants last. She slid her arms into the black jacket, zipping it up partially, stopping slighly above chest level. Senna pulled out a pair of plain black socks, puting them on and finally stepping into a pair of tennishoes.
She turned around, looking into the mirror in the corner of her room. The wound's size had somewhat reduced from its initial size, though it still took up a fairly large portion of her face.
"Yet another day in this pain..." she sighed. Senna opened the door and left her room, going downstairs quietly, walking past the ongoing argument to the table in the den. She lifted her purse from it, sliding it around her arm after withdrawing her car keys from it.
Senna stepped outside, walking past her mother and father's cars to her own, opening the door and getting in, sliding the key into the ignition.
"Fuck it. I'm staying with Amberlyn or Auburne tonight. Somehow..."
 
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Auburne drove down the road, the yellow markings mixing with the black tar as he nearly broke the speed limit on his way to the courthouse. Suddenly, he came to an unexpected halt in the center of an intersection.
"...Kidding me, right?"
Auburne twisted the keys in the ignition, the metal ring around them jingling quietly. The car refused to crank as traffic circled around him, angry looks being shot at him from every direction. "God damnit..." he sighed, moving over to the right seat to open the door closest to the roadside. The door gave a frail squeak and refused to budge. Auburne groaned, nodding his head down. He looked up, seeing the closed sunroof above him. He lifted his hand above his head, pressing the sunroof's "open" button. The sunroof slowly chugged along, opening at its own, hideously slow pace. Auburne ripped the keys out of the ignition angrily and pushed the sunroof open with his hands. He grabbed the ledge of the open sunroof, hoisting his torso up and exiting the car. He placed his foot on the slightly exposed end of the sunroof, pushing it back closed. He gave a quick leap, landing alongside the car. He hugged the trunk of the car, pulling it slowly over to the roadside. He stopped, panting. Auburne wiped the sweat from his brow as he ducked down on the grass, rolling under the car. Looking in the undercarriage, the radiator had been replaced with a small charm of sorts.
"The fuck?" Auburne reached up, gripping the charm and pulling it from the car's undercarriage. He backed himself out from under the car. He held it up to the rising sun, examining the texture. It seemed to be engraved with a few words, though a couple were faded. Running his hands along the imprints, Auburne made out the words "Soresa" and "wish" on the star.
"Ugh, probably something by that fucking stalker. I'll just leave the car here and walk to the courthouse, it's not that far 'till I'm there..." Auburne sighed. "I'm completely positive it's gonna get towed." Auburne looked around, checking the surrounding areas. There was a bustling mall to his right, and a bordering, small neighborhood to his left.
"I guess I could push it to the mall's lot...?" he sighed. Looking over, he checked the electronic sign leading into the lot.
"...What?! Nine thirty A.M.... The hearing starts at ten... No fucking time to push it." Auburne pocketed his keys and the star and quickly dashed along the path to the courthouse. With each nearing step, he saw a figure standing at the side of the road, eventually making it out to be the same man who had been outside of his house.
"No time for you, fag." Auburne called. continuing his sprint. The man looked at Auburne's pocket, seeing the star shaped bulge in his pants jingling back and forth with each step. He gave a smirk, looking back up at Auburne.
"You'll thank me later."
"No, I won't, good day sir." Auburne yelled back as he passed. He ran mindlessly on the left side of the road, noticing that the traffic around him had greatly lowered in density. As Auburne reached the courthouse's parking lot, he came skidding to a stop, hands on knees and panting.
"Hold it!" a voice cried. Auburne was caught off guard as he was struck from the side, seeing a young man standing in front of him. He held the star charm, tossing it in the air and catching it repeatedly. "Just who do you think you are with this?"
"Just who do you think you are?"
"I'm one of the Soresa agents. This star... is the key to preventing our apocalypse."
"Soresa? The hell? That children's story... is true?" he said, thinking back to a story his mother used to tell him at bedtime.
"Of course. Why else would you have been stalked by Lucas?"
"...Lucas? That 'wasn't substantial' guy?" he said in a mocking tone.
"Of course," the young man said again, tossing the star up one more time before pocketing it.
"...You're not getting that star." Auburne said, a sudden feeling of anger intruding him. He rushed at the young man with a quick punch. He stepped out of the way, laughing.
"Heh. If you're gonna fight, I might as well give you a chance." he chuckled. The boy sifted through his pocket, pulling out a gun and tossing it to Auburne.
"Thought I would need this, but you need it more."
"Don't make me your equal." Auburne said, still in a tone that didn't feel exactly his own. He pulled the trigger, a bullet hurdling out of the chamber, leaving smoke as it traveled toward the boy. He rolled out of the way, laughing. Standing up, the boy thrust his arm out, seemingly disappearing.
"...Gone?"
Auburne was struck in the back of the head, collapsing to the ground on his knees. Auburne kicked himself up, knocking the unknown boy down.
"Not today." Auburne said. He grabbed the gun by its front, swiftly beating the young man with the base. The young man eventually caught the base, pulling. Auburne was flung from one end of the lot to the other, skidding until he kicked off of a speed bump, getting back on his feet.
"Name's September. Don't give me any reason to continue."
"Give me the damn star back and you can go. I have a bit over ten minutes to get into this fucking hearing and there's no need for you to hold me up any further."
"Is someone mad?" September said, tossing the gun back to Auburne, who caught it.
"Let's start this up!" September laughed, pulling the star out and tossing it up and down.
"No, let's end it." Auburne said sharply. He pulled the trigger again, successfully hitting September's hand. September yelled out in pain, as he threw the star into the air. Auburne quickly rushed over, the star landing in his hand. Auburne blew the smoke from the gun, as September calmed.
"...Fine. I accept it. You win, today. Of course, you won't when you're on their team."
"...What?"
"Hahahaha..."
September closed his eyes, pocketing his hands into his jeans. Auburne hadn't really taken a look at his attire, but he wore clothing identical to the "stalker" who had just been revealed as Lucas.
"That was the biggest detour ever." Auburne said. He turned, walking into the lobby of the courthouse before stopping to rest. He pocketed the charm, not giving any thought as to why he actually fought for it. If he had just let September take it, he would have never had to deal with any of their business again.
"Feh." Auburne sighed, sitting down. "Another two hours of hell."

_~*~_~*~_

Amberlyn boredly checked out item and item, her eyelids drooping. with baggage to her cheekbone to match.
"Uh, hello?" an impatient voice sighed. Amberlyn looked over to see a woman tapping her foot impatiently. "I asked you about two minutes ago to ring this up."
"Ugh... Damnit." Amberlyn snatched the purchases from the woman, ringing them up and sliding them across the counter into a bag. She drowsily lifted the bag up, handing it to the woman.
"Are you stoned or something?" the woman sighed.
"Have a good day." Amberlyn said starkly, ignoring the woman's remark. She walked out of the door, the chime clattering. "...bitch." she said sharply, when the woman was out of earshot. Amberlyn continuously rang up items, sighing harder with each checkout.
"This is worse than not having a job. I get demeaned by my customers, I'm bored out of my mind..." Amberlyn exhaled, closing her eyes. She began to doze off. Another customer approached, causing her to abruptly open her eyes.
"Sleeping on the job? Awful." the man said. He slapped down Amberlyn's hand.
"Who the hell do you think..." Amberlyn started, her hand shaking. "...The customer's always right. Guess I am awful." she said, grabbing the man's purchases and ringing them up.
"Thank you. I guess a slut like you was up all night with your donor?"
"...It's sixteen fifty."
The man selfishly grabbed his purchases after handing Amberlyn an exact amount of money.
"I don't want any change from you hands. It's bad enough that you had to touch my stuff."
"Have a good day, assho- ...Sir."
A man walked into the store, wearing shades and a business suit.
"Lucy." he called. Suddenly, Amberlyn's boss barrleed out of the back room.
"Good job putting this one to the test. Nobody's let up on her at all."
"Well, the sign outside says not to hold back your vulgarity, David."
"Considering you're just a low subsidiary in our chain, I'm surprised how well that worked, though."
"What are you even talking about?" Amberlyn called from behind the counter.
"Oh, hello, tyke. You can call me David." he laughed, extending his hand. Amberlyn refused to shake it.
"So, you're the ones behind me being a stoned bitch-whore-slut?" Amberlyn said.
"Not exactly. We didn't write the insults." David replied. "But, yes, you've been put to the test. Every employee in this chain of stores that I own is put to it. Let's just say you didn't do very well."
"Let me guess. fired?"
"Yep. However, I'll be your... 'mentor' I guess you could call it? I'll be helping you find another job."
"Good luck with that." Amberlyn said. "I've been sot down at least fifty times."
"Are you trying to push yourself forward as some kind of yuppie? Because you're not. Just accept it, you're a regular girl, just like I'm a regular man."
"Where did you get that idea?" Amberlyn sighed.
"Resumès." the man laughed. He pulled a couple of sheets of paper out of his pocket, unfolding them. He smoothed their wrinkled creases. "Let's see what you've got here! 'Highly skilled in this area'. Hah." He shuffled the papers, reading from another. "You've left out a bunch of flaws from these. You can't stay awake for shit, you can be a huge bitch even though the customer's always right, and you're overall a bad worker. Maybe you can use your good qualities to get a job as a personal escort."
"Hahaha, no." Amberlyn irritatedly laughed, kicking the inside of the counter while biting her lower lip.
"Well, to tell you the truth, you have no good qualities that could pay off in work. Any glints are overwritten by your huge-ass faults."
"Nobody's perfect." she said, continuing to hold her tongue.
"Then you need to get perfect! You know how I said I was regular? I lied." David said arrogantly. "Now, come, come. I have some jobs that you could get even if you were some kind of dead horse." he said, reaching behind the counter. He grasped Amberlyn's sleeve, pulling her out of the shop as she actively resisted his force.

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Senna wiped the tears from her eyes as she arrived at the parking lot. Pulling the keys from the ignition, she pulled the door's handle, stepping out of the car and closing the door behind her.
"I'm done with home." she said, pocketing her keys and locking the car door. "Working at a hair salon gives me plenty of ways. 'Accidental' scissor accident, burning myself to death with a hairdryer..."
Senna shook her head, walking through the door to the salon and heading over to her workspace as she crossed the main floor and headed to the employee room.
"Oh, Senna, you're here." a voice called.
"Yes, yes, Ashley, you don't have to inform me each and every time I walk through the door."
"A note from an 'Auburne Hails" has arrived for you. He says to meet with Amberlyn and himself outside of The Void after work."
"Well, they'll have to wait." she sighed. "Forever." she said under her voice.

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Amberlyn's phone rang as she sat in the back seat of David's car, being carted around town.
"Hello, Lashlake's only bitch-whore-slut here."
"...The hell, Amberlyn?"
"Oh, hey, Auburne. How did the hearing go?"
"I'm being fined five thousand dollars in emotional damages to the woman's family, but they've decided on the spot after testimonies that I shouldn't go to jail."
"Good."
"Meet Senna and I outside of The Void when you get off work."
"Can't. Some self-proclaimed deity is dragging his arrogant self around town with me. I got fired because I didn't pass a quality test, so he's trying to find me a job. Not wihout degrading me, though."
"It's not degrading, it's an inverted compliment!" David called.
"Whatever, I'll see you when I can." Amberlyn said. She hit the 'off' button on the phone and leaned back, staring at the ceiling of the car.
 
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Auburne stood impatiently, flipping through pictures on his cellphone. Pictures of himself, pictures of himself with Senna and Amberlyn, pictures of the other two together and by themselves. Out of five hundred photos taken, photos with the three of them made up at least four hundred. Auburne pocketed his phone, leaning against the wall of the courthouse.
"All that's done, all I need to get is a fucking car again so I can actually be at The Void. Then again, only Senna will be there..." He stopped leaning on the edge of the courthouse's building, pulling the star charm out of his pocket.
"...Soresa, huh?" he said to himself, sliding his fingers across the ingraved words. "I wonder what's going on recently." he sighed. Sliding the charm back into his pocket, he walked back into the courthouse.
"Can I use a phone here, or something?" he asked, tapping his foot. "Car's goofed, I need someone to come and install a new radiator." he said, stepping across the warmly lit room to the rug in front of the receptionist's desk.
"Fine, whatever." she said. "For some weird reason, our land lines have been acting up. Take this." the receptionist at the desk said. She tossed Auburne her phone. He caught it in his palm. It was an older phone, thus it was a 'flip phone'. He flipped the top open, tapping the numbers with the tips of his fingers before holding it up to his right ear and leaning back on the wall.
"'Ey, Alex."
"Auburne? Haven't heard your voice in ages." a voice responded.
"Get down to the corner of Laces Avenue and Berrybush Mall, I need some of your mechanical expertise. Some freak replaced my radiator with a friggin' star charm."
"Haha, what? How did it even run for longer than a minute?"
"Don't ask me."
"Okay, I'll be there."
"A'ight." Auburne replied. He closed the phone, tossing it backwards through the air back at the receptionist. She barely caught it, almost fumbling and dropping it. Auburne walked outside, running out of the courthouse's lot and heading to the corner where he had left the nonfunctional car.

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"So." a voice chirped.
"I failed to obtain the Negositive Star, sir."
"For the love of Christ. Did Lucas's team influence him?"
"Possibly. Evidently Lucas has been stalking him. Maybe he's trying to add another to his team?"
"It wouldn't hurt. He only has himself and the Ascetic."
"Who is this game's Ascetic, sir?"
"Learn yourself. The cutoff date for the game is almost here. Not counting today, you have five days. September, I give up. your team is Senna and Renee."
"Renee? Ugh, I'm not doing the game with that trash."
"Do you want Soresa to flourish?"
"Nope."
"Then deal with it."
"Fucker."
"Don't back sass me."
"What'll happen if I do, huh? You got a problem?"
"Shut it."

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David closed his phone, looking back at Amberlyn.
"Well, that's five places that have completely shot you down. No application, no nothing."
"Shut... Ugh."
"Hey, bitch-whore-slut, twist that frown upside down!"
"There's something of yours I'd like to twist upside down right about now." Amberlyn replied.
"Harsh. Let's just stop for today. That guy said you need to meet him at The Void, right?"
"Oh, gee. You're actually letting me stop. I guess one of my flaws is that is that I don't want to look for work all day."
"Yep."
Amberlyn sighed, slamming her elbow against the car's dusty glass window. slouching in her seat. David drove down the grainy road, rolling closer to Amberlyn's house with each turn of the tire.
"...Wait. How do you even know where I live?"
"...Lucky guess?" David replied.
"Good enough for me. I don't even want to bother right now. I have to get ready for tonight at The Void..."
Amberlyn clicked the small lock, pushing the door's blackened handle and stepping out of the car, the grass crunching under her feet as she collided with the ground. She turned around at Davd's car, to speak.
"Screw off, I don't need your help, okay?" Amberlyn said.
"Yes you do. I'll be back tomorrow, ok--"
"No."
"--ay, see you th--"
"Are you even listening to me?"
"--en!"
David closed the back car door and pulled off, cranking his radio's volume to the highest amount it could reach.
"Hey, you."
Amberlyn was caught offguard by a gunshot from behind her, ducking to dodge it quickly.
"..."
Amberlyn turned around deftly to see a girl standing behind her with a smoking gun.
"Heh. Nice reaction time! 0.41304 milliseconds." the voice chirped. Its owner stood, dark, long brunette hair covering her head and going somewhat into her eyes. The hair was slightly highlighted with dirty blonde. "Name's Renee."
"What's your reason for trying to kill me?"
"You're on the other team, stupid."
"Team...?" Amberlyn stood, looking at Renee confusedly.
"So, what are you waiting for? Fight me. You have 0.9583 seconds to make your decision."
"..."
"Too slow!"
Renee pulled the trigger, a bullet flying from the chamber towards Amberlyn. She rolled out of the way, panting in the grass.
"I can keep this up for approximately 76% more of the day, you know." Renee said. Exhaling heavily, Amberlyn barely caught her breath fast enough to dodge another bullet. However, Renee didn't stop after simply one shot this time. She continued firing, Amberlyn panickedly sprinting. She rolled into her home's back yard, standing up at the fence and panting heavily.
"No way to defend myself. Just great." she said, before having to sidestep another bullet from Renee, who stood near, her clothing, similar to Lucas and September's unbeknowest to Amberlyn, flowing in the wind.
"Your life has 0.1 seconds left. Submit and die already!" Renee yelled. She fired at Amberlyn, a bullet piercing her calf. Blood spewing, and eventually transitioning to a seep, Amberlyn collapsed to the ground, unable to move. She winced in pain as she reached for her phone in her pocket.
"Nuh-uh-uh." Renee said. She pulled the trigger, shooting Amberlyn in the hand. The bullet lodged between two bones, causing Amberlyn to scream in pain. Renee walked over, kneeling next to her.
"Damn. If it went through, it would have caused 15% more pain to you."
"Senna... Auburne..."
"Well, gee. I see you're familiar with some of your opponents and allies."
"..."
Amberlyn fainted from blood loss.

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As she finished a cut for a consumer, Senna picked up the scissors and carried them through the salon into the employees' bathroom. She stared at the mirror, holding the scissors up to her neck.
"..."
She was interrupted by a gunshot from the doorway, the scissors taking the blow and flying across the room.
"What the fuck?" Senna said. She looked up to see a man standing at the door, a gun by his side.
"My name is Lucas."
"No, screw your name. Kill me."
"...You're going to make it that easy?"
 
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Senna stood openly, waiting for the bullet to pierce her. She refused to fight back, not seeing a reason to. Every option she had was overwritten by another action. If she returned home, she would simply be bombarded by her parents. If she opted to stay with Amberlyn or Auburne, they would pick her up. If she ran away, she would starve or thirst to death, and if not that, she would still be found by her parents.
"Go on. Why aren't you shooting?" Senna replied, her voice dulling. "Can't you see I don't want to be here?"
"...That's simply unfair. The rules of the game state that each elimination must be marked by a battle. You're basically saying 'I quit'."
"Screw this 'game', or whatever.. What if I quit, though? I'm not in the mood for this. Cut the talk, get to the killing."
"Put up a fight. I don't care if you just don't try, you still have to fight."
"Whatever you say." Senna said. She stepped back, Lucas closing the door behind him and locking it.
"Heh. I knew I could get you to fight." Lucas said snarkily. He rushed at Senna, who allowed herself to be hit by the tackle. Lucas brandished a knife, holding it at Senna's throat.
"Are you even going to attempt to look like you're fighting back?"
"Nope."
Lucas tossed the knife away, allowing it to slide under the bathroom door. As someone approached the door, they saw the knife slide out and between their feet.
"...Senna? You're in there?" Ashley said, standing at the door. She touched the knob, attempting to twist it. "...Locked... Senna, come out."
"Heh." Lucas said, from inside the door. "She's not coming out."
"...Who the hell... are you?"
"Forget you heard me," Lucas replied. He stood, walking over to the door. He opened it, staring Ashley down. "Or, would you prefer to die along with her?"
"...I... I saw nothing."
"Good job!" Lucas exclaimed. He turned Ashley around, nudging her forward before walking back into the bathroom and locking the door behind him. "Now, where were we? Oh, that's right, we weren't anywhere, because you refuse to cooperate." Lucas said. He walked across the tiled floors, his footsteps echoing across the room before he reached Senna, kneeling down. He grabbed her by the shoulders, lifting her to her feet.
"If you're going to do that, I could just not fight you."
"Fine. I'll please your ambitions. Don't act like you're changing my mind, though. Your death won't stop my own." Senna replied, giving in. She ran over to a mirror, prompting Lucas to give a swift punch. She ducked, causing him to miss and shatter the mirror. Ducking and covering herself from the descending glass, Senna lifted a sizable shard and stabbed Lucas in the thigh. He yelped, turning around and wincing before kicking at Senna, who rolled out of the way to behind his back. She delivered a stab to his arm after standing.
"Nice... You're more adept than one would think." Lucas laughed, turning around.

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Auburne stood with Alex at the car, looking at its side. Alex, clothed in a red hoodie and blue jeans, kneeled down. His black hair drifted with the wind.
"Ugh. Radiator really IS gone." Alex sighed. He stood back up, walking over to the front of the car, popping the hood up with his elbow. He walked over to his own car, pulling a new radiator out of the trunk and slamming it shut. He walked over to Auburne's car, holding the radiator under his arm. Dropping it on the ground, he turned to Auburne. "How the hell did you get into this situation, honestly?"
"Don't ask me. I have as little of a clue as you."
"Okay, okay, whatever." Alex said, laughing. He pushed his glasses up, lifting the radiator and sliding it under the hood. Auburne turned around as Alex began to install the radiator, beginning to tap his foot. "Why has everything been so whack lately?" he said, squinting hard and bringing his palm to his face."
"Done." Alex said. He walked over to his own car, removing a jug of water from his trunk and walking back over to Auburne's car and lifting the radiator cap. Alwx lifted the cap from the radiator, opening the jug and turning it slightly. The water dripped out gently, transitioning to a pour as he dumped it into the radiator.
"There. Should work." Alex chimed. Auburne walked over to the car, withdrawing his keys from his pocket and turning the lock. He sat in the car, scooting over to the driver's seat and cranking it. It started automatically, with no issues.
"I've locked the radiator down," Alex said. "to prevent more stealings. If you need the key, call me. It's not wise to keep it near you."
"Got it." Auburne replied. He backed off of the impasse, driving on towards his house to prepare for his trip to The Void.

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"Why the hell did Lucas do that?"
"Dunno. Probably just to fuck around with Auburne, though. He wouldn't be there to hinder him, since they're on the same team. Auburne's wish was insubstantial, though." September said.
"I mean, the radiator."
"Likely the same reason. But, still, Auburne only wished for Lucas to 'leave him the hell alone'."
"Heh. They'll be starting the game for real, soon enough."
"Sir, please, who is this game's Ascetic?"
"Don't bother asking again, September. I'm not telling you."

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Renee kicked over Amberlyn's unconscious body, giggling lightly as she knelt next to it.
"Damn, is she dead already? That unbalances her team before the game has even properly started. All that's left is Auburne and Lucas..." Renee pressed her head against Amberlyn's heart, checking for a beat. "Well, huh. She's not dead yet. What a surprise!" she exclaimed. "Surprising, for real, actually. She had about a 90% chance of death after that much blood loss."
Amberlyn's eyes barely opened as she staggered to her feet in front of Renee, swaying left and right.
"Ugh..." Amberlyn said. She began to walk slowly before remembering her injury. It struck with pain as she pressed her foot down, prompting her to kneel down and clutch it, inhaling through her teeth. Her ruffled blonde hair unevenly through the air as she limped through the yard.
"Fine, I'll back off. You're 30% more pathetic right now." Renee sighed. She turned around, retreating from the area as Amberlyn approached her back door.
"Ugh... I..."
She staggered to the center of the den before the frontdoor bursted open. Senna emerged from the orange tinted exterior and entered the home, slightly battered.
"...Amberlyn! You too?!"
"...What...?" Amberlyn said, clutching her calf as the blood finally subsided. She limped over to the couch, sitting down.
"You were assaulted too... Is Auburne okay?"
"I.. I hope so. He called..." Amberlyn stopped for a moment to adjust her position. "...Earlier... Asking if we could go to The Void."
"I got out of my fight without many problems, but damn. you got annihilated..."
"I'm not much of a fighter."
"Isn't that apparent? Anyway, after we get back from The Void, in the case that you can and still want to go, we should probably call the police..."
"...Yeah..." Amberlyn said. She stood, losing her balance for a moent before heading to the stairs. "I'll be taking a shower so we can go..."
"Okay." Senna said, as Amberlyn walked up the stairs awkwardly. Senna walked over to the couch.
"...Do I have the time...?" she asked herself.
"...Not here. No." she finished, looking up at the ceiling. "It's already bad enough that I'll be hurting them like this. Maybe I could tell the police about my situation...? ...No, then mom and dad would be at my throats about that. Doesn't matter if they're apprehended, they'll make me pay somehow... I'm trapped."
"No way out."
 
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Auburne stood outside of The Void, tapping his left foot on the now shaded concrete. The sun was beginning to set, coloring the horizon with a clean orange, mixed with reds and yellows.
"The hell is taking Senna so long...? Did she get into a fight too? Maybe Amberlyn will show up too..." he sighed, continuing tapping his foot. Auburne nodded his head down, leaning against the hood of his car.
Suddenly, a pair of cars pulled up together, Senna and Amberlyn's.
"Huh." Auburne said, parting his hair from his eyes. Standing from the car, he walked over to the two cars with loud footsteps as the sun finished setting. It rested behind the horizon, the moon coming out to watch over in its own shift. Amberlyn and Senna both protruded from their car doors before stepping out into the night. "Ugh, you guys look awful." Auburne said, looking down at Amberlyn's calf as she walked over to him. "And you're walking weird too. The fuck is up?"
"We got ambushed, Auburne." Senna sighed. "I was attacked by some guy named Lucas, and according to Amberlyn, she was attacked by Renee." Senna said, pulling her phone from her pocket and checking her text messages.
"Damn, you too? I was attacked by a guy named September." Auburne replied, looking up from Amberlyn's calf. "Think there's any chance of these attacks being connected?"
"99.9% chance." a voice called from far away. Amberlyn immediately recognized Renee's voice, turning around. "Now, now, calm down." Renee said, approaching the three as Auburne and Senna turned around. "I'm not here to fight." she continued, stopping in front of them. "At least, not yet." she finished, falling into a slanted posture.
"...Fine. Then what is it?" Amberlyn said, dropping the tension from her bones and relaxing.
"Amberlyn, is this...?" Senna started.
"Yep." Amberlyn finished for Senna, still staring at Renee.
"Hey. blackette. Over there." Renee said. "You're on our team."
"...Huh?" Senna asked, her eyes narrowing.
"In the game, silly."
"I'm sick of hearing about this game, tell me what the hell it is." Auburne said.
"Hee hee. How about next time?"
"Ugh..." Auburne moaned. "Fine." he finished, turning his back to Renee as she walked off.
"Oh, yeah, to cover tonight's fee..." Renee said. "Twelve hundred dollars and fifty two cents." she said, tossing a wallet full of bills at Auburne. He caught it, opening it.
"...Thanks...?" Auburne said, confusedly as Renee faded out of vision into the inky night.
"...Don't ask me." Senna said. She leaned back, propping her foot against the hood of her car. "This is a bit too much for coincidence. Plus, Renee mentioned otherwise." Senna said, looking up at the moon. "I think we should try to get down to the bottom of this, eventually. First things first, when we get home, each of us has to call the police. Report our assailants' name and appearances."
"Right." Amberlyn said. "Weird, though. Why would Renee have a reason to help us...?"
"I don't know. We'll find out soon enough, I guess..." Senna said. Auburne walked forward, heading to the entrance of The Void, with Senna and Amberlyn following. Upon entering and paying their admission to the same attendee as their previous visit, he pulled the velvet ropes to the side yet again, but this time, a different situation arose.
"Come along, you three. We have a special area for people who have given this much money in such a short amount of time." he said. Grabbing Amberlyn and Senna by the shoulders, he guided the two through the dark, open floor as Auburne followed from behind, making sure not to lose track of the three in the darkness. Eventually, the four of them reached a small door. Its paint was gradually peeling off, leaving raw wood showing next to the white surface.
"In you go." he said, opening the door. He slid the two in, Auburne following. "You'll know what to do when you're inside."
"We will...?"
The door was slammed on them, leaving them in a tiny room with only a staircase leading down.
"Yeah, obviously we will know what to do... because. literally, there's only one thing we can do." Auburne said snarkily. "Do you really want to risk heading down there, though?"
Senna reached behind her, attempting to open the door, to no avail.
"It's locked from the outside, Auburne. We have to." Senna replied. She walked over to the staircase, dropping her hand across the smooth guardrails and heading down into the untold darknesses that waited below. Auburne did the same, and finally, Amberlyn followed suit. The staircase was especially long, taking the three quite a long time to reach the bottom, not aided by the three bumping into each-other due to the darkness.
Finally, as Senna's footsteps hit flat ground, it signified the end of the long path. Senna felt for her surroundings, leaning against a wall in the inky black and resting. Shortly thereafter, the other two reached the bottom as well, panting softly.
"So, we're here. What now?" Auburne said. "I'm not expecting a lightshow rave or anything, but the least I could get would be a bit of illumination, physically or metaphorically."
"Okay, I for one, am sick of all of this filler." a voice chimed. "It's 64% worthless trash."
"Of course it is. That's the point."
"Don't get me started."
"...Renee?"
"September."
"Lucas."
"Of course." September butted in. "There's only five days left until the game begins, why should we waste it dilly dallying? I figured we could have a little fun, dividing into our teams before the game, for a bit of practice, you know?"
"Quite. This seems 92% more entertaining." Renee said.
"I hate both of your gimmicks." Lucas said. "I don't have one, so I guess I'll just say that it would be good to get in some practice."
"Senna! Get over here with September and I!" Renee exclaimed.
"Amberlyn, Auburne, you're on my team." Lucas said stoically.
"Time for a fight in the dark."
Renee and September grabbed Senna's hand, pulling her over with the two of them. Lucas hopped over next to Auburne and Amberlyn, staring the other team down in the darkness.
"Aaaand, fight!" September called.
Auburne, still slightly confused, ran over and attempted to attack September, abruptly being cut short and thrown across the room by a force of sorts. Lucas thrust his hand forward, spawning a spark of light. It traveled forward to Renee, who ducked and rolled as it seemed to explode,
"Wait... what? I have to fight Senna...?" Amberlyn said.
"If it gets us out of this..." Senna sighed, fumbling around in the dark. She gave a weak, swift strike to Amberlyn, who caught it, throwing it back down before hopping to her side and giving an equally weak strike. Renee pulled out her firearm, pulling the trigger and shooting a warning shot into the ceiling. The bullet lodged in the cheap material, dropping to the floor.
"A gun in the dark. Great." Auburne thought as he rushed towards September. Offguard, September was struck by Auburne's leg, the impact of a quick kick knocking him off his feet. Auburne knelt at where September would land, preemptively kicking into the air, A successful impact occurred, knocking September to the other side of the room. He slid on his end until he hit the wall, dust rising from the impact.
Lucas spawned another spark, holding it at his side, as a temporary flashlight of sorts. The expressions of tension were visible to the underlighting of the spark, as blows were traded between each member of each party.
The three from each side hopped back to their initial positions, panting heavily.
"I see that we're both about 50% capable." Renee said.
"Of course." September continued.
"You know what, screw you two, I'm adopting my own gimmick." Lucas whined.
"...Good fight." Auburne said, lowering his fists. Senna and Lucas traded spots, standing with their appropriate clique.
"The issue is, why are you here?" Amberlyn asked.
"No, the issue is, how are these statistics applying to the game?" Renee sighed.
 
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"I'm tired of waiting around." a voice said. It was heavily concealed and garbled, as if its owner was attempting to hide his identity. "Get the Negositive Star, September."
"Of course, Beloved." September said. He walked over to Auburne nonchalantly and snatched the star from his pocket, catching him off-guard.
"Auburne, what the hell?" Senna exclaimed. "You just upped and let him take it?!"
"..." Auburne was speechless, his eyes following the star in September's hand.
"Don't worry, Senna. This will help us in the long run, sweetie." September said, smirking.
"...How? ...And don't call me 'sweetie'." Senna responded, looking down. "Just who the hell was speaking? Beloved?"
"The Beloved's identity is 100.00% confidential. Nobody outside of Soresa's faction can know."
"Shut up, Renee. It's your fault the Negositive Star even left Soresa."
"Well, 99% oops."
"You know what, go fuck yourself."
"'Of course'." Renee finished, mocking September. Lucas stood in place, sighing and digging his fingertips into his forehead with disappointment.
"Auburne, Amberlyn, why aren't you trying to get the star back?!" Senna exclaimed, gazing at the two. Auburne still stood silent, while Amberlyn looked depressedly at the deteriorating ground. Amberlyn looked up, parting her hair from her eyes as she began to speak.
"There isn't really a reason to, is there?" Amberlyn said. "What makes you so desperate to get it back, Senna? We know nothing about it, and it's obviously none of our business."
"...We need it." Auburne sighed. Thinking quickly, he walked over to the rotting wall and tore off a decaying patch of sheetrock, tossing it at September. Upon impact, September's air was knocked out of his chest and Auburne approached, reclaiming the Negositive Star.
"Oh, of course. We're playing king of the hill now?" September laughed. He kicked up dust from the floor and cupped a fist.
"That's... essentially what the game... on Soresa... is." Lucas said. "And why can't I have a gimmick like you gu-" he cried out, being cut off by a kick to the gut from Renee. Lucas stared at her coldly before looking back to September, who stood in a slanted posture. "Alright, game on. Whoever has the Negositive Star on Sunday at eleven fifty nine P.M. gets a day long immunity when the game starts. Of course, it's just them. If their whole team was included, it'd be too easy. Every man for themselves, you know?"
"September, you can't go against the Beloved's orders. If you do, you have a... very high percentage of being eliminated. I can't calculate it, it's so high." Renee said.
"Too bad. He can intervene if He wants to. It's His wishes that we're even the agents in this game, which proves that he has a lot of trust in us obviously."
"Can we cut the goddamn talk?" Senna said. "Auburne, give me the star." she continued, brushing Auburne's shoulder gently. Turning, he tossed Senna the star, prompting her to run barreling up the stairs, to the agents' dismay.
"Take a hint. A bit of the Beloved's powers are that He can add his presence to anywhere He wishes, any time He wants." September said.
"Why are you putting so much emphasis behind 'he'?" Auburne asked.
"In the Beloved's case, it's a proper noun." Lucas said. "Think of Him like a god of sorts, and us agents are his missionaries. We have a certain amount of freedom as to what we can do, and we're simply here to inform those who have been chosen about their participation in the game. It doesn't necessarily mean all of the agents will be on the same team, as there are two, which is the case in this game." Lucas continued.
"So... That's what Renee meant whenever she told Senna she was-"
"Indeed." Renee said. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a bitch to catch."
"Heh. With you, of course, sis." September said. He and Renee exited the darkened room, running up the stairs.
"Evidently, Senna had found that the door was now unlocked, or she would have returned downstairs." Lucas said. "Be on the watch for Renee and September, please. They're very skilled, and they share a special bond as siblings."
"September was literal when he said sis...?" Auburne replied.
"I'm so lost." Amberlyn sighed, holding her index and middle fingers to the crown of her head and nodding it down.
"Yeah. As I stated beforehand, they have a special bond. When together, their power is unmatched by even the greatest. It appears to be a gift by the Beloved. Stay on watch. As your teammate, I have to help you. Oh, and Auburne... Your wish wasn't substantial."
Auburne scoffed, laughing to himself.
"But no, really. It wasn't. Consider my harassment a wake up call. Think about your wish and how you approached making it. It's more important than it seems. Do not let them get the Negositive Star if you want us to win. The immunity that September speaks of saves you from death. It's normally only granted in special cases by the Beloved."
"Aren't you just a walking text book?" Amberlyn replied. "Who should we let get the immunity?"
"Either you or Auburne. I'm not the most competent at these sorts of things, you know?"
"Okay. Auburne, you can take it." Amberlyn said.
"...Amberlyn, were you ever told the story of Soresa when you were a child?" Auburne asked.
"...No...?"
"Huh. I remember it being really popular around my neighborhood. From what I can remember, it was about a world that repeatedly revived itself from extinction by the use of a magic star called the Wishing Star. It's all starting to make sense now."
"Yes, that's correct." Lucas said, giving a slow clap. "The Negositive Star is a counterpart to the WIshing Star. It's placed upon Earth one week before the game's onset by an agent, which was me in this case, and whoever has it when the game commences is rewarded by the Beloved, whether it be the ability to choose their team, or something else."
"And evidently, September's gone and broken that rule, thinking he can mandate the reward?" Amberlyn said.
"Precisely. I like the way you think. Now, if you promise to keep the Negositve Star in your possession, I promise I'll leave you unharmed. I don't need it. Now. Let's open this show with a killer act."
 
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One night has passed.

Senna sat up, still clutching the Negositive Star intently at her chest. She had swiftly evaded Renee and September's attempts to procure it the previous night, still expecting to see them momentarily.
"...After what happened at work yesterday, I'm pretty sure I don't have a job anymore. That's off the stress list." Senna sighed. After Lucas's assault on her, the shop had been temporarily closed for an investigation due to the blood stains found on the bathroom floor after her escape.
"The only one who knows I'm alive still... well, is nobody other than Amberlyn, Auburne, and the agents. Parents are probably having a damn epilepsy because their pathetic daughter didn't go home last night." she finished. Senna had gone to sleep in the middle of an alley the preceding night: if she had returned home with the Negositive Star, she likely would have been questioned for hours and hours about it.
"Ugh... This can't be real. It seems like some kind of freakish dream... But I can't wake up from it." Senna sighed, standing up. Her clothes were covered in dirt and pebbles from the ground that clung to the fabric of her clothing. Senna faintly blinked, adjusting her eyes to the heavy light consuming the area around. Squinting as she stepped out of the alley, Senna was caught off guard by an immediate assault from her left, immense pain suddenly filling her. Looking down, she saw a large gash in her hand, straight through to the bone. Blood trickled from the gash, dripping to the ground and splattering in a maroon tinge. Senna was no longer in possession of the Negositive Star.
To her right lied September, tossing the star up and down.
"Every man for himself, of course. It doesn't matter if you're on my team." he said, before sprinting off in the opposite direction.
"...My hand...!" Senna cried, staring at the wound. The blood continued to pour out, as if September had cut a vein. "And the Negositive Star is gone..." she continued, staring in the direction of September's escape in pain.
"Ugh... i'll just have to hope an easier target snatches it from him. Then I'll go after them..."
Senna walked back into the alley, stopping behind a dumpster aligned to the wall. Ducking behind it, she stripped herself of her shirt, carefully ripping off a small portion of the right sleeve with her uninjured hand, before putting the shirt back on. Senna wrapped the scrap of cloth around her hand, which was still bleeding profusely. She began to feel lightheaded as she left the alley, not knowing where she should go. As Senna groggily trekked down the sidewalk clutching her hand, simply hoping to chance upon a certain September.
"Is it really worth it?"

_~*~_~*~_

Amberlyn stood impatiently in the inn room, waiting for Auburne to awake. The two had checked out a hotel room with the small remaining money they still had the previous night. Lucas opted to stay on the street and alert them via their phones if the Negositive Star had been found,
Evidently, Lucas hadn't seen September or Senna yet.
"The Beloved... Who is he?" Amberlyn thought to herself. The more thought she sunk into her theories, the more confused she became. "Have I met him? Has he met me? Without me knowing? Ugh. I'll cross that bridge when I come to it, I guess..."
"You're up early." a voice chimed from behind her. Auburne had risen from his bed while Amberlyn was thinking.
"...Damnit, don't scare me like that." Amberlyn said. "Do you think you might know who the Beloved is?"
"Nope."
"This is all so confusing. For all we know it might be some kind of stupid prank."
"We can't be sure of anything at this point in time. I find it odd that I'm the only one who remembers the story of Soresa."
"I... It's all too much. I feel like I'm going to overflow. There's just too much information pouring in at once... I don't know, Auburne, I just don't know."
Amberlyn walked over to the room's door, grasping the metal knob and turning it clockwise and pulling it open before stepping out into the hallway. She shut it behind her, walking through the hall. It was fairly simple, with no paint on the walls, and slightly creaky wooden flooring. It had spots of aging, but it still felt relatively stable. A clock was stationed on the eastern wall, between rooms one hundred fifteen and one hundred sixteen. Descending the carpeted stairs, Amberlyn came to the second floor's hall, continuing down to the lobby and stepping outside through the glass door.
"Four more days..." Amberlyn said. She leaned against the wall adjacent to the door. Despite the sun shining brightly, the climate was rather cold.
"Senna... Why do you have to be on the opposing team? I can't... be against you."
"Yeah you can."
Auburne startled Amberlyn again, prompting her to jump.
"Damnit, Auburne, I said to stop that." Amberlyn sighed, looking down at the ground.
"..."
An awkward tension filled the air as Amberlyn resumed her position against the wall, leaving Auburne standing still.
"Sometimes you have to do things you don't wan-" Auburne started, before being cut off by a phone call. Amberlyn shifted her glance to her jean pocket. Reaching her hand into the tight crevice, she withdrew the phone, quickly looking down at the screen.
"Lucas."
She tapped the 'accept call' button, holding the phone against her ear.
"Hey Lucas."
"Where?"
"What...?"
"Oh my god..."
"This is awful... I'll be right there. Where are you?"
"...Got it. I'll get Auburne to keep his eyes out for September while I'm gone." she said, tapping the phone's screen to end the call.
"What happened?"
"Lucas found Senna fainted in the middle of the road. It's a miracle she wasn't ran over."
"You can't help her... Neither can Lucas. Every man for his own."
"How can you say that?! She's your friend too!"
"Do you want to live? It might just be a ploy."
"...Stay your paranoid *** out here in case September passes by. He stole the Negositve Star, presumably from Senna, which is why she's in such bad shape."
"Fine, fall for her trick."
"Do you really have that low fate in her? Auburne, you're a completely different person lately."
"I haven't been the same since September stole the Negositive Star from me before my hearing. I'm sorry, okay?"
"We'll have to deal with that later..." Amberlyn sighed frustratedly. She ran through the parking lot to her car, pulling her keys from her pocket and unlocking the door, sliding in. Amberlyn jammed the keys into the slit haphazardly, turning them and igniting the engine. She slammed the door shut, looking out of the back window at Auburne. He gazed back with a conflicted look as she pulled out of the lot.
As she drove, approaching Senna's location, a bullet shattered her car window. Amberlyn slammed on the breaks, looking out of the window to see Renee from a distance. She turned the keys, stopping the car before pushing the door open.
"Damn, I was 99% positive I would have inflicted fatal damage on you. Nobody ever said that you couldn't kill to narrow the field." Renee said, smiling devilishly.
"I don't have time for your math gimmick. Senna is about to die."
"Oh, you're helping someone apart from yourself?"
"...Shut up..."
Amberlyn attempted to get back into her car, before being cut off by another gun shot. She quickly ducked, the bullet flying overhead and dropping to the ground upon hitting the brick walls of a parallel building. Amberlyn quickly unlocked the car door, frantically seating herself as Renee attempted to fire again. Amberlyn's car began to move just as Renee's finger pressed upon the trigger, the gun silently clicking.
"...Are you kidding me?" Renee said. She yelled out frustratedly, tossing the gun at Amberlyn's car. It hit the side, bouncing off and back to her.
"Damn it all!"
Amberlyn rapidly approached Senna's location. Finally, as she arrived, she saw Lucas tending to her body on the sidewalk. Amberlyn pulled over, removing the key from the slit and opening her door. She walked over to Lucas and Senna.
"Is she breathing...?"
 
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September's feet clattered across the tired black roads as the sun hit its apex in the sky, slowly falling behind the silky sheet of clouds. Passing an innocuous hotel, he thought nothing of it as he tossed the Negositive Star up and down in his palm.
Auburne caught sight of September, the hotel being the one he had stayed behind at for Amberlyn to go check on Senna.
"So." Auburne said, his tone of voice becoming more aggitated and spiteful than usual. "Where do you think you're going with that?"
"Hm. Should we decide by force?" September said, turning around. He had spotted Auburne out of the corner of his eye while passing, and thus was prepared. Auburne's muscles stiffened as September began to taunt him. He dashed over to September, attempting to grab the Negositive Star from his hand, failing and skidding across the road on his chest, somewhat ripping his clothing. Standing back up, Auburne was unable to cross back over to September as traffic began to flood in.
"Not so fast." Auburne said. He turned his back to the cars, looking for the traffic light controls. While he attempted this, September began to move away from the hotel quickly, clenching the star tightly in his hands. Auburne spotted the control panel, a few feet away from his position on a telephone pole. He sprinted over, grabbing the panel and opening the door that covered its innards while nearly tearing it off. He mashed the maroon painted button, bringing the traffic to a momentary stop. Auburne assumed that the traffic control would automatically resume after about half a minute, so he quickly crossed the road while the red light shone to the street below. Running down the crossway, he finally reached the parallel side of the road.
September had left him trailing, almost out of his line of vision. Auburne sighed, picking up his pace and quickly catching up with September, who came to a bridge overlying a large waterway.
"Is this really going to be our venue?" Auburne said, skidding to a stop. He began to pant, resting his hands on his knees. September leaned against the railing of the bridge, loosening his grip on the Negositive Star.
"Of course." he laughed, smirking afterwards. He pulled out a gun, pulling the trigger. Auburne ducked as the bullet flew through the air, barely missing his head. He ran over to September, attempting to swipe the gun from his hand. September sidestepped, causing Auburne to stumble forward. He caught his balance before he fell over and hopped, turning around to September in mid air.
"...Where is he...?"
Auburne was struck from behind, causing him to fall over the railing. Auburne barely managed to grasp the top rung of the bridge's railing.
"Cheating bastard." Auburne said, gritting his teeth.
"Oh, is this really how it's going to end? I thought you could do better than that. So did the Beloved, evidently. Teleporting me, and all of that..."
"The Beloved is biased towards this goddamn agent this time, isn't he? He's changed since... last time."
"Oh, so you remember now."
"...No...? What... was I talking about?" Auburne said, his voice shifting back to its normal tone.
He pried Auburne's fingers from the bridge, forcefully. "Oops."
Auburne fell.
Auburne quickly grasped the final rung of the railing.
"September, you can't do this."
"I can't?"
September stomped on Auburne's fingers. Auburne managed to grab onto September's jeans' ends, holding on intently.
"Persistant fucker. Of course..."
September shook his leg, causing Auburne to finally plummet into the diluted water.
"It's a shame. He was such a great agent."

_~*~_~*~_

"No. She's lost too much blood. If we hurry we can get her hooked up to a defibrillator." Lucas said. "I've already called 911. The ambulances should be here any second." Lucas said, as sirens began to blare through the rigid air. An ambulance turned the corner, approaching rapidly. Lucas hoisted up Senna's currently lifeless body, to speed up the process. As the ambulance pulled up, a few EMTs exited and walked to the back of the car, unloading a stretcher.
Lucas sat Senna's body on the stretcher.
Amberlyn stood speechlessly, so shocked that not a single tear was able to form.
"She's... dead."
"Break the laws. Go as fast as you can. I... I can't imagine going on without Senna."
The EMT nodded. He escorted Amberlyn and Lucas into the vehicle, sitting them in the back passenger seats. The man in the front seat slammed his foot on the gas pedal, navigating to the vehicle to the hospital in only one minute.
"An impressive feat considering the distance between this hospital and our prior location." Lucas said. The EMTs opened the doors, leaving Amberlyn and Lucas sitting alone in the ambulance.
Amberlyn's eyes were glazed over. She stared forward, speechlessly.
"Amberlyn."
"Amberlyn."
"Amberlyn."
She had no reaction as the sounds of the EMTs opening the metal door and rolling Senna's lifeless body out filled the air. She silently stood, opening the ambulance's door and stepping down to the ground. Lucas stayed put in the car, thinking.
"Something doesn't seem... right. How could she die that quickly from blood loss? The wound still looks new, and it was covered. Something isn't adding up here."
 
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Amberlyn walked wordlessly, following the EMTs to the interior of the hospital. The air inside was somewhat stale, giving a musty odor to the room. There were padded benches at both ends of the room, and a desked enclosure. A secretary sat inside on a spinning chair, multitasking: speaking on the phone while typing and pressing paperwork. Upon seeing the entry of the EMTs holding the stretcher with Senna's body, she immediately waved them off, allowing them to pass through without any holdups. Lucas entered shortly after, standing next to Amberlyn. Lucas approached Amberlyn, turning her around. She stared at him with cold, greyed eyes, scarcely blinking.
"What is even up with you?"
"..."
Lucas sighed, walking over to the padded seats on the left side of the room and sitting down.
"Are either of you some of her family or friends?" the secretary asked, covering up the microphone of her phone.
"I am. In case you need it, her name is Senna Aveil." Amberlyn said, emotionlessly. Her stony eyes pierced the secretary's soul.
"Pl-please follow the EMTs, then." she said, stuttering. She uncovered the microphone, resuming her call. Amberlyn nodded, turning and walking towards the door the EMTs had burst through. The secretary hung up her phone, sliding her chair over to the computer. She searched through the city's database for "Aveil", turning up Senna's parents. She dialed their number, holding the phone to her ear and pushing up her glasses.
"Hello?"
"This is the Lashlake Hospital. Your daughter is Senna Aveil, correct?"
"Yes, ma'am. Our 'daughter'."
"She is deceased, as of this moment."
"...That's wonderful." her father's voice said, full of genuine happiness.
"...I offer only my deepest condolences." the secretary said. She hung up the phone, disturbed.
"A patient has been entered into room two hundred fifteen." a voice called, through a P.A. system. Amberlyn took the number to heart, attempting to find room two hundred fifteen. Walking through the hallways.
"...God damn, Senna..." Amberlyn said, her face staying stiff. "Can you imagine what my life would have been like without you?"
"Can you imagine what your life would have been like without me?"
Memories flooded Amberlyn's head.

_~*~_~*~_

Amberlyn walked into a dimly lit room, approaching her school's orientation. Every seat in the room was completely filled: fifteen chairs in each row, with thirty rows. Amberlyn sighed, dropping her bags to the ground on the wall and sitting against it. A projector at the front of the room switched on, its hum filling the room as it brought a video to the whiteboard at the front, aging showtunes blaring from speakers adjacent to the projector.
"Oh, god. An ancient film." a voice sighed, a few feet away from Amberlyn. She looked over, seeing a black-haired girl, moderately endowed, wearing a black turtleneck with white skinny jeans. She had hazel eyes, though they weren't visibly apparent in the dark room. Amberlyn turned to the girl, speaking shyly.
"Oh, I didn't notice you there." she said, quietly under the drone of people around her.
"Not really anything new." the girl sighed. "My name is Senna." she continued, parting her hair from her eyes. "And you?"
"Amberlyn." she said, her gentle voice cracking. "What did you mean by 'nothing new'?"
"Nothing." Senna sighed, crossing her arms. She looked up at the ceiling, the patterned dots on the tiles acting as stars the ceiling's sky.
"You don't need to be like that. I'm an understanding person." Amberlyn said, blinking.
"Ugh, don't bother getting caught up in my life. It's nothing too important, anyway." Senna responded, unfolding her arms and looking back at Amberlyn. "Too many people have tried to help."
"Listen, no. Don't let yourself be like that. I've had some... interesting things happen to me as well, and I'm not upset. If you came over to my house after orientation I could probably help."
"...Fine. Unlike the rest, you look promising. Wouldn't your parents be angry if you brought home a friend before school even started, though?"
"..."
"...Oh. I think I know what you meant now..."
"...Yeah. I don't want to talk about it."
"You have the whole house to yourself, or have you been adopted?"
"The former. My parents' will stated that their home would go to me, and it did, I guess."
"At least your parents didn't treat you like a burden." Senna said, looking away.
"You poor thing..." Amberlyn sighed, scooting closer to Senna.
"The people who are supposed to love you the most and cherish your presence aren't supposed to beat you into the ground and tell you how worthless you are. That's not how things work. It's just not supposed to be like this." Senna said, despair creeping into each and every word. She turned around, falling over on to a shocked Amberlyn, beginning to silently cry.
"..."


_~*~_~*~_

"That first day... Time really flies, doesn't it?" Amberlyn said, holding back tears. As she finally reached room two hundred fifteen, she knocked on the door.
"Come in." a voice called through the thick wood. Amberlyn looked down, sighing. She raised her head, intaking air before turning the knob and pushing the door open. Senna was laying in a bed, with a heart monitor attached. It gave a flat line.
"Is it... too late?"
"Not yet. She's only been deceased for roughly seven minutes. We still have enough time to use a defibrillator."
"...Great." Amberlyn said, clasping her hands together and raising them. She looked to the left to see a defibrillator sitting, plugged in. One of the doctors rolled it over to the bed, pulling down the sheets covering Senna's body. Her clothing had already been mostly removed, save for her underclothing, to obtain bloodwork. The man pressed the cuffs of the defibrillator against her chest, planting them firmly down.
"Clear." the man said. The other doctor in the room activated the defibrillator, allowing a jolt of electricity to flow through into the cuffs.
The heart monitor gave a slight hiccup, Amberlyn's stomach began to twist as it sunk back down to a flatline.
"Stronger." the first doctor said, rubbing the cuffs together. He placed them back on Senna's chest, as the second doctor dialed the voltage on the defibrillator slightly higher.
"Clear."
Senna was electrocuted yet again.
The heart monitor began to register a slow, faint heartbeat.
It remained.
An anxious five minutes passed, seeing if the heart would stay active. Amberlyn's heart was wavering. She felt a surreal sensation, seeing her friend's unconscious body two feet away.
The heart continued beating.
"She's alive, missus."
"...Yes...!" Amberlyn exclaimed. Her eyes began to water tears of joy.
"She's getting blood transfusions shortly. Her hand won't ever be fully usable again. It looks like it was damaged from a violent assault."
"...September..."
"It's August, missus."
"...No. That's not what I meant." Amberlyn said. She walked over to Senna's bed, kneeling down. She grasped Senna's hand, closing her eyes. The two stayed silent, calmly together for a short while. Their peace was interrupted by a woman bursting through the door, pushing a cart filled with syringes and tubes of maroon liquid.
"Please move, missus. We are about to begin the transfusion."
Amberlyn slowly opened her eyes, letting go of Senna's cold hand. She stood, her hair shadowing her face.
"Yes, sir." she said, turning around and walking out of the room.
"September... Why would you go that far? Just for the Negositive Star..." Amberlyn said. "Auburne had better get it from him."
Footsteps sounded from around the corner. Lucas turned inward, facing Amberlyn in the hallway.
"Is she... alive?" Lucas said, thrusting his hands into his pockets.
"Yes." Amberlyn said.
"That's wonderful." Lucas replied.
"I couldn't have dealt with losing her... She's my life."

_~*~_~*~_

"He's still alive...? This will never do."
"Both are."
 
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Auburne awoke, soaked head to toe in deplorable grey water. He was facedown in a mound of sand, which clung to his wettened clothes. Opening his eyes, Auburne looked up, gazing around before gaining the strength to stand up. Once on his feet, Auburne tried to recognize his surroundings. Behind him lied the flow of polluted water, continuing past while dropping a sickening aroma. In front of him, the shore inclined up, which would bring him back to level ground. He couldn't have washed very far away from his prior location, he assumed. Auburne walked from the shore, climbing up the steep hill to level ground.
"Damnit... September." Auburne sighed, looking up at the darkened sky. The stars above were duller than normal. All of the buildings around were completely blackened, leaving Auburne fumbling around in the quiet darkness. The only sounds that kept him company were the rushing of the rancid water and the crows of night. Auburne walked around, coming to a bridge. He stared, squinting to see the distance in the night. Faintly, he could make out the other bridge that he had fallen from, though it was very difficult to see. Auburne estimated it was roughly three miles away, though it was hard for him to judge with his state of mind.
"Eugh." Auburne sighed. He reached into his pocket, feeling around for his phone to no avail. He turned out both of his pockets, expecting it to fall out.
"Fuck." Auburne moaned. "It probably got washed away when I was flowing downstream." he sighed, closing his eyes. He buried his hand in his head, shaking it slowly. Drips of water fell from his soaked bangs, the humid night dissolving them once they hit the ground. Auburne heavily inhaled, then exhaled.
"Starving... I'll pick up some fast foo- ... My wallet washed away too." Auburne said, checking his back pocket to make sure. Folding it out, only a single five dollar bill remained, clumped up in the bottom. Auburne peeled it from the fabric of the jeans, unwrapping it while being sure not to tear it. "It's so soggy. I'd be surprised if they even took it." he said, stuffing it into his side pocket. Auburne wrung out his wet hair, walking down the road ahead of him. "I'll pick up some fast food and use the change to use a pay phone, I guess..." Auburne groaned, his footsteps echoing through the silent night. He came to a burger joint, with neon sign hanging on its door, claiming that it was "open 24/7". Despite this, only a handful of cars were in the parking lot, unlike most fast food chains which were packed every hour of every day.
Auburne walked inside, a cheap and stiff smell of grease surrounding him. There were a few tables on each side of the room, and a female cashier at the center, behind an enclosure. The room was lit by a fluorescent light, its hum resounding through the small room.
Auburne approached the desk, sliding his hand into his pocket and removing the soaked dollar.
"Just give me the cheapest thing you have, and a small soft drink. I need to conserve money." he said, his eyes drooping tiredly. He slid the money over to the cashier. She groped the wet dollar, looking down at it disgustedly.
"Are you really that poor?"
"Shut up, my fucking wallet got washed away." Auburne said, perturbedly. The girl winced at him, pulling away the dollar. She walked to the back room. Coming out, she tossed a minuscule bag of french fries at Auburne, which he barely caught with his exhaustion, and slid a small cup across the table before jabbing a straw into the lid.
"Here, take this for being so poor." she laughed. She walked to the back freezer, pulling out an ice cream cone and dropping it into Auburne's hand.
"...You're gonna give me just a cone?"
"Poor people have to take what they get." she said, sliding Auburne back his change. It was roughly two dollars, he thought as he slid it into his pocket.
"I already said to shut up."
Auburne scarfed down his fries, tossing the bag into the floor. He crunched up the ice cream cone and dropped its remains into the trashbin to his left, and exited the store holding his kid-sized drink.
"This is humiliating." Auburne said, sipping the drink from the straw. He crushed the cup, throwing it into the road before walking over to the payphone in the parking lot. He pulled out two quarters, dropping them into the slot and picking up the phone. He dialed Amberlyn's cell number, grinding his teeth.
"Shit, how did I even get myself into this? It's because of... I don't know. I don't feel like me."
The phone was picked up.
"Hello?"
"Hey, Amberlyn."
"Hi, Auburne..." Amberlyn said, tiredly.
"September literally threw me over the bridge."
"W-what?!"
"It's a miracle I'm even alive."
"It's a miracle Senna is even alive. She... was killed by September and had to be defibrillated. She had to get a blood transfusion, too."
"...Are you serious?"
"Yes..."
"Looks like we have ourselves a god-modder. Could you and Lucas come pick me up? I'm in east Lashlake, right next to the fast food place."
"...Okay."
"I'll see you in a bit."
"...Love you."
"...Love you too."
Auburne sighed, pushing down the handle in the center of the payphone's holder. He nodded his head down, leaning against the brick wall and thrusting his hands into his pocket.
"Something's really gotten into Amberlyn lately."
"Something's really gotten into me lately."
"It's ridiculous. The past few days have been ridiculous. Life is ridiculous."
"I can't find the pieces to the puzzle."
"The last piece is gone."
 

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Sup, R H Y M E. I'm glad that you decided to post your story. I've only read upto chapter 3 so far, but I wanted to say thanks for adding your story to the forum. Also, in the spirit of CM, I wanted to extend to you my thoughts on what I've read so far about your story.

Sigh, much of the things that I had written have been deleted when the system logged me out, so bear with me cuz i'm about to give you the short version.

Overall its a good story. I assumed its in an alternate future given the background about suns charring many planets and the date at the top, 2016.

Of course, there was too much irrelevant description. I refer to the shower scene. You described too much: She turned the knobs; She opened the door; She grabbed a towel. I don't think you need to include all of that. Also line 1 of chapter 1, you also described the black wheels turning on the tarred road as she drove. Unless she driving a hover car, the inclusion of the wheels turning is unnecessary.

There were other things, but nonetheless I look forward to reading the rest of your story.
 
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Thank you for the feedback.
I've wrote quite a lot before writing this, and one of my most common complaints was that I didn't add enough detail. I guess I just need to find a fine line.
Anyhow, I'll be updating late tonight or tomorrow.
 

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Thank you for the feedback.
I've wrote quite a lot before writing this, and one of my most common complaints was that I didn't add enough detail. I guess I just need to find a fine line.
Well one thing I noticed when first scoping out your story was that most of the lines start with quotes, so most of it is dialogue, no?

Just wanted to pop in to say if some people's plea for adding more detail interrupts your choice in style and makes the story flow out of you less naturally, then I would incorporate their advice rather sparingly.

That's not to say people's advice and "complaints" shouldn't be heard, just that if you can sympathize with them, at least don't let your solutions be their solutions.
 

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I haven't read your story completely, mostly skimming since I don't have enough time to read it all, what I did notice was your use of the subject.
A lot of your sentences start with the words he, she, it or names. The sentences of description of actions follow a very similar structure. Also, take a look at chapter 11 and see if you can see why it doesn't read well... My conclusion was that you overused the name Auburn. Try using other words for her, specifically She and Her. You didn't seem to do this anywhere else in the story, though, is there a secret reason that chapter 11 overuses her name :o?

Since the stories are a lot of dialogue, description isn't as necessary. I've recently read some of Plato's Socratic Dialogues (2500 old but still relevant to modern writing) and it was just dialogue, no description. It didn't take away from the writing at all. If a dialogue is going in, it's much more interesting to read it on its own, than with a description of everything that's going on after every sentence.

That's my personal opinion on dialogues, and I have no idea what other people enjoy, though. Chapter 6, which I read half (;P), the second and third paragraph were much easier to read, mainly because of the lack of description.


See, sometimes I love description, but it's really an art to do it like Tarun J. Tejpal, where you can go off on a 10-page description of comparing your work to a crow's nest.
 
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Thank you for the criticisms. Many of these I've actually noticed myself, but haven't bothered correcting them because nobody's singled them out. However, I guess a contributing factor to that is that the other forum I post this on has a somewhat younger demographic. However, I will attempt to improve, of course.
Also, dialogue is definitely my forte. I talk a lot in real life.

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Amberlyn stood from Senna's restbed, turning around to face her.
"I'll be back shortly. I have to pick up Auburne. Got himself thrown downstream by September... I know you can't hear me... But, I'll be back soon."
"I'll see you, then." Senna said, sitting up. She startled Amberlyn, causing her to drop the keys she was beginning to pull out of her pocket.
"...Oh, you're awake." Amberlyn said, sighing. "Just stay put. Keep your hand in the gauze." she finished, patting Senna on her non-injured hand. She stood up, bending down and picking the keys up off of the tiled floor before leaving the roon. It stayed silent, empty air flowing into Senna's ears as she laid in the bed, nearly motionlessly.
Amberlyn walked down the spacious halls, her footsteps resounding through the air. As she reached the lobby, she stepped outside, standing in the night air for a few moments.
"Man, everything's been so... strange lately."
Amberlyn walked across the empty, darkened lot out to the streets. She walked down the sidewalks cautiously, reaching the spot where she had left her car when driving with the EMTs. She pushed a button on the keys, allowing the doors to unlock. She slid her hand under the handle, pulling the door open and getting in. She slid the keys into the ignition, pushing the gauge up to "drive".
Eventually, she reached Auburne's location, stopping the car outside of the joint and sliding the gauge to "park" before pulling the keys from the ignition and stepping out of the car. She shut the door, sliding the keys into her pocket and walking over to Auburne.
"...Oh. You're here now." Auburne said. He looked up to see Amberlyn standing in front of him. A glance at her face told she wasn't in the greatest mindset, even if she was trying to hide it. "Let's get going."
"Or not." a feminine voice said. Amberlyn and Auburne quickly looked over to see an unfamiliar figure standing under the streetlight. Auburne's attention was undivided to her. However, Amberlyn noticed a male stalking away from a distance. He had short black hair, and the arms of sunglasses were visible over his ears.
"...David...?" Amberlyn thought to herself.
"Just who are you?" Auburne called, causing Amberlyn's attention to snap back to the female in the streetlight. She was clothed a lengthy black coat, gold-sheened stripes circling from either side. Beneath lied a tight pair of khakis, the bottom housing black stilettos. The girl had cold blue eyes, complemented by her thick red hair, parted over one eye.
"My name is Devi."
"And that's all you're going to tell us?"
"No, of course not. It's all she can." an all too familiar voice chimed. Amberlyn turned around to see September walking slowly towards them.
"Oh, a two on two. This will be entertaining." Auburne said.
"Don't provoke them!" Amberlyn yelled frustratedly at Auburne.
"Taking two out would make the competition much easier, don't you think, Devi?"
"Quite."
"I'm tired of all this fighting..." Amberlyn said.
"It's your own fault, you know." September said.
"Take the traitor, Devi." September said.
"Traitor...?"
September dashed at Amberlyn as Devi did to Auburne.
"This is getting so repetitive..." Auburne sighed. He sidestepped Devi's approach, prompting her to stop on a dime and lunge back towards him.
"Gotta keep in mind, September is apparently stronger now..." Amberlyn thought to herself. September attempted to strike Amberlyn, but she hopped out of the way before the impact occured.
Faint glimmers of the sun began to pierce through the grey clouds of night.
September swept his legs, knocking Amberlyn off her feet. She collided with the ground, dirt rising from the pavement. He held his foot on her chest, keeping her in place as she tried to wriggle away futilely.
Devi's lunge brought Auburne to the ground. She attempted to scratch at him, though he thrust his body forward and knocked her off. She recovered mid-flight, landing on the ground and skidding slightly back before approaching Auburne again.
"Jesus, does she ever give up?" Auburne exhaled, already somewhat drained.
September removed his pistol from his pocket, kneeling to Amberlyn's restricted form and holding it to her forehead.
Auburne kicked Devi off of him, sending her airborne. "She's like some kind of parasite..."
"Say goodni-" September started, before being cutoff by Devi's flying figure knocking him over. He dropped the gun, causing it to clatter on the ground and fire.
The bullet pierced Amberlyn's shoulder, causing her to scream out in pain. She clutched her shoulder, blood dripping down from the spot of impact and staining her clothing. The shell lodged in her flesh. Amberlyn attempted to pull it out, causing her to wince in pain as it freed itself from her body and clattered to the pavement below.
"Hold it." a voice called from the distance.
"Put your hands in the air."
"..."
"All four of you. Up, now."
A police officer stood in front of them. The four had been so consumed by their conflict that they forgot they were fighting in broad public, in front of an open venue.
"...The blonde girl and the boy in the hoodie instigated it." September said, cocking his head back towards them and giving a devilish smirk. Devi nodded in agreement. "...My... niece... Serah, and I only attacked back in self defense. Isn't that right, Serah?"
Devi nodded wordlessly again.
"Hold up!" Auburne cried. "Are you ****ting me?! They ambushed us on the way back to the god damn hospital!"
"..."
"He's lying. Auburne was already held for hearing earlier this week, weren't you Auburne?"
"...Fucker."
"I'm sorry, but I'm more inclined to believe these two. They get a warning because it's their first offense, and it's very minor. You two, however..."
"Wait. Amberlyn wasn't involv-"
"Accomplice." Devi said, her innocent, childlike voice persuading the ears of the officer.
"That face wouldn't lie." the officer said. "You sick [font="Verdana]f[/font]ucks should feel bad for subjecting her to such violence. You're headed to the slammer."
"W-what?! No hearing?!"
"Drop it, Amberlyn. Wasn't that long ago that I mentioned how [font="Verdana"]s[/font]hitty this town's legal system is." Auburne said, raising his hands behind his back.
"Are you really giving up?!" Amberlyn said. "The Negositive Star!"
"I'm sorry, Amberlyn. We'll have to get someone to bail us out."
"..."
Amberlyn raised her hands, holding them behind her head. She and Auburne walked over to the car's trunk, kneeling over it as the officer opened his rear door and pulled out handcuffs. The metal clanked as he circumfrenced them around Amberlyn and Auburne's hands, escorting them to the back seat.
The officer closed the door, leaving Amberlyn and Auburne to stare at September and Devi through the tinted windows. September smirked, flashing the Negositive Star.
Auburne gave September the middle finger spitefully as the car pulled out of the driveway.

_~*~_~*~_

"I need to think of a collateral..." Amberlyn said as she and Auburne walked down the jail's hallways, led by the officer. He lifted a pair of keys from a rung on the wall, sliding them into the lock on the cell and pushing the door open. He shoved Amberlyn and Auburne in, slamming and locking the door behind them. A simple bed hung on the wall, neatly made, with a cheap nightstand adjacent to it. On top of the nightstand lied a small, childish lamp featuring an elephant, wrapping its trunk around the base, and a box of cards. A single barred window sat in the center of the back wall, allowing fresh air in.
"This is stupid." Auburne said. He walked over to the box of cards, picking them up. They were so badly made that they ripped with his pull, and at the same time, the lamp's light went out.
"Wonderful." Amberlyn sighed. She walked over to the corner, standing in it.
"What's going to happen to Senna and Lucas? What about the game? And... that man I saw when we met Devi..."
"Whoa, wait up with the last one. You saw a guy whenever we met Devi?"
"I might have been hallucinating from a lack of sleep, but yes. I didn't see his face, though."
"A lot of help that is. I don't get how I'm a traitor."
"Ugh, let's not think about it. We need to think of something for a collateral."
"Oh." the officer said, surprising Auburne and Amberlyn. He apparently had been standing outside, overhearing the conversation.
"Bond is $50,000. You're both charged with second degree assault, judging by the injuries on the two."
"...Oh my god..." Amberlyn gasped. "This isn't right..."
"Prepare a collateral within the day and I'll write this off as a misdemeanor. Take it or leave it."
"..." Auburne stood still, with a look of disappointment on his face.
"...I have none of that money."
"Looks like you're serving your time then."
"Yeah, for a crime we didn't commit."
"Wait." Amberlyn interjected, to the shock of both Auburne and the officer. "As the property owner of my parents' estate, my home will be used to pay off our bond, no collateral."
 
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Ugh, sorry for not updating. I've had really horrendous writer's block.
Consider this as "on hiatus" until further notice.
 
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