Artwork sample (Correct place to put this?) Laser Werewolf

[mzink*]

Hello all, would this be the correct area to post an art sample? I thought first the critique topic but then I wasn't sure if that was just for sig type work. Anyway, just wanted to post a sample of my work. I mostly just doodle whatever daydream is going on in my head, though most of my recent stuff I think is inappropriate to be posted on this forum. I do however have this one that would be appropriate, it is a bit older and has some irritating errors which I won't draw your attention to I get a bit lazy with my drawing sometimes. But any critique or tips are welcome! I apologize that I don't have a scanner or anything, its just a snapshot of the pic with my camera.

Got this idea from the Capoeira laser scene from Ocean's 12. Hope you guys like.

Edit: I need an opinion on this one, does his eye look out of place or are my eyes just playing tricks on me? It seems like nomatter how I adjust it it still seems messed up to me...

 

[zeldspazz]

Wow I see a lot of artwork, considering my sister is an artist, and I'd have to say this is very good. The only thing is maybe shade in some areas lightly in the second one, like some of his finer details to make the big portion that you want everyone to visualize stand out. Looks great either way though nice job.

 

[mzink*]

Thank you very much for the tips! I'll practice my shading more, I'm still a novice at details like that.

 

[zeldspazz]

No problem good luck

 

[IDK]

wow they look really cool, but i couldn't critique drawings, because I can't draw for crap lol... I just make sigs. The critique topic would critique this work, but it's just that most people in there are sig artists, so I'm unsure how much they know about real sketches and stuff... but there's probably someone in there who does them. Try it out.