Well, it looks like you're using down-B too much.
Grab more, and stop recovering so close to the stage with spring! You're really predictable and I would probably have spiked you and/or grab gimped you.
Also, stop rolling to the edge so much.
And quit using HA unless you're legitimately punishing me when I can't do anything.
Tilt more, stop staling your smashes. Learn how to space B-air and U-air, because you're using them like a newb.
You might want to stop jumping and using aerials immediately EVERY TIME you pass me with a spindash.
And stop doing Spring > D-air. If I shield the spring (when you're dropping it), all I have to do is run forward and charge a U-smash or F-smash or grab and I've got you.
And for the love of all things fast, stop thinking you're going to be punishing my missed tilts/jabs from across the stage.
1) You can't do that
2) It's predictable and I'll probably spotdodge you.
3) You're better off standing outside my attack range.
Oh, and please learn how to shield grab and followup your throws. You miss so many chances that could have given you control of the match.
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did i doin it rite?
10needs2bemorespecifics.
also, lmao @ this, I should probably save this list and copy paste/quote it whenever someone makes threads like this without videos or specific information.