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All amateurs, good or bad... post your nickname and marth video links and compare. Vs computer is cool as long as you got style
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Lucky noob. :'(http://youtube.com/watch?v=1TS889KfL2U
Apologies for the quality and lack of audio. Criticism is welcome, and there should be more coming today or tomorrow.
nice marth dude. only thing to add is the up A after up throws to keep dk in the air. that should complete it.@ Itakio: It seems as though you have a good idea as to how to deal with Sheik. Keeping the pressure on her and never relinquishing it is the way to go. I would work on your edgeguarding though; when you DThrow Sheik's off the edge (people in general, actually), they'll want to use their double jump and sweetspot the edge to avoid the dreaded FSmash. Try FSmashing anyway; if you time it well enough, you'll get a tipper and a free stock. Also, if you think you're opponent's going to come up with an attack, DAir'ing near the edge should put an end to that. In general though, you played solidly.
For the thread itself: I don't think people should post videos of themselves playing computers; it's no good doing combos on a dummy that doesn't DI properly.
Anyways, I have a match: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KpUCcJZ0I8g
when playing peach. go for more nairs. they always get caught in thoseI've got three that need critiques. Please point out anything you see. And if you see stuff for the peach player, go ahead and say that too.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=99pTezFpAFM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ylFnI009Ls8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LILvKfT6RM
how did u manage those dairs? lol im having trouble cuz i ff a lot when i go for those and miss the ledge.@capn - I really think you should get a better opponent, because quite frankly, the Peach player wasn't very good. I didn't see much D-smashing, but instead F-smashing, and he never caught on to your aerial attacks... Maybe I'm missing something, but you should look into finding more people to play.
@metroid - What I saw was good, but I'm skeptical to give you too much praise because of the DI issue your opponent had with the giant combo on his 3rd stock. Even still, you played pretty good, with good use of the dair. If I had one piece of advice it would be not to dash dance in such small intervals. Maybe it's just me, but I find it hard to control once my opponent actually does something and I need to punish them.
New video up here - http://youtube.com/watch?v=Mjoja3ZtC8I
There were a few capturing errors for some reason, but they only happen in the very beginning and the very end. In this one, I got 3 pretty good executed KOs (finisher-wise, two dairs and a tipper).
In general, using an attack from the edge (other than the getup attack) is called an edgehop. The easiest way to edgehop attacks is to (1) press "away" or down with the control stick (people like "away" better because there's a reduced risk of fastfalling to your doom), (2) jump as soon as you let go of the edge, and (3) do your attack when you want to. In this case, to edgehop Marth's DAir, I would recommend pressing and holding down on the control stick and then sliding your thumb over the Y and A button. Holding down will drop you from the edge, Y will make you jump, and because you are holding down, pressing A will make you spike. After you spike, be sure to move towards the stage so you can land on it.how did u manage those dairs? lol im having trouble cuz i ff a lot when i go for those and miss the ledge.
thx for the advice. and btw nice paper. cant believe u pulled that off. kudosIn general, using an attack from the edge (other than the getup attack) is called an edgehop. The easiest way to edgehop attacks is to (1) press "away" or down with the control stick (people like "away" better because there's a reduced risk of fastfalling to your doom), (2) jump as soon as you let go of the edge, and (3) do your attack when you want to. In this case, to edgehop Marth's DAir, I would recommend pressing and holding down on the control stick and then sliding your thumb over the Y and A button. Holding down will drop you from the edge, Y will make you jump, and because you are holding down, pressing A will make you spike. After you spike, be sure to move towards the stage so you can land on it.
Anyways, the second DAir was beautiful. The only thing that puzzles me is why you roll instead of wavedash; I didn't see any wavedashes in that video. Waveshielding would've helped you when your opponent started needle spamming.
im guessing youre the red marth in the first vid, is that right? (correct me if i'm wrong) learn to DI because youre always rolling towards an attack. and also you should ledge guard more often to reduce the chances of your opponent getting back on the stage.http://youtube.com/watch?v=1LwLa-Frfmc
What about this one?
And these old ones?
http://www.getyourtournament.com/400673.html
http://www.getyourtournament.com/400674.html
http://www.getyourtournament.com/400678.html
http://www.getyourtournament.com/400679.html
http://www.getyourtournament.com/400681.html
No, I'm the black Marth. It says so next to my name--maXXXpower.im guessing youre the red marth in the first vid, is that right? (correct me if i'm wrong) learn to DI because youre always rolling towards an attack. and also you should ledge guard more often to reduce the chances of your opponent getting back on the stage.
ah sry bout that mistake. umm.No, I'm the black Marth. It says so next to my name--maXXXpower.
OK thanks for the advice. I've never been to a tournament or anything so I haven't had much or and experience against players who are way better than me. I did try making a thread for help but I only got one or two replies. Maybe I'll try again...To capncone,
I am really surprised that you wavedash but you do not dashdance. Dashdancing is far more important at your level than wavedashing is. You need to learn how to move around with Marth. Your movements are very jerky. Learn to shffl your fair (if you plan on doing one) much later. Unless they run up to you and your forced to fair early you want to try to fair as low to the ground as you can effectively get it. This enables you to be able to fair and dash behind them before they can even grab you. You seem to just be starting out, so I really recommend since you have already put wavedashing in your style of play to make sure you don't wavedash for no reason. Wavedash back if you think he is going to rush you and that sort of stuff.
I personally think you should post a new thread and ask for critique rather than use this thread itself. You will get more people to watch them and critique you that way. Single threads asking for a bunch of critiques for different players just creates confusion and get too long.
i think all you need to work on is nair and fair coming back on the stage from the ledge. btw, are u pro cuz u have a bunch of decent vidsscrubbing down!
wavedashing removed!
items req!
SAKURAIII
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wybl6ZGEJ14 vs Doc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVnSSlWdC5g vs Marth
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-nAfcTBp8IU vs Sheik
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QlcKf_cPqwo vs Sheik
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjXwsWXHfdM vs Sheik
well, i guess pro vids would be better. you should definitely post em. in fact, plz post them.Tripple post = Bad.
I was thinking of posting a vid or two... but I suppose I wouldent be Amateur.
i only watched the first vid. so u def need to work on ur grabs since ur playing as marth and you seem to rely on your smash attacks way too much. also dont be afraid to ledge guard going off the field because thats what winning is all about