ok i watched the DOC fight pretty closely, some thoughts on what you could do:
- The laser> shine technique didn't work on this match, cause he kept hitting you with something, you can try some laser to sidestepping, or to grab, cause the doc was very defensive at some points in the match, you did grab him a couple of times after a laser, but you could have just done this alot to win faster, cause all he did vs the lasers was guard.
- You could have just waited at one point to smash him, cause he rolled alot near the edge, down smash works good in these occasions so you can step him off for some lasering
- you were inclined alot to pillar or a random jab> fsmash, lasering, and repeating, anyone can read this typical falco movement, i didnt see much good grabbing, mostly shieldgrabbing. but this is pretty typical too..
just some thoughts to throw out there, pretty random, i dont know how to critique anyways...
good luck...
*edit*: omg i forgot, you didnt Upb to attack in this match xD...