Alright everyone, critique me

[zeionut]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=om05pzF6Cms&feature=channel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xboaw33PnR4&feature=channel

thats me vs Jem, I want EVERYONEs feedback on how I did and anything that I should pay attention to or do differently etc etc. I want to know anything and everything you guys want to say, no matter how offensive I want to improve even more

so thanks in advance guys! :D

P.S. the second video is our third match and we run the 8 minute timer so just a heads up on what is going to happen lol.

 

[professor mgw]

Not bad not bad, I say a 7.

 

[zeionut]

alrighty andything you would like to say? like tips or tricks? etc etc? lol

 

[ErikG]

I only watched the first video so far, but....
When you get knocked off stage, you should use bair or dair for momentum canceling.
I'd like to say your grenade game needs a little work. When the match became campy on Brinstar, it seemed as if you haphazardly tossed out grenades.
Overall, it's pretty good stuff.

 

[Black_Heretic]

change the "rate me" to a "critique me" and you'll likely get more help =]

@ericG, don't dair to momentum cancel, uair horizontally and bair vertically

 

[IxxI]

You didn't do TOO bad vs Jem, seeing how he's a great player. Like everyone has already said, use UAir and BAir to momentum cancel. Not DAir. Mix up your grenade game, I can see that Jem was adjusting at some points because he was getting used to the repetitive grenade patterns over and over.

 

[zeionut]

uhh how do I change it to critique me? lol but please! everyone help me out!