Zonderion
Smash Ace
I thought this was really well done. I'm disappointed that I still don't know Arkaizer's real name.tell me what you think. I've been thinking about writing for awhile. I'll eventually add an intro explaining the triangle and some more stuff but now I think it's a good first draft
One thing, which you probably weren't trying to sound prideful, but I felt like you were a little harsh on yourself. You highlighted more negative than positives.
Keep it up!
Edit: to clarify, don't keep up the negative highlighting. Keep up the good work you are doing.
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