ya dude your link definitely has potential to be hella wicked
you started picking up a lot from my playstyle while we were playing the matches which is a great thing to see and i can only pt out like 2 things that you should work on.
1. DI - you have good DI, but against really really quick kill moves like the up+b you got shafted quite a bit, also whenever you are DI'ing mash on the bair. aerials effect your trajectory, the bair is his quickest aerial and you'll be able to live up to like +160% if you use this. (this is the reason why i wouldn't die lol)
2. Rhythm - like i said, you have an extremely explosive start. you pretty much control the beginning of the match most of the time, now you just have to work on keeping that rhythm throughout the match so then you can dominate 100% of the time.