Recent content by shadow-gate

these are back? yahoooozle!

i suppose it depends on the change?

first one was a little better

sounds like jealousy-johns to me

EDIT on january 20th: read it, but i haven't seen anything pushing the plot yet. keep writing and i'll make a bigger opinion. much better than chapter 1

i seriously can't expand more on the story that i wanted...i only got to 44,000. instead of trying to droll on, i just ended the story. i mean, 50K would have been nice, but i finished the story so i was happy about it.

why are you talking about m2k so much....? falco is probably more broken then marth, but hmmm iono marth is pretty simple character. practically he's a lot easier to use

it's ok that you lost. i forgive you

keep writing guys!!! i'm still trucking, but i'm not sure how far i'll get. gluck

i'm still doing it, but something tells me i'll have a shortened story. i already have a plot ready. the weird thing is, outlines are pretty hard for me. for me, it's more of a visual thing

i'm at http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/534069. i just added you, scav.

hmm, i forgot gatsby was 50k. so how does the group thing work? i'm a little confused about the whole thing. you just upload your story on the website, but how do you connect to other people?

i'm not sure what you meant by "intro" to your story, but it's very very very short. sounds like a narrated family-drama story involving golf. considering it's a narration, the word choice is fine, but it's just a start

i'm signing up right now, i got a tiny story i have in mind. i'll post my story here too. 50k is like an jr high school level book, not very long. ppl have said it turns out to be about 200 pages. i can't promise i'll finish, but i'll make a thread and post what i have. good luck!

well, read the updated chapters. ummm, there are a few things i noticed. -the chapter titles are a lil misplaced, imo. ch. 2 is called first victory, but they dont' fight. and in chapter 1, they win a battle...so any battle after chapter 1 can't be called a "1st victory". did you mean they...