Whaleit's mario

[CRUNCH]

I have a friend who plays as Mario and wants some feedback on his play.
Here are the vids:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J4MdSNmhZU4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcgTG2DkC4k

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOFf6_Fo5KA

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tj71Bq097f4

Any suggestions would be great.

 

[Matt07]

Hey, I'll critique you on this thread, but we now have a Critiquing thread, so if you wish to post further videos for him to be critiqued you can visit here

First match;
0:13 Don't Fireball when close to opponent.
1:04 Nice grab release to fsmash.
1:15 Again, Fireball close to opponent is bad because the cool down leaves you vunerable.
1:50 Be careful of how you use f-air, and try not to fast fall after using f-air it might K.O you =P.

Second match;
0:28 Don't Fireball that close
0:53 Don't use f-air when coming back up, you could've got punished for it.
1:54 Try to be less predictable with your rolls.

I couldn't watch the third match, or fourth match, it isn't loading the video.

Overall he has a...very unique playstyle, he likes to stay on the ground, but Mario is way better in the air. He has to work on using more aerials, and short hopping them. He has to roll less and his his smashes less, and save them for K.O'ing. Also use less Fireballs when your close to the opponent.

Hopefully other people can help you out too.