Vid, plz critique

[ComboTurtle]

k, so i just started playing fox to help me out, cause my marth seems to get ***** against good sheiks (not this one) Um any advice would be greatly appreciated. I know my opponent isnt great, but hes the best player on campus, where i live so i cant get a harder opponent. Anyways thanks

edit: forgot the vid

Me (fox) vs Marty(sheik) : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rP-QjibxXuw

 

[ComboTurtle]

thanks for all the input guys >.>

 

[Silas06]

It's not a very good video to critique really. Your opponent doesn't really do to much of anything really.

what do you dash dance for?

 

[Gnes]

That shiek was horrible.....did your oppponent no any advanced techniques...didnt look like it....theres no point in incorrectly dash dancing like that...it doesnt accomplish anything u should learn how dash dance correctly.....U should fight a better opponent for better video critiques

 

[Sudai]

All we can really critique on that video is your dah dancing. Way too much of it. Done at pointless time. Too short of a dash dance. Who cares how fast you can turn around like a mofo? It's used to weave in and out of the opponent's attack range or when you're tech chasing. If you're going to dash dance, make them longer (I don't mean time wise, I mean distance wise) and in general, don't just do it to do it.

Get a vid with someone better and we can help more? I know you said he's not that good, but come on...A vid of you vs a lvl 9 might have been better for critique than that one..

 

[ComboTurtle]

thanks for the advice on the dash dancing sudai, atleast u gave an example of how to improve it unlike the others but yer i cant really get a better opponent unless i travel like 2 hours which is alot of effort. i posted a vid against a computer on the marth boards, and they were all like get a vid against an opponent even if theyre really bad... so i did.