The Legend of Lucario (LoL). Not really a Comedy, but it has its moments.

[Kinzer]

To anybody who reads this, this is an on-going (somewhat) story I just wanted to do as an offtime thing, originally I wanted to turn this into a video machinima, however I have no way to record so I will have to settle for trying to make a descriptive story. Anyway here I go, please enjoy...

(Chapter I - What started it all)

Narrator: Welcome, one and all, pull up a chair and any beverages, and listen to my tale. We begin this tale with the main character, Lucario. We see him on a plain, it appears as if he is putting some heavy thought into something.

Lucario (in his mind): Hmm...I am not too sure of what that tiny mushroom creature was talking about, however I do recall him mentioning something I could understand...

*about 15 minutes back into time*

Toad: Ah jeez, I shouldn't have taken this job, however it is a fine way for me to learn how to get things done fast, and it is good excercise since Master Mario wanted me to get the message to everybody fast.

*Toad looks through a list on his sheet of paper, seems like he is almost done with one last chore to go...*

Toad: Ah, here we go, it seems like I only have one more person to deliver this petition to, then I am done for today. Let's see, his name is "Lucario" and getting to him will be hard since he has no reside- D'off!

*Toad was so distracted by his own thoughts he wasn't looking where he was going, and coicidentally, he bumps into Lucario*

Lucario: Hey pal, why don't you watch where you- oh wait, I am sorry...I am just in a really bad mood today, here let me help you up.

*Lucario notices the person is not from this place so he didn't want to get into any unecessary trouble*

Toad: thanks mister, I am sorry I bumped into you like that, however I need to find this "Lucario" person and deliv-

Lucario: Say no more, you found him, so if it is something concerning me, enlighten me as to what it is.

Toad: Oh wow, what a stroke of luck, I have heard you don't technically live anywhere, do you not have a house?

Lucario: no, not really, I like to travel, but spill the beans, good chum, you said you have news?

Toad: Oh right, before I forget, I needed to tell you something. Lucario, you have been invited into the world of smash, I have came to you from another world to give you this document as proof of your invitation, it has everything you will need to know about an upcoming tournament for the strongest fighters. Congradulations, I would say that this is a huge honor. I must be going now, I have some business I need to take care of before I can call it a day. See ya!

*We return to the present time*

Lucario: Alright, let's review, from what I know there is an inter-stellar Brawl going on, and I have been selected to participate...I guess I could go, I have no nothing to lose, and this could be some fun training for myself.

Narrator: That's all for now, come back again if you liked the first chapter, more will be shown in the second chapter (post).

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter II - Enter Smash)

Narrator: *Stretches, then yawns* Alright, sorry to keep you waiting, I just had to take a quick power nap, we continue our tale with Lucario preparing to find his way to the world of smash...

Lucario: Hey, you know what, now that I went through my mind and recalled that mushroom-like creature handing me directions to this "realm" I do believe I kept it in my pocket somewhere...

*Lucario brushes through his pockets, eventually finding what he needed*

Lucario: Aha! Here we go, now let's see, it says here that I have to clear my mind of all thought, and imagine myself in a temple.

Lucario (in his mind): Hmm, a temple, it didn't leave any description of it, so I guess it is up to me to think of one myself.

*Lucario begins to go into a trance, after a few minutes, Lucario is warped through a wormhole*

Lucario: What?! What's going on, Nyargh!!

*After Lucario has reached the other end, he get's to his destination*

Lucario: Ah no, I am going to plummet straight into the ground!

*just a few seconds before lucario would've hit the ground, a Pink ball grabs him and slows his falling speed to a safe prat fall*

Lucario: Ouch...my rump hurts, but thank you so ever kindly mysterious creature, may I have your name?

?????: Hi!!!

Lucario: ... Uh, hey how are you?

*The creature opens its mouth wide open and it points to it, it could be gesturing that it cannot speak too many words*

Lucario: Can't say too much, apparently...

*while that may be true, it actually is gesturing to Lucario to get inside its stomach, and begins to swallow Lucario whole*

Lucario: Woah, a vacuum, what are you doing?! Stop that, oh what have I gotten myself into?!

Narrator: What will become of Lucario, only time will tell, come back again to find the conclusion!!

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter 3 - The pleasent yet unpleasent introduction)

Narrator: Hello again, subscribers and newcomers, now you are probably all thinking "oh no, Lucario is trapped in a void, never to find his way out, the story is over!!!" but don't you freight, just continue to listen to my tale and be wowed.

Lucario: Let me out, it's dark and it stinks, please!!

*Lucario bursts a small aura flame in his hand*

Lucario: Well, that takes care of the darkness problem, however...

*Lucario looks around, not noticing something coming down from the top of his head*

Lucario: Uh jeez, how am I- *splat* UGH, that is disgusting!! What is this, a half-day old chilidog?! EWW!!!! Hey, if you can hear me, stop bouncing up and down so much!

*several minutes after still pratfalling into a bottomless pit, Lucario is spit out, he sees light again, and notices he is atop of a ship*

Lucario: D'oh...thanks for dropping me off. (he says sarcastically) Where am I?

???? ??????: You sir, are on top of my ship, the "Halberd" if you will.

Lucario: And I'll just assume you want something from me, seeing as to how much "trouble" you went through to get me here...who are you?

Meta Knight: My name is Meta Knight, my pal who took you here is Kirby.

Kirby: Hi!!!

Meta Knight: I am sorry about the transportation, however I had no other way to get you up here, not to mention it wouldn't have been so unpleasent if he had a bigger vocabulary.

Lucario: Okay...well, it is only fair that I introduce myself since I rudely demanded your identification, I am Lu-

Meta Knight: Don't worry about it, we all know who you are, and you only did what you had to do, reacting on instinct.

Lucario: You are quite knowledgable, Knight, however I have much that needs to be answered.

Meta Knight: I understand, why not take a stroll with me on the Halberd, Get some feel in your legs again and and get some things cleared up? Kirby, could you go into the kitchen and prepare all of us some dinner?

Kirby: Yo!

Meta Knight: You're getting closer, try saying "yes".

Kirby: ... Ye...Ye...Ye-

Meta Knight: Alright, thank you trying, you're doing good, keep it up...Lucario, if you will so kindly follow me...

Lucario: Yeah sure, why not...

Narrator: So Lucario was expecting to see a "Mario" as explained in the letter, however, why is he greeted by Meta Knight instead? Only way to get this answered is to stick around to find out, see ya then!

 

[mantlecore77]

ha ha ha!

1.) Lucario has pockets
2.) Kirby can only swallow stuff and say Hi!

i love it

 

[Kinzer]

ha ha ha!

1.) Lucario has pockets
2.) Kirby can only swallow stuff and say Hi!

i love it

yay for somebody else posting in my topic *clap clap*

1. Lucario has pockets because I want him too...and besides, his thighs are big enough to make it logical XD.

2. Oh don't worry, I will make Kirby make inteligent later in the story.

 

[RaynEX]

I agree with Mantle; I fell in love as soon as I read the broken Pokemon had pockets.

Good stuff Kinzer.

 

[Kinzer]

I agree with Mantle; I fell in love as soon as I read the broken Pokemon had pockets.

Good stuff Kinzer.

Thank you, stick around for Saturday afternoon, I try and make a new chapter everyday.

 

[RaynEX]

will do kinzer.

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter IV - It's all clear now...)

Narrator: Welcome back, ladies and germs. Today Meta Knight is going to be your real taleteller for today, but enough of me, shall we get to the real story?

*Meta Knight and Lucario are walking along the border of the main deck, seems like there is a lot to be revealed...*

Meta Knight: Alright, now you are probably wondering what you are doing here, no?

Lucario: Well first things first, how did you know my name yet I never met you...?

Meta Knight: *grins at the floor, then sighs* Long story short, the world of Smash is in disarray, and the Smashets (prophets) from a long time ago have foretold of a hero who will set everything back in order...you, Lucario, are here by destiny.

Lucario: ME?! What can I do?

Meta Knight: Everything will reveal itself, all in due time...

Lucario: *Moans* Fantastic, I first come here expecting to participate in a friendly game, and now I come here with the fate of a world baring on my shoulders...

Meta Knight: Well, nothing I can do to make it any better except by helping you fulfill your destiny and get you back home.

Lucario: Ah Fudge, I forgot about getting home!!!

Meta Knight: Don't panic now, "The Hero of Smash" can't save anything if he is in self-chaos...

Lucario: You're right...Then from here on out, I will do whatever it takes.

Meta Knight: That's the spirit... That may have been a lot to absorb, why don't we take a short break, I'll answer anymore of your questions later, and seeing as how you will need help getting back home, why not join my clan of the "Smash Saviors" and I can introduce you to everybody?

Lucario: Sounds fine.

*Meta Knight pulls out an intercom, his voice can then be heard everywhere on the Halberd"

Meta Knight: All Smash Saviors to main deck, I repeat, all Smash Saviors to main deck...Our star member has arrived...

Narrator: Wow, if I were Lucario now, I would have fainted due to the suprise, he really must be the hero of Smash. Tune in tomorrow for a more casual chapter, until then. See ya!

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter IV... and a half...The Introduction)

Narrator: caught off gaurd are you...I don't blame you if you remember how I said yesterday I would be giving you a new chapter, however I felt that adding this was necessary, afterall I bet you are curious as the next person to know who are the Smash Saviors? Well, without further delay...

*The Halberd begins to shake, must be a lot of people for Lucario to partner up with...*

Meta Knight: *groan* Like a mad mob, they come "charging" up...

*to Lucario's expectations, it's just a medium-sized group, maybe the Halberd was shaking due to the potential everybody has...*

Meta Knight: Well, this is everybody we have so far, Don't worry about shaking anybody's hand, they will just one at a time tell you who they are, we all have heard of your prophecy.

Ike: *Hmph* Name's Ike, don't forget it...

Meta Knight: Sorry, he isn't really friendly, however he fights for his friends.

Lucario: Could you say that since we are under the same banner I am his friend?

Meta Knight: In a sense...next.

*A noble swordsman steps forward and puts his hand in front of him, Lucario is somewhat intimidated seeing as how he wears a tiara, but he understands everything has a purpose, and he returns the favor and shakes his hand.*

Marth: It's great to finally see you in person, I'm Marth, I can already tell we will make a great team!

Lucario: As do I, Marth.

*Marth bows and falls back into the group, next thing that happens is one man jumping very high and landing in front of the crowd...he looks like he could use some excercise but it is unknown how he jumped so high...*

?????: Hallo, it's-a me...Huh? Hey-a, Luigi, don't be such a sourpuss, come, introduce-a yourself!

Luigi: ... Coming...

*Luigi starts to walk forward, however he trips on his way, he ends up where he needs to be and just stands up*

?????: Hey, let-a me help you up, that's looked like it hurt.

Luigi: ... Thanks...

Mario: This is-a my brother Luigi, together we are the Super Mario brothers, and I am-a Mario!

*Lucario half-heartedly chuckles*

Lucario: Nice performance...

*The brothers grab each others hands and syncronyzed blackflips back into the group, unfortunately they happen to land atop of somebody.

??????: Hyuragh! Why don't you two watch where you're flip-flopsying?!

Mario & Luigi: Wah!! We're sorry!!

Meta Knight: Hey calm down, it was an accident, if we can't get along then we will surely fall.

*Meta Knight whispers to Lucario*

Meta Knight: Hey, the person who those two landed on is Bowser...he is usually the villian in most cases...however I convinced him to aid in our quest.

Lucario: I see...(speaking at normal volume now) Hey, bowser, how are you...?

Bowser: I would be better had I not got sat on...

Lucario: Well, I am sure they didn't mean to...

Bowser: Yeah, right...

*there's a moment of silence, a few seconds later two robot-like creature's come in front of Lucario*

?????: Hello, glad to have you have you aboard.

Lucario: Great to be here, and you are...robots?

*one of the "robots" appear to be laughing, however robots don't really have any emotions, so Lucario figures it's a human...is it?*

?????: I am sorry, this is just my power suit, inside is a human, however my assist R.O.B. here IS a robot.

*R.O.B. begins to do the things robots do, twists and turns, cranks parts up and down, etc.*

Samus: I invented him to help me with things from everyday living to anything else that has to be done, I am Samus Aran.

*to Lucario's amazement, a women inside that thing? It didn't even sound like one, more like a voice being morphed through an intercom, which did kind of lead to him thinking it was a robot*

Lucario: Okay...if you say so, a lot of things are VERY misleading though...

Samus: That's understandable.

Meta Knight: And you have already met Kirby, who is still fixing us something tasty to eat.

Lucario: Couldn't recruit a lot of people?

*Meta Knight just grins at Lucario for a while, he then responds*

Meta Knight: You were just one of the few I COULD save...had I not, all hope would have been lost...

Lucario: "Save"? What do you mean?

Narrator: Seems like things are very grim for Meta Knight and the crew, tune in sometime again to find out the situation!

 

[Kinzer]

Okay this post is just asking a request from the readers, do you want me to make up a quick conclusion to chapter 4 tonight, or would any of you rather wait until tomorrow for me to post the conclusion and some of chapter 5? If nobody makes a post I will just by default choose option B.

 

[Guthix]

Dude, love the story. Keep it coming man! :D

 

[mantlecore77]

Ike: *Hmph* Name's Ike, don't forget it...

Meta Knight: Sorry, he isn't really friendly, however he fights for his friends.

LOL!!!
Another subtle and humorous moment that made me laugh. Good work!

 

[Guthix]

I know, I lol'd as well. I cant wait 'till the next installment!

 

[Kinzer]

LOL!!!
Another subtle and humorous moment that made me laugh. Good work!

Ah man I screwed up with the grammar there!...however if it makes you laugh out of irony, I'll just leave it there...anyway I'll post the next parts right now, will take some time though, so please be patient.

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter 4.5 continued)

Meta Knight: Well Lucario, by saving you I gave what little hope there was to saving the sacred game and the planet that is Smash, you could say that there would be more Smash Saviors, but it is really hard to find everybody, they are either lost and alone, or they are in captivity...

Lucario: In captivity...*Lucario snaps his fingers* tell me something Knight, you brought me here to aid you on your quest, but you have yet to tell me who is threatening this world!

Meta Knight: Oh, good grief, how fatally stupid of me! Well, I guess you're done taking your "break" and I can fill you in on what has to be done.

*Meta Knight looks into a certain direction, then turns to Lucario*

Meta Knight: Actually, it would be much better if you learned "first hand" what is going on, it would be better and faster than me explainig to you, if you trust me, then I want you to to go to the Southeastern part of the planet, and I want you to help me rescue those that are still down there, fighting on their own...If the smashers do not get help soon, they will lose faith and be subdued to the threat. I want you to go, and find "Sonic", he was brought to this planet as informal as you were... GO, there is no time to waste anymore!!!

Lucario: Yes sir!

*Lucario brings his hands close together, and aura begins to flow around him, he looks to be as if he is building up energy...*

Lucario:...Extreme Speed!!

*when Lucario would move in any way, he would be creating afterimages of himself, he was in no way going to let Meta Knight down, he knew he had to hurry.*

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter V - All Blues stick together)

Narrator: good evening, one and all, glad to see I still have an audience this far, because if you were amazed by the introduction, you will be thrown off your chair when you read the REAL part! Without further adu!

Lucario (in his mind): I can't put too much thought into anything else, or I will lose the Extreme Speed, I didn't want to ask, but Meta Knight did not fill me in on too much... he wants me to find this "Sonic" character" and if he is in danger, help him, but all he told me was to move Southeast...maybe Meta knight already knew Sonic was somewhere in that general direction, however he never did tell me what this guy looked like either...hmm...

*After a while of quick travel Lucario suddenly halts, just before he falls off a cliff, he stares into the distance, seems like something caught his attention...*

Lucario: Whoa, that was close, even though I moved fast, it wouldn't do any good had I jumped towards my death. Now...what is that over at those fields...

*Lucario begins to place his hands on his temple*

Lucario: Mind Teleportation!

*Lucario is now granted the ability to see miles away, he focuses on the sight, and what he sees is a spiky creature, fighting off hordes of shadow creatures...but these things look like that Toad that got him here in the first place!*

*Lucario finishes his trance*

Lucario: (he shakes his head, a Mind Teleportation sometimes distorts him for a second or two) That can't be, those things...*Lucario sighs* Meta Knight will have much more to answer if I get back to his ship.

*Lucario uses Extreme speed again, to come to the aid of the lone creature*

?????: *sigh* I...Can't...hold out much...longer...*sigh* these things...they're going to overpower me soon, but there's...absolutely nothing I...can do...Why did I have to...come here again...?

*As all hope seemed lost, the Spiky creature looked up into the air, unsure of whether this was a lieutenant of the sort among there shadows, or if it was the Goddess of Smash answering his prayers for help, however he was too exhausted to even stand on both legs and look up anymore, so he just waited for something to happen, little did he know though it was Lucario coming to his aid*

Lucario (Yelling): Don't give up, you are not alone, friend.

*Lucario begins to channel Aura flames in his hand*

Lucario: The aura is mine! AAAAAUUUUUUURRGHOOAA!!!!!

*As lucario was yelling his battleshout, he would be sending a barrage of aura spheres down into the ground, disintigrating anything that came into contact with them.*

?????: *chuckles* Alright...I am...saved... thank you...Palutena...

*The spiky just fell down and lay unconcious, Lucario would then fly down and carry the creature on his left shoulder*

Lucario: So some of you are still alive?! Die!!

*Lucario would raise his right hand in all directions around him and begin to Force Palm what little was left of the Shadow Toads, and after a while, he has eradicated all of them, he then lay down the spiny creature.*

Lucario: Hey, can you hear me, are you alright?

*no answer*

Lucario: *grrr* whether this is who I am looking for or not, he needs medical attention! Mind Teleportation!

*Lucario scans to see if he can find the halberd, what luck, after he located it, it just happened to be a strole-in-the-park away*

Lucario: Oh, well that was unecessary...maybe he already knew I was done, but no time to have crumpets and tea with myself...

*Lucario picks up the fallen creature and Extreme speeds back to the Halberds Main Deck*

Narrator: What were these Shadows Toads that were attacking this helpless person, and just how does Meta knight make it look like he knows what, where ,when, and how? stick around for tomorrow if you wish to know!

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter VI - Not another...)

(Okay, so I am deciding to post this a little bit earlier just because I actually woke up in the morning due to having a ngihtmare about time bombs today, but anyway...)

Narrator: Good morning, ladies and Gentlemen, for this day I have a laid back chapter once more, however there is a twist at the end. Just stay and listen...

Lucario: Meta Knight!!

Meta Knight: What is...oh I see *Meta Knight pulls out his intercom and presses one button*...Nurse Peach!

Peach (over the intercom): Yes, Sir?

Meta Knight: We have a patient in critical need of medical attention, get up here stat!

Peach: Right away!

(Lucario sets down the badly injured creature, then proceeds to interview Meta Knight awaiting for the nurse to get over here)

Lucario: I am sorry I could not complete the mission, but this thing was in dire need of help.

Meta Knight: Don't worry about it. I wanted to apologize, I know I didn't tell you much, but if I were to tell you the whole story Sonic might not have made it out of that alive...

Lucario: Wait, you mean this...-

Meta Knight: That's right! Good work Lucario, mission accomplished.

Lucario: So this is "Sonic"...

*The Nurse arrives, gasping at the horror she is witnessing*

Peach: Oh my, we need to get him in the med-room, and fast, he is barely breathing!

*Peach laid Sonic on top of the bed and rushed to her quarters*

lucario: I have never seen her before either...

Meta Knight: I understand that, however I am only suppose to dispatch the Nurse for emergency purposes only. Well...nothing else is going to happen...today, so I can either tell you more or if you're hungry, I am pretty sure Kirby has dinner ready for the crew.

*Lucario's stomach roars*

Lucario: Oh jeez, I hadn't even noticed, why not fill me in another time?

Meta Knight (laughing minorly): Of course.

Lucario: So what are we having anyway?

Meta Knight: I honostly could not tell you, most of the time though what Kirby makes is delicious.

*Lucario expects the worst, after going through so much he woudn't even let his gaurd down for food... Later in the Dining Hall of the Halberd, Meta Knight speaks through his intercom again*

Meta Knight: Everyone, dinner is served in five, report to the Dining Hall of the quarters or we will have Kirby eat your food for you!

*Lucario had nothing to worry about being that he followed Meta Knight, and just before the timer went off, everybody but the nurse (probably still tending to the patient) had already seated themselves with food on their plates and wine glasses placed next, forks and knives placed correctly...Talk about fancy for a little puffball that doesn't say too much...*

Meta Knight: Please help yourselves to the eatery, while you do I will just amke a small speech today... welcome Lucario to the Clan, good job on your first mission which I may mention as well had been only slighty informed of, and great job on the food Kirby, it looks fantastic!

Kirby: It good...?

Meta Knight: Yes, very!

*And just before Meta Knight and Lucario would help themselves to their food, everybody elses mouthes burst into flames!

Bowser: Wah, my mouth, I am shooting fireballs out of control!

Mario & Luigi: at least they come out there, ours is suppose to come through the gloves, HOT!!!!

*Marth just ran around the table like crazed swordsmen, as did Samus...luckily for R.O.B., his food was just one can of oil per day*

Ike: Nya!! Spicy curry, I would've rather starved had I known this!!

Meta Knight: Oh not again!!!...KIRBY!!!!!

Kirby: Run away!! Meta no pat pat Kirby!!

Lucario (In his head): I knew after being stuck inside that thing's disgestive system would I not trust what it would make, if that thing could swallow me whole imagine what else it could've done...

Narrator: Well, I hoped you enjoyed this chapter, I tried to make it as fancy/dramatic/funny as possible, tune in tomorrow for how Lucario will live on the Halberd during nightime.

 

[Kinzer]

This is a small request from me, if any of you spot any spelling/grammar that requires redoing, pelase quote the one line you see it, I might not be able to catch it, and I will fix it, now with my fat fingers I probably mixed up a letter here and there. This is greatly appreciated by me and other readers.

 

[mantlecore77]

*As all hope seemed lost, the Spiky creature looked up into the air, unsure of wather this was a lieutenant of the sort among there shadows, or if it was the Godess of Smash answering his prayers for help, however he was too exhausted to even stand on both legs and look up anymore, so he just waited for something to happen, little did he know though it was Lucario coming to his aid*

You spelled "whether" wrong.
You also spelled "Goddess" wrong.
I think that other than that you're good.

 

[Kinzer]

You spelled "whether" wrong.
You also spelled "Goddess" wrong.
I think that other than that you're good.

Oh man that's how it's spelled?! I am going to have to go back and fix it everytime I spelled it as "wather" now.

 

[mantlecore77]

Oh man that's how it's spelled?! I am going to have to go back and fix it everytime I spelled it as "wather" now.

Haha yeah sorry dude, that's the way the dictionary rolls.

 

[Kinzer]

Well I'll go do that tomorrow, I am too lazy to make anymore changes at the moment, I already brushed through a lot of my mistakes and corrected it, I'll just see if I can get anymore comments on the LoL for today, and add a new chapter tomorrow as usual.

 

[Talazala]

(Chapter V - All Blues stick together)



?????: *chuckles* Alright...I am...saved... thank you...Palutena...

Didn't you say that the person Lucario saved was Sonic? So why is he refering to Palutena? Palutena is the goddess of light in Kid Icarus?

 

[mantlecore77]

Didn't you say that the person Lucario saved was Sonic? So why is he refering to Palutena? Palutena is the goddess of light in Kid Icarus?

Yes... this is true. I was confused too.
'Cause, Kinzer, when you said "spiky creature" i thoght you meant Pit's head and then it was Sonic I was like, what the hell happened? Haha.

 

[Kinzer]

I now some of you are confused, and I will admit, I changed some of the story background to reflect on my story better. Yes I am well aware that Palutena is from the K.Icarus series, however in my story I refer to her as the "Goddess of Smash", I tried to make it look like the smashers have a "religion" if you will of their own, but if you don't like it, please say so and I can change it. i'll just wait to post my next chapter until I get a comment back.

Edit: If I do not get a comment on this today, I'll be sure to add two chapters for tomorrow, but I would rather get somebody to tell me so I don't continue to make a story nobody wants to read. Oh and that's strange, when I went back to edit some of the misspelled words it would eat the next word, so I had to retype this whole paragraph again, ouch. Yeah so I see ONE more mispelled word here, but I am not gonig to retype it again, just please tell me what you want from me, I need reviews from my readers darnit!

 

[Talazala]

Try typing out the correction somewhere else where it doesn't make you redo the paragraph. Then copy and paste it in the right spot. That usually works for me. If your doing it on Microsoft word, then theres a button on the bottom of the page where you can turn that overighting thing off.

 

[Kinzer]

Thanks, but...somehow it fixed itself...wierd...well anyway I'll get to posting the next two chapters of LoL very soon.

 

[Kinzer]

Chapter VII - So I herd ya liek Samus?)

Narrator: Good night...oh hold on a second, don't go to sleep now, otherwise, you won't be able to finish reading the seventh installment of the Legend of Lucario! Stick around and youl'll understand why I told you good night in the first place.

*After that conflict at the dinner table, Meta Knight and Lucario can be seen walking a hallway in the upper deck of the Halberd.*

Meta Knight: I hope you enjoyed MY dinner, sometimes Kirby adds just a little bit too much spices in his dinner...

Lucario: A little bit...?

*Meta Knight just stares at Lucario for a minute*

Meta Knight: Anyway, I got your own room prepared so you can bunk in for the night, while I take you to your quarters, shall I enlgihten you a little bit more on what's happening, and then you can call it a day?

Lucario: But of course...why did those things that attacked Sonic look like a distorted version of that Toad that got me here in the first place?

Meta Knight: The reason being is because those were one of the lesser ranks among the "Army of Shadow", do you still have that note?

Lucario: Ah, speaking of the note, how do you always happen to know everything?

Meta Knight: I just happen to be VERY keen...now if you don't mind, the letter?

Lucario: Oh yes that's right...*Lucario happens to remember which pocket he put it in after he got done looking at it the last time (OMG his pockets of lol!)* Here ya go... *Lucario hands the letter to Meta Knight, he then brushes through the letter very briefly*

Meta Knight: Alright, here we go, look her... *Meta Knight points to a specific part of the letter and reads it out loud to Lucario* "When you stumble upon the new world, you will be greeted by my master, Mario" You do recall that we happen to HAVE a Smash Savior whose name just "coincidentally" has the same name?

Lucario: Well yes, but where are you going with that?

Meta Knight: it means that their leader has taken upon the form of Mario...*Meta Knight holds his head up, it looks like he is doing some calculating in his head* it must've been that meteor that came this world, and it carried along with it a dark being...I don't know its purpose or how it came to be but one thing is clear, if it tends to cause harm, it must be dealt with...permanently...

Lucario: Uh-huh...

*the two eventually go to the end of a hallway with a door on the right*

Meta Knight: Well, here we are, I hope you enjoy what I could do to make it seem a bit more...roomy...I must take care of some things before I can head off to slumber, good night!

Lucario: 'Til tomorrow...

*Meta Knight flips his cape over him, then disappears, from here on out, the chapter will go mora around Meta Knight, and then somebody else after...Meta knight warps into the medical room, with Nuse Peach tending to Sonic who is still has a cast in most places*

Meta Knight: How is he, is he any better than what I last left him with you as?

Peach: Yes, he was awake a while ago, we talked a little bit and then he just fell asleep.

Meta Knight: Good to hear, call me over the intercom if he wakes up again.

Peach: Will do, marshall!

Meta Knight: Well, I am gonig to make sure the Halberd is still running at full capacity, I beleive you have a perceptive judgement, so if you think Sonic will be alright on his own, you can take five.

*Nurse Peach just nods her head...now we skip ahead an hour or two ahead into time, and into Ike's point of view, it's about that time where everybody should be asleep, except Ike, we find him in front of a door, sitting down and holding Ragnell over one shoulder, wonder why he is balantaly staring into the door...*

Ike(in his head): One day...one day...I always think...I know I am sometimes shy, and other times, I am obvious...but... You are the prettiest female I have seen in any world... you might have the wrong impression of me, I cannot review my behavior around you because I am not myself sometimes when I am around...I am patient, and if I am polite when I ask what you think of me, and maybe one day...*sigh*

*A metallic object appears in between Ike's legs, something blunt, next thing he knows another metallic object comes up in front of him, this one bearing a message, it reads "I know you're out here, and if you don't stop peeping at my door, remember what happened last time?" This was Samus' bedroom, and she is WELL aware of the fact that Ike fell for her, however she is in no way interested...Ike begins to think about the last time he tried doing what he was doing now...it ended up with him getting hit in that one place men never do want to get hit...so...*

Ike: Ah man!!

*Ike was in a hurry, a direct cut from Ragnell would not have been as painful as a low shot! He leaped into in the air, and started rushing towards the end of the hallway and he was running so fast he didn't see himself closing in on the wall so he bangs his head. Slowly losing sight, unable to hold his ground anymore, he dropped Ragnell and went out cold.*

Ike: Uuuuhhoo... vision...slowly...blurring...can't...concen-*fwant*

Samus(looking through a camera she installed outside her door): *Sigh* I'll admit that was particularly my fault, he is a fool...a fool in love...I just wish it wasn't with me, it gets so annoying sometimes...R.O.B., help the poor man to his bedroom.

*R.O.B.'s words can be seen on the monitor, he replied "Right away Ma'am"*

Narrator: Wow, what a stone cold gal, and to think how Ike is still persistant for her, but moving onward to the next chapter, the crew will be getting some "guests" in the morning.

 

[Kinzer]

So... what do y'all think of it so far, I still tried to avoid commenting on Palutena until I have heard from somebody, but how is the story so far?

Edit: Don't worry your pretty head off, chapter 8 will be posted today regardless of "whether" anybody says anything or not, just so you don't come sending the racoon goons after, I will tell you that I am making Wolf O'Donnell part of the Starfox team. it is my story, and I will do as I want (unless you the reader says different about it...sorry...) Okay, as I promised, chapter 8 will be posted as of 25 minutes from now...maybe sooner...

 

[Kinzer]

Chapter VIII - You're fighting for the wrong side!)

Narrator - 'Evening everybody, welcome to the 8th segment of LoL, nothing catchy I am going to say this time, I'll just get down to the chase.

*After night passed the sun was barely coming back up, everybody was still asleep, however there was a rude awakening, the ship suddenly felt like it was going through an earthquake, next thing everybody knows, this is eamed out through the speakers all over the Halberd*

EMERGENCY, EMERGENCY, 3 UNIDENTIFIED FLYING AIRCRAFTS ARE ATTACKING THE WARSHIP!! EMERGENCY, EMERGENCY, THE SHIPS AUTOMATED DEFENSES ARE WORKING TO SHOOT DOWN TO THE AIRCRAFTS... ALL UNITS TO THE MAIN DECK TO RETURN FIRE!! THIS IS NOT A DRILL, REPEAT, THI IS NOT A DRILL!! (the last part would keep repeating itself until meta Knight would get to the main deck and press a button to shut it off...)

Meta Knight (who just happen to get fully prepared a second after he was intruded, and he was already gliding to the main deck): What? aircrafts, but I don't know of the Army of Shadow having any aerial units...oh boy we're in for a fight...Oh Kirby hey, hold my hand really tight, you're going to help us...

Kirby: Yay, combat, combat, fight fight, haha!!

*meanwhile Lucario jumped out of his bed due to being suprised from the alarm*

Lucario: Oh great, Meta Knight has an alarm on this ship...Well, better go see what's all the fuss is...Extreme Speed!!

*yet again meanwhile Sonic was waking up from his dream, still in the med room having made a near full recovery*

Sonic: Oouhh...where I am I, the last thing I can remember was I was saved by something...

Peach: Oh Sonic, you're awake!

Sonic: Well, you don't look like you can cause any harm...what is that sound going off...?

Peach: That's the alarm, If you want, I can-

Sonic: Wait a minute...if I am still alive, then you must be my ally, therefore I can assist with the situation around here...what's going on?

Peach: You're in no condition to be going off anywhere, you still haven't fully recovered hence the cast that is still on your left arm.

Sonic: Ah, this thing...I prefer my feet anyway, whatever keeps me running, chao babycakes!! *Sonic just leaps up and touches the ground with his feet, then darts off around the ship, leaving a big mess in the medial room, I guess he wasn't the type to be held back and just wait around doing nothing...*

Peach: Man, Meta Knight is not going to like this...

Sonic: If I move fast enough, maybe I can get somewhere around this taco stand!...

*Marth quickly went to go see if Ike was still in his quarters, sure enough, he was still out cold*

Marth: Hey Ike, wake up, we got some action!!

*Ike snores*

Marth: Aww this can't be the "real" Ike, he is always anxious for some "fun", I don't even know how he manages to sleep through this. (Little did he know that Ike hit his head pretty hard against a wall, not a lot of things would be able to wake him up from that point) Well, can't just let him sleep here, or he won't let me live it down that I got all the excitment to myself...*Marth lifts Ike onto one of his shoulder, and carries Ragnell with the free hand that isn't holding Ike down.* Ugh good lord, how does he manage to hold this thing with one hand like a feather!? this is HEAVY!!!

*After a while everybody made their way up to the main deck excluding Bowser... he just happened to be REALLY slow, and Nurse Peach, who did not have any in combat capabilities and did not want to risk getting the only doctor on the ship out of commission.*

Meta Knight: Hey Sonic, glad to see you are awake!

Sonic: I'll assume it was you and everybody else around here that saved my life, be that true or not I'll help you with whatever is going around.

*Meta Knight nods, then turns off the alarm, he begins to scan around to see if he can see what is attacking the Halberd, sure enough, he sees what looks to be three small fighter planes, he then inputs in a bunch of buttons over a monitor and after a while it looked like he had a manual gun at his disposal*

Meta Knight: Got to aim this right, then maybe I'll force the pilots to come down to the ship where we can deal with them personally...

*Meta waits for the right moment to shoot 3 birds with one stone, t'was really hard being the ship was still under fire and shaking from any hit's it took*

Meta Knight: Now! *click*

*Pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew pew, 12 lazer shots used, 3 of them hitting the ships on their wings!! with no choice but to abandon their planes, the three pilots had ejected out of their planes parachutted and aimed towards the crew, eventually the figures become visible and land in front of the crew, one of them points a gun at Meta Knight and says*

Fox: This is Fox McCloud, status report on Arwings: shot down, as of now they should be plummeting for the ground, beyond repair once impact hits...however the mission is still under work... by the order of Mario, you must be eliminated.

Mario: What?! I am a Mario!!

Fox: Wrong, he also mentioned that an imposter might be aboard this ship...that must be you!

Mario: No you don't a understand!

?????: Pipe down you windbag, we won't fall for any of your lame tricks!

Meta Knight: He is right, you have been mislead by the leader of the Army of Shadow, we're the good guys!

Fox: Again wrong, we have reason to believe that it is you who is destroying this planet, the REAL Mario had shown us figures that look dangerously close to you, destroying random buildings around this planet...it is inevitible, we saw it with our own eyes...you being behind all this!

Mario: *Nuwargh!* How many times must we a say it, you have been a sent from the wrong side for the wrong reasons!!

????: Enough, we have wasted too much time talking to you lowlife mongrels, my claws are just itching to rake you *points at Mario* especially you, poser!

Mario: ...What did you just call me?!

Narrator: Cliffhanger, bum bum bum!! Tune in tomorrow to find the conclusion!

 

[Kinzer]

Okay so I forgot I had to do a chapter for yesterday and today being Saturday that makes two, I am sorry I didn't update, but these next two chapters you will love or minutes of your life back guaranteed!

Well okay I can't really manipulate time but you really will enjoy these next two chapters, I'll post them up in the next hour.

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter IX - selfless courage)

(I am going to forget about the narrator for now because I have no catchy phrases thistime, but it's not like it was really necessary in the first place, but anyway...)

????: Did you not hear me right, I said you're a poser!

Mario: Oh you want a posing, bub?! *Mario grabs a mushroom from under his overshirt* This IS a posing!

*bua wa wa! Mario grows in size*

Mario: You're a going to get it a now! *Mario charges at the still unknown person*

????: Hmph, if you think that doubling in size will intimidate me you are going to get another thing coming. *The lycanthrope leaps into the air and just footstool jumped Mario* Is that all you got? Well, time to slice you to bits! *rake*

Mario: Ah no! *shrinks*

????: The bigger they are, the harder they fall...I will be the one to take you down!

Luigi: Brother! Are you okay?

Mario: Yeah, I'm a fine...just a my pride hurts a little bit...

Sonic: I guess It's my turn to shine.

?????: Oh is that so, you're pretty cocky considering you don't have an arm.

Sonic: Like I need this thing?! HA!! *Sonic curls up into a ball* You're pretty overconfident yourself, you should never underestimate an opponent *He then blazes off, however he is caught off gaurd when he got bashed by something* D'ouh!

?????: You're right, I may be a bit arrogant, but that doesn't mean I can't show off here and then, especially if it gets the job done anyway... this way easy as Pizzacake!

Fox: Falco, I don't mind you having fun, but why do you always make those ludicrous food remarks...?

Falco: Hey, I don't tell you how to live.

Fox: Right...

Marth: Enough of this, this is ridiculous *he points his blade towards the lycanthrope* You, you seem to be the one who takes this most seriously, duel me!

???? *snarling*: You'll regret that, but we are going to have fun with this thing!

*The two chareg towards each other, Marth moving swiftly around the battlefield twirling his blade, Parrying claw attacks, jabbing when he saw the opportunity, what a graceful sight those two were, it wasn't a fight, but more like a dance!*

Marth: You're pretty sharp.

Wolf: As you are... Before I cut you up in pieces, you might as well know the name of your superior...I am Wolf, Wolf O'donnell.

Marth: As if that will ever happen, I am Marth, and you better know your place, you mutt!

Wolf: No, "master" you out to get it right, the name is hard to forget what I am, you won't get any mercy for that comment!

*Meanwhile*

Sonic: Ouch... what was that thing that kicked me off my spin attack...?

Falco: A reflector, now I am suppose to keep it on to myself but I found a better use for it, and it worked when it shook you, did it not?

Sonic: Correct, but this time I won't hold back, I am speed *Sonic curls up into a ball again, this time trailing around much faster, too fast for even Falco to keep his eye on him*

Falco: What? I am looking around me but he couldn't have disappeared! Where did he go?!

*Sonic leaped into the air after circling around Falco to throw him off*

Sonic: LOOK UP!!

Falco: Huh!

*Before Falco could gaurd himself Sonic had popped out of his ball form and kicked Falco while he was coming down. (POW!!) Direct hit over the head, the impact was so great it knocked the daylight out of Falco.*

Sonic: *tsk tsk tsk* And for your information, it is A PIECE-OF-CAKE, not "Pizzacake"!
(Please don't send me private messages about it, I know the joke, and outside the story I prefer Pizzacake being a Falco secondary.)

Fox: That's enough, Wolf, we spent too much time here *Fox presses a button on his sleeve* I will take care of you imposters personally... and here we are, within view...Landmaster!!

*Fox jumps high into the air, next thing everybody knows, a tank is on the Halberd ship, how something as monstrous and heavy could get into the air without any flying capabilities is but a mystery to everybody but the Starfox team, and conviniently after he made that very loud shout Ike begins to come to*

Fox (over a speaker on the tank): Just because we were outnubmered does not mean we will lose, I'll take you all out with one stone! *The Landmaster begins to advance, anybody unfortunate enough to get under that thing would be crushed flat.*

All the Smash Saviors sychronized: Ike, get out of the way!

Ike: ...Uh oh...*but instead of running away Ike just locked Ragnell in place, what was he doing?!* Come, let's see just how tough you are!

*The Landmaster just came closer and closer, Ike was standing as still as a statue, eventually it came to Ike at swinging range*

Ike: ...YOU'RE OPEN!!

*As quick as he said that he just swung Ragnell at what seemed to operate the thing's movement and BAM, he just desolated the tank!! The thing could no lnoger move however it didn't mean it could still do certain things*

Fox (Speaking to himself inside the Landmaster): All movement has been lost, but other systems still seem operational...I can fire lazers at them to take care of them from a distance.

*and so did Fox fire a landmaster Lazer, this hit everybody except Wolf who knew to keep his Reflecter up, Samus taking the hardest hit...so hard it made her suit unusable until repairs.*

Fox: Well that should've thrown them off their feet, but this thing only has more lazer to fire, I knew we forgot something when we left for this mission! But it seems that one of them won't be able to survive another direct hit...*Fox puts in some coordinates on the tank, the gun then points at Samus which without any armor would surely die from any good hard blow*

Fox (over the speaker on the Tank): Alright, you are all somewhat lucky, this thing only has one more shot, however it doesn't mean I won't put it to good use, good ridance!

*Noticing the gun was pointed at Samus, Ike just rushed to her defense*

Ike: NOO!!!

*He then just stood in front of her to take the blow!*

Ike: Gaugh!

*The impact was so hard that it thrusted Ike backwards and knocked Samus off her feet, however the damage done to her was minor compared to Ike...* ( I Found some fitting music for what you are about to read, just play the video at 4:42, the rest is just if you are curious...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5paRFlAsRyA&feature=related )

Samus: Oh dear Palutena, IKE!!

*Ike was so badly hit from the shot that you could look at him and not be able to find one spot on him that was completly free of dirt or residue from the lazer.*

Ike (his voice was very silent and sounded like it was dying): I...can't...afford...to...lose...you...forever... *he coughs up a little bit of blood* Oh...look at that... I got...your heavenly face...dirty...*chuckling*

Samus: You idiot, you're losing life and you're more worried about how I look?!

Ike: ...Sassy...*He tryies to chuckle a little bit more, and he licks his thumbs, attempting to clean the blood off her cheek, but before he could finish his body goes limp*

Samus: IKE!!!!!!!

 

[Kinzer]

(Chapter 9... and a half - It can't be...it isn't so...but will he...?"

*Fox jumps out of his Landmaster, then goes on to say*: ...This can't be right, only a real person who would sacrifice his own self-being would begin to think of others, especially if they belong to the Army of Shadows...

Mario: Now do you a understand, you hada the wrong people...It's a great that you know now but...it might a be too late.

Meta Knight (over the intercom): Peach, drop what you're doing now and get up here, we have somebody in an even worse state then when we found Sonic!!

Samus: Ike, please wake up, I am sorry I hadn't treated you fairly, please don't die! *tears fall out of her eyes*

Fox: What have I done... that man right there laying down has probably just done the most heroistic act anybody could do, and he didn't even deserve it...

Lucario: It's not your fault, this Shadow Mario is probably really good at manipulating people...I can sense the lifeforce of other beings around me, and looking at Ike...his flame within him is burning very dim...

*Peach finally arrives to come, she knew that if Ike did not get any aid he would not make it out alive, after rushing him to the medical quarters Bowser fianlly arrives at the main deck*

Bowser: Hey what happened, I was a bit slow to come up here, but why is Ike where he is now...?

Meta Knight: It's rather complicated to explain without having you see it for yourself, just hope for the best, I am skeptical of his health...

*After a while everybody was waiting in the room outside the medical quarters, hours passed and no word from Peach on Ike...it felt like an eternity until...*

Peach: I did everything I could...but, I cannot revive him...

*Everybody just looks down, expecting the worst to come*

Peach: Excuse me, you are Fox right, uhm I can assume that you along with your two buddies are one of us now right...so can I do anything for that bird fellow of yours?

Fox: He'll be fine, he just can't take a hard hit on the head, I am sure he will come to eventually.

Sonic: Yeah, sorry about that...

Fox: However nurse, is there absolutely nothing you can do for that man?

Peach: Now just hold on for a second there, it is true I said I couldn't bring him back to life, but somebody else might be able to ressurect him...Samus... *Peach gestures her to come close, seems like she didn't want anybody her to know, she talks in Samus' ear*

Marth: Peach, if we may know, why are you only telling Sam-

Peach: You'll see *wink*.

*Samus just nods, whatever Peach told her, she was sure of what it was, she then goes into the room where Ike was laying, after a minute or two there is this loud cheer...*

Ike: WAAAAAAAAAAAHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

Sonic: Woah jeez, what did you do, if anything he is probably darting around this place ALMOST as fast as I would be!

Peach: You men wouldn't understand...that one on the other hand does. *giggle*

Meta Knight: *groan* Females...they just want to mess with us...even I don't have the slightest clue what she is talking about, but I am glad to see him running around let alone breathing normally. (I am sorry if this offended any of my readers, just send me a PM and I will edit this line to make it more suitable for everybody)

 

[mantlecore77]

Fox: Falco, I don't mind you having fun, but why do you always make those ludicrous food remarks...?

Bread.

*Marth lifts Ike onto one of his shoulder, and carries Ragnell with the free hand that isn't holding Ike down.* Ugh good lord, how does he manage to hold this thing with one hand like a feather!? this is HEAVY!!!

Answer: Ike is more man than Marth.

 

[Kinzer]

Okay so I am going to savior this moment for myself, this threa has offically gotten over 300 SPARTA!!!!!! views, and also I am closing on on chapter 10 of the LoL...so I want all you lurkers out there, even if it is only one of you, to tell me what you think of it so far.

I mean like on any scale you choose, how is my story, is it good, should I be more descriptive, maybe less...? Maybe should I make my stories longer, or shorter...how about if you wanted me to not use character voice transitions and instead make it into a paragraph...maybe more sex scenes...(you perverts...) Anything you think could improve my story if you don't already think it is at its best. Any criticism is welcomed other than "you suck" or anything like that without any reason behind it, oh and too encourage at least SOMEBODY to fill out this request I won't release chapter 10 and so forth until then, so yeah. I am a jerk, but what're you gonna do about it? XD

Edit: Hey I just noticed I passed 300 post counts as well, make a duplicate Sparta city.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

post more i love this story just the way it is

 

[Deleted member]

This story is brilliant. Keep it up

 

[Kinzer]

Alright fantastic, good to know I don't need to change anything, people like it the way it is, however I am going to take a week break just to think of the plot, this sucks though, I already have the end planned out and he beginning too, but I never came up with a mid-section. XD Anyway be back here on Sunday Aug 10, and I will continue to post a new chapter everyday from there.

 

[Steel_Dragon]

Alright fantastic, good to know I don't need to change anything, people like it the way it is, however I am going to take a week break just to think of the plot, this sucks though, I already have the end planned out and he beginning too, but I never came up with a mid-section. XD Anyway be back here on Sunday Aug 10, and I will continue to post a new chapter everyday from there.

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