Super Smash Bros. Brawl Comic

[supersonicdjs]

A little sprite comic I made in my spare time! I might make more!

 

[Ryu Phoenix]

It could use some words and sound effects to lighten it up a bit, but otherwise, it's very well done. ^_^

 

[gaph2000]

Where did you get those sprites in the VS. panel? Theyre really good, if you made them!

 

[supersonicdjs]

I didnt make those sprites. Some guy on DevantArt made them. Ill find his name later and give credit!

New round today!


EDIT: Credit to AbyssWolf for beggining 3D sprites!

 

[supersonicdjs]

Sorry for double post! But heres the new comic!

 

[supersonicdjs]

BUMP! Its been too long.

 

[demoncaterpie]

Pretty cool dude!

You might want to work on the structure of your comic. For instance, maybe you could do some close-ups of the characters when they're doing attacks, so we aren't looking at the same shot the entire time. Some dialogue would also be pretty interesting.

Look at what they do in real comics, and try to emulate that in your comic.

 

[motsalogeL]

Instead of them just being normal smash bros battles on drugs mak them more exciting, with close ups, different panels, more exciting poses, etc.