snake video constructive criticism wanted

[echos]

this is a match vs one of my not so great friends iv had a lot more intense more technical fights but id still like some feed back from fellow snake players thanks guys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CWqHJPEGtjE

 

[Deadlypudding]

I didn't a lot of grenade dropping it seemed. You used Fair at a couple of awkward times. Some of your dash attacks probably should have been Usmash cancelled. Not enough use of tilts, and I'm not sure what your edguarding strategy was.

To be frank, your friend wasn't that good and you clearly outclassed him. For just playing him you seemed good. As a measure to others on this board, you'll need a lot more work. You're decent for the kind of competition you have to play against.

And this is kind of minor, but I didn't like the music.

Just saw a video of you as Samus and you were pretty good with her. I'm no Samus player, but you did some things with I'd never think to do. Though you still died a few times that you let your guard down.

 

[abit_rusty]

Judging from only this match, I feel you just did one-too-many fairs that at times cost you albeit minor damage, but against better players, the consequences are more dire. Fair is very punishable, so wise use of it is crucial. Also consider brushing up your mortar slide (unless those only-dash attacks were done on purpose), both with and w/o contact.

You didn't have much to worry about against that GaW though, horrid spacing...he needs the critique more if you ask me >.>

But, hey keep up the good work.

 

[napZzz]

your friend has a terrible game and watch.

 

[echos]

thanks a lot guys and after watching that again yeah way to many forward airs hes bad so i pretty much was screwing around with those but ill post another match tomorrow of a more serious match i appreciate it and keep watching I'll keep posting

 

[mr_kennedy44]

That was a horrible Game&Watch. Now then, you should learn to "cook" your 'nades. You also suffer from what I do, "passive edgeguarding". You tend to just stand there while your opponent recovers, use the Nikita to edgeguard. It is a safe way to edgeguard but you have to read where your opponent will be though if you want to hit them. Don't use Fair as much as you did. Decent Snake all together.

 

[Ice9]

Yes Echos/Valor, You seemed to spank my little brother quite nicely

 

[echos]

That was a horrible Game&Watch. Now then, you should learn to "cook" your 'nades. You also suffer from what I do, "passive edgeguarding". You tend to just stand there while your opponent recovers, use the Nikita to edgeguard. It is a safe way to edgeguard but you have to read where your opponent will be though if you want to hit them. Don't use Fair as much as you did. Decent Snake all together.

hey thanks man, I was getting stupid with the forward airs i need to work on my edge game indeed tho i'll work on it over the weekend and post a vid of my progress once again i appreciate the feed back