Kid5day
Smash Rookie
Hello this is a fanfic based on super smash bros. It's based on all of the games, (not only smash bros but the nintendo characters' series games as well) but mostly Melee since I don't have brawl yet. I will probably get it before I finish the fanfic though. It starts off only using Hyrule and SSBM stages however it'll get into a lot of game series main playing areas in, like Brinstar, Earthbound, Hyrule, F-Zero, etc.
Update 1:
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Fire engulfing everything… Screams of pain chill the air, so much so that the flames crisping his arms feel as though they were nothing. He saw many faces, many souls, being tortured from it, however, he only had one face in his mind. “Zelda… Zelda, My girl, she could be dying now!” Link ran out of the city, through the forest, the tunic of his arm still flaming, he had finally put it out once he saw his bone through the seared flesh, “hmm, funny how it didn’t hurt,” he thought. As he was running through the forest he noticed that every turn he took brought him back to the beginning of the trail. “Of course, this **** always brings me back here, I gotta remember the right way.” Link couldn’t remember though, the cries of the village were too loud, he was too surprised, he was too scared… Link decided to take a left on his first turn. He wasn’t in the beginning of the trail anymore, but now he was lost.
He heard a voice exclaim in a deep, almost evil voice, “Link, the path to your destiny is through here.” He looked around frantically only to see Saria, the sage of the forest, standing on a tree, above the right passageway. Something was wrong though, her eyes were pure white, and that definitely wasn’t her voice.
“Saria, what’s wrong with you, if you know the way, get the **** outta here!” he screamed.
Saria didn’t move, or blink even, like she was in a trance, like she was possessed. The voice came through again, her lips moved to the words, but it didn’t feel like she was the one speaking them, “Hero of time, you should hurry, the princess is waiting for you.” At that, her body burst into flames, crumbling within seconds.
Link tried to forget about Saria. ‘She was gone, nothing I could do,’ he convinced himself, although the image of her burning was still fresh in his mind. He ran to the black passage between the trees, the moment Link touched the blackness, he fell, fell through a never ending darkness. He felt as if I was falling for hours, though it had only been seconds.
Link dropped onto a hard metal, a large hexagonal platform, floating above what looked to be nothing. Although he felt nothing from the impact he took a while to get up. Link managed to get up fast enough to see a giant white hand about to smack him in the face. The impact of the hand looked deadly, but he only moved a couple of feet, and felt nothing, once again. The hand looked like a white floormaster, only much, much larger, with a more rounded, fuller body floating several feet in the air. Link pulled out his bow, only to be interrupted by a voice, the same voice Saria had, only this voice seemed to come from the air itself, “Dreams are the only way a soul can warn a man of a pain coming close, often dreams are more real than reality itself.”
“Wake up,” someone said, “it’s 9’o clock, get your skinny *** out of bed and look for a job.”
“God **** it Zelda,” Link retaliated, still groggy from being woken up so abruptly “I had a job, and it was saving you, it’s not like I can just cut a piece of grass and find some rupees there. I took all the jobs I could, nothin’ pays good anymore!”
“Oh don’t start that bull**** again, at least I provide for this family,” she screamed.
“What family!?” he yelled, “it’s just you and me, we eat like everyone else does, ****. You think you’re so **** special just ‘cause your daddy owns a castle? Well get a newsflash, the town, no scratch that, the world, is ****ed up. It’s been 3 years since G-man was in control, and we still don’t have no crops and ****.” She simply walked out, unable to think of a way to end this nicely. Because of the food shortage, Hyrule had gone to hell. Everyone got worst and worst, till it got to the point where it was natural to insult a friend, or lover.
“Everyone expects me to clean everything up, like I could just plant a magic seed or something, and all the worlds plants would grow back,” Link said to himself “Sure I’m the hero of time, but a man can only do so much. Screw it, I shouldn’t think so much about what happened before, I should pay attention to now.”
“Man that dream was weird.” Link couldn’t stop thinking about it, he knew he couldn’t feel anything, but he still had thought that everything was too realistic to be fake.
“What did that thing mean when it said that, ‘Dreams are the only way a soul can warn of a pain coming close; often dreams are more real than reality itself…’ It sure felt real…”
“I should talk to G-man about this, he knows a lot about magic and souls. Plus he can float, which is just plain awesome, even though it has nothing to do with the dream.” Link mused to himself. He decided to go apologize to Zelda first.
“LINK!” Someone screamed, before he could walk out. I could recognize that voice anywhere, Zelda was in trouble. I ran out the door. What I saw scared me more than death itself could.
Fire engulfing everything… Screams of pain chill the air, so much so that the flames crisping his arms feel as though they were nothing. He saw many faces, many souls, being tortured from it, however, he only had one face in his mind.
The only difference from this and Link’s dream was that Link could see what was causing the fire; Giant hands. White hands just like the one in his dream, only there were over 20 of them, dropping bombs, shooting missiles, punching down buildings. They were geniuses of death, masters of pain, Master hands.
Link felt the fire on his arm very suddenly as he got out of shock, ridding of it much faster than in his dream. The damage was minimal, just a flesh wound. With that solved Link frantically screamed to the hands “Stop!!!”
Unlike he would have imagined, they actually did stop, which scared him. One of them grabbed him by his tunic, and floated away, so high up that there was no air anymore, he struggled for a couple of minutes, grasping for air, but fate won, and Link passed out.
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Don't worry there's a better storyline coming later, this was more of an introduction, which will be heavily revised later. Tell me what you think, questions, comments, complaints, and criticism appreciated.
Update 1:
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Fire engulfing everything… Screams of pain chill the air, so much so that the flames crisping his arms feel as though they were nothing. He saw many faces, many souls, being tortured from it, however, he only had one face in his mind. “Zelda… Zelda, My girl, she could be dying now!” Link ran out of the city, through the forest, the tunic of his arm still flaming, he had finally put it out once he saw his bone through the seared flesh, “hmm, funny how it didn’t hurt,” he thought. As he was running through the forest he noticed that every turn he took brought him back to the beginning of the trail. “Of course, this **** always brings me back here, I gotta remember the right way.” Link couldn’t remember though, the cries of the village were too loud, he was too surprised, he was too scared… Link decided to take a left on his first turn. He wasn’t in the beginning of the trail anymore, but now he was lost.
He heard a voice exclaim in a deep, almost evil voice, “Link, the path to your destiny is through here.” He looked around frantically only to see Saria, the sage of the forest, standing on a tree, above the right passageway. Something was wrong though, her eyes were pure white, and that definitely wasn’t her voice.
“Saria, what’s wrong with you, if you know the way, get the **** outta here!” he screamed.
Saria didn’t move, or blink even, like she was in a trance, like she was possessed. The voice came through again, her lips moved to the words, but it didn’t feel like she was the one speaking them, “Hero of time, you should hurry, the princess is waiting for you.” At that, her body burst into flames, crumbling within seconds.
Link tried to forget about Saria. ‘She was gone, nothing I could do,’ he convinced himself, although the image of her burning was still fresh in his mind. He ran to the black passage between the trees, the moment Link touched the blackness, he fell, fell through a never ending darkness. He felt as if I was falling for hours, though it had only been seconds.
Link dropped onto a hard metal, a large hexagonal platform, floating above what looked to be nothing. Although he felt nothing from the impact he took a while to get up. Link managed to get up fast enough to see a giant white hand about to smack him in the face. The impact of the hand looked deadly, but he only moved a couple of feet, and felt nothing, once again. The hand looked like a white floormaster, only much, much larger, with a more rounded, fuller body floating several feet in the air. Link pulled out his bow, only to be interrupted by a voice, the same voice Saria had, only this voice seemed to come from the air itself, “Dreams are the only way a soul can warn a man of a pain coming close, often dreams are more real than reality itself.”
“Wake up,” someone said, “it’s 9’o clock, get your skinny *** out of bed and look for a job.”
“God **** it Zelda,” Link retaliated, still groggy from being woken up so abruptly “I had a job, and it was saving you, it’s not like I can just cut a piece of grass and find some rupees there. I took all the jobs I could, nothin’ pays good anymore!”
“Oh don’t start that bull**** again, at least I provide for this family,” she screamed.
“What family!?” he yelled, “it’s just you and me, we eat like everyone else does, ****. You think you’re so **** special just ‘cause your daddy owns a castle? Well get a newsflash, the town, no scratch that, the world, is ****ed up. It’s been 3 years since G-man was in control, and we still don’t have no crops and ****.” She simply walked out, unable to think of a way to end this nicely. Because of the food shortage, Hyrule had gone to hell. Everyone got worst and worst, till it got to the point where it was natural to insult a friend, or lover.
“Everyone expects me to clean everything up, like I could just plant a magic seed or something, and all the worlds plants would grow back,” Link said to himself “Sure I’m the hero of time, but a man can only do so much. Screw it, I shouldn’t think so much about what happened before, I should pay attention to now.”
“Man that dream was weird.” Link couldn’t stop thinking about it, he knew he couldn’t feel anything, but he still had thought that everything was too realistic to be fake.
“What did that thing mean when it said that, ‘Dreams are the only way a soul can warn of a pain coming close; often dreams are more real than reality itself…’ It sure felt real…”
“I should talk to G-man about this, he knows a lot about magic and souls. Plus he can float, which is just plain awesome, even though it has nothing to do with the dream.” Link mused to himself. He decided to go apologize to Zelda first.
“LINK!” Someone screamed, before he could walk out. I could recognize that voice anywhere, Zelda was in trouble. I ran out the door. What I saw scared me more than death itself could.
Fire engulfing everything… Screams of pain chill the air, so much so that the flames crisping his arms feel as though they were nothing. He saw many faces, many souls, being tortured from it, however, he only had one face in his mind.
The only difference from this and Link’s dream was that Link could see what was causing the fire; Giant hands. White hands just like the one in his dream, only there were over 20 of them, dropping bombs, shooting missiles, punching down buildings. They were geniuses of death, masters of pain, Master hands.
Link felt the fire on his arm very suddenly as he got out of shock, ridding of it much faster than in his dream. The damage was minimal, just a flesh wound. With that solved Link frantically screamed to the hands “Stop!!!”
Unlike he would have imagined, they actually did stop, which scared him. One of them grabbed him by his tunic, and floated away, so high up that there was no air anymore, he struggled for a couple of minutes, grasping for air, but fate won, and Link passed out.
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Don't worry there's a better storyline coming later, this was more of an introduction, which will be heavily revised later. Tell me what you think, questions, comments, complaints, and criticism appreciated.
