RMT! My favorite Pokemon in one team

[KirbyMan3000]

Dragonite @ Leftovers
Male
Inner Focus
Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
________________________
Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Thunder Punch
Earthquake

Lead; Physical sweeper. Dragon Claw for STAB and neutral damage to all types but steel types and gets Kingdra/Palkia x2, Ice Beam to take care of pesky Garchomps, other Dragonites, Salamences and Rayquazas. Thunder Punch for water types likely to carry an ice beam and Earthquake to counter steel types.

Lucario @ Choice Specs
Female
Steadfast
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 176 Spd, 80 Def
_________________________
Calm Mind
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse

Special sweeper; Calm Mind self explanatory, Aura Sphere for STAB and never misses, Dark Pulse to take care of Psychics and Ghosts and Dragon Pulse for neutral damage to all types but Steel.

Ninetales @ Focus Band
Female
Flash Fire
Timid
EVs: 252 Spd, 176 Def, 80 Sp Def
_________________________
Attract
Toxic
Confuse Ray
Flamethrower

Annoyer; Flamethrower for STAB and an attack move, Toxic for deadly poison, Confuse Ray to cause half a chance of damage to enemy, and Attract to lessen chances of attack on Ninetales as well.

Gardevoir @ Wise Glasses
Female
Trace
Modest
EVs: 172 Hp, 136 Def, 136 Sp Def, 46 Sp Atk, 26 Spd
__________________________
Psychic
Calm Mind
Thunderbolt
Will-O-Wisp

Special Sweeper/Wall; Psychic for STAB, Thunderbolt covers most everything else, Calm Mind obvious and Will-O-Wisp gives better chances against physical pokemon.

Sceptile @ Lum Berry
Male
Overgrow
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
_________________________
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Special Sweeper; Energy Ball for STAB, Focus Blast to handle most Steel types, Dragon Pulse for neutral to all but Steel and takes care of pesky dragons and Toxic is self explanatory.

Milotic @ Leftovers
Female
Marvel Scale
Bold
EVs: 252 Def, 106 Sp Atk, 56 Sp Def, 12 Spd
__________________________
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Mirror Coat

Double Wall; Surf for STAB, Ice Beam for dragons and neutral damage to Kingdra/Palkia, Recover is obvious and Mirror Coat to counter any Grass/Electric attackers and possibly try to counter any Water threats.



So yeah, that's my team. Tried making the most balanced team possible using my favorites. Constructive criticism please!!

 

[shadydentist]

I wouldn't use dragonite as a lead. Many leads are equipped to deal with dragons, and I would hide dragonite until the major threats are neutralised or at least identified. And dragonite has better things to be doing than ice beaming, i think. Try dragon dance instead.

Get rid of choice specs on your lucario. Either that, or get rid of calm mind.

Why do you have choice band on nintales if it has 3 statuses?

Psychic and thunderbolt don't have such good type coverage.

Thats all for now.

 

[Aryman]

Too many special attackers. A Blissey could tank your team pretty well. Maybe you can make Lucario a physical attacker.

Also I like Toxic on Milotic over Mirror Coat. Far too many thunderpunches out there.

 

[O D I N]

Why a Jolly Dragonite? That's cutting his power on Ice Beam.

If he has Dragon Claw, he should be okay against Salamence and Garchomp (Dragon is good against Dragon, no?). I'd give him Dragon Dance too. Thunder punch is nice, as is Earthquake.

Can't comment on much else. But the Dragonite bothered me. Had to say something.

 

[titus]

Dragonite @ Leftovers
Male
Inner Focus
Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
________________________
Dragon Claw
Ice Beam<WTH? As suggested b4, DragonDance is good.
Thunder Punch
Earthquake

Lead; Physical sweeper. Dragon Claw for STAB and neutral damage to all types but steel types and gets Kingdra/Palkia x2, Ice Beam to take care of pesky Garchomps, other Dragonites, Salamences and Rayquazas That is what DragonClaw is for.
Thunder Punch for water types likely to carry an ice beam and Earthquake to counter steel types.

Lucario @ Choice Specs
Female
Steadfast
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 176 Spd, 80 Def
_________________________
Calm Mind
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse

Special sweeper; Calm Mind self explanatory, Aura Sphere for STAB and never misses, Dark Pulse to take care of Psychics and Ghosts and Dragon Pulse for neutral damage to all types but Steel.

Good

Ninetales @ Focus Band
Female
Flash Fire
Timid
EVs: 252 Spd, 176 Def, 80 Sp Def
_________________________
Attract
Toxic
Confuse Ray
Flamethrower

Annoyer; Flamethrower for STAB and an attack move, Toxic for deadly poison, Confuse Ray to cause half a chance of damage to enemy, and Attract to lessen chances of attack on Ninetales as well.

Looks okay.

Gardevoir @ Wise Glasses
Female
Trace
Modest
EVs: 172 Hp, 136 Def, 136 Sp Def, 46 Sp Atk, 26 Spd
__________________________
Psychic
Calm Mind
Thunderbolt
Will-O-Wisp

Special Sweeper/Wall; Psychic for STAB, Thunderbolt covers most everything else, Calm Mind obvious and Will-O-Wisp gives better chances against physical pokemon.

You may want to consider leftovers.

Sceptile @ Lum Berry
Male
Overgrow
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
_________________________
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Special Sweeper; Energy Ball for STAB, Focus Blast to handle most Steel types, Dragon Pulse for neutral to all but Steel and takes care of pesky dragons and Toxic is self explanatory.

Good.

May want to consider LeafStorm over Toxic.

Milotic @ Leftovers
Female
Marvel Scale
Bold
EVs: 252 Def, 106 Sp Atk, 56 Sp Def, 12 Spd
__________________________
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Mirror Coat

Double Wall; Surf for STAB, Ice Beam for dragons and neutral damage to Kingdra/Palkia, Recover is obvious and Mirror Coat to counter any Grass/Electric attackers and possibly try to counter any Water threats.

Maybe consider switching mirror coat for ConfuseRay or Hypnosis.

So yeah, that's my team. Tried making the most balanced team possible using my favorites. Constructive criticism please!!

The typing is good, it's a nice team, even better if you like all the pokemon in it.

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

Dragonite @ Leftovers
Male
Inner Focus
Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
________________________
Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Thunder Punch
Earthquake

Lead; Physical sweeper. Dragon Claw for STAB and neutral damage to all types but steel types and gets Kingdra/Palkia x2, Ice Beam to take care of pesky Garchomps, other Dragonites, Salamences and Rayquazas. Thunder Punch for water types likely to carry an ice beam and Earthquake to counter steel types.

As stated before, use Dragon Dance over Ice Beam. Use Life Orb.

Lucario @ Choice Specs
Female
Steadfast
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 176 Spd, 80 Def
_________________________
Calm Mind
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse

Special sweeper; Calm Mind self explanatory, Aura Sphere for STAB and never misses, Dark Pulse to take care of Psychics and Ghosts and Dragon Pulse for neutral damage to all types but Steel.

If a Pokemon with Choice Specs uses Calm Mind, they'll be stuck into doing that move until they switch out. Either remove Choice Specs or remove Calm Mind.

Ninetales @ Focus Band
Female
Flash Fire
Timid
EVs: 252 Spd, 176 Def, 80 Sp Def
_________________________
Attract
Toxic
Confuse Ray
Flamethrower

Annoyer; Flamethrower for STAB and an attack move, Toxic for deadly poison, Confuse Ray to cause half a chance of damage to enemy, and Attract to lessen chances of attack on Ninetales as well.

Why use Focus Band when you're using three status attacks and a Special Attack? Give it Leftovers. Use 252 EVs in Special Attack, and replace Attract and Confuse Ray with Energy Ball and Hypnosis.

Gardevoir @ Wise Glasses
Female
Trace
Modest
EVs: 172 Hp, 136 Def, 136 Sp Def, 46 Sp Atk, 26 Spd
__________________________
Psychic
Calm Mind
Thunderbolt
Will-O-Wisp

Special Sweeper/Wall; Psychic for STAB, Thunderbolt covers most everything else, Calm Mind obvious and Will-O-Wisp gives better chances against physical pokemon.

Make the EV spread be:

252 HP / 136 Def / 108 Spd / 12 Sp. Def

I'd use Leftovers.

Sceptile @ Lum Berry
Male
Overgrow
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
_________________________
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Special Sweeper; Energy Ball for STAB, Focus Blast to handle most Steel types, Dragon Pulse for neutral to all but Steel and takes care of pesky dragons and Toxic is self explanatory.

I'd use HP Fire.

Milotic @ Leftovers
Female
Marvel Scale
Bold
EVs: 252 Def, 106 Sp Atk, 56 Sp Def, 12 Spd
__________________________
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Mirror Coat

Double Wall; Surf for STAB, Ice Beam for dragons and neutral damage to Kingdra/Palkia, Recover is obvious and Mirror Coat to counter any Grass/Electric attackers and possibly try to counter any Water threats.

Looks good.

So yeah, that's my team. Tried making the most balanced team possible using my favorites. Constructive criticism please!!

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[titus]

Anything that has DragonDance, CalmMind or any other stat-uping move should have leftovers, or some item that allows it to live longer. Which means that pretty much everything but sceptile is gonna want to have leftovers.

@Wii4Mii
What would you use HP fire against?(on the sceptile)

and you do have too many special attackers. maybe switch lucario for metagross, or make him physical.

 

[9Kplus1]

In my opinion, Toxic should go.
Oh yeah and W4M, you just insulted Gardevoir!

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

Anything that has DragonDance, CalmMind or any other stat-uping move should have leftovers, or some item that allows it to live longer. Which means that pretty much everything but sceptile is gonna want to have leftovers.

@Wii4Mii
What would you use HP fire against?(on the sceptile)

and you do have too many special attackers. maybe switch lucario for metagross, or make him physical.

Better type coverage. Hits 10/17 types Super Effective.

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

Edit: @ ILoveCelebi!!208

...How?

 

[titus]

Hmm, maybe you should make the dragonite like this:
Dragonite@Leftovers
Nature: -def/+spd
EVs: Something like 252Atk/6SpAtk/252Spd
DragonDance
Earthquake
Thunderbolt
DragonClaw

Because if thunderpunch is for Gyarados then thunderbolt would most likely do more damage due to Intimidate.

@Wii4Mii
that moveset would be just like the specszard moveset at smogon. :S

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

Hmm, maybe you should make the dragonite like this:
Dragonite@Leftovers
Nature: -def/+spd
EVs: Something like 252Atk/6SpAtk/252Spd
DragonDance
Earthquake
Thunderbolt
DragonClaw

Because if thunderpunch is for Gyarados then thunderbolt would most likely do more damage due to Intimidate.

Hasty is Spd+ Def-.

Also, Thunderbolt hits Skarmory harder.

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[titus]

@Wii4Mii
even more reason to run thunderbolt over thunderpunch. and i knew the nature was hasty.

unTil I Talk to yoUS again,
Titus.

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

@Wii4Mii
even more reason to run thunderbolt over thunderpunch. and i knew the nature was hasty.

unTil I Talk to yoUS again,
Titus.

People are obsessed with my ending. You're like the 8th person to type something like that.

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

PS- If you search "Wii4Mii", you'll find every thread I've posted on from the time I started doing this.

 

[9Kplus1]

Gardevoir is a sweeper, not a friggen support... 7000!!!!!

 

[titus]

@Celebi
No, you just insulted Gardevoir's versitility. So ha!

unTil I Talk to yoUS again,
Titus.

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

Gardevoir is a sweeper, not a friggen support... 7000!!!!!

Congragulations on the 700th post. You still got a while to catch up with mii.

I thought I already told you on another thread. Gardevoir can be either, but is generally better for support.

1) First of all, Azelf pretty much outclasses Gardevoir in the Psweeping Psychic category.

Although Gardevoir has 125 Sp. Atk, Calm Mind and many moves at her special disposal, including Psychic, Thunderbolt, Shadow Ball, Focus Blast and Grass Knot, Gardevoir's Speed is only 80. That doesn't cut it when it comes to sweeping Pokemon.

2) At her supportive movepool, Gardevoir can use Will-o-Wisp, Hypnosis, Thunder Wave, Healing Wish, Toxic, Light Screen, Reflect, and Trick Room. She can also function as a Special Wall thanks to her 115 Special Defense. Will-o-Wisp also helps her take some unboosted, not SE physical hits.

Who else agrees with mii that Gardevoir is better as Support?

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[O D I N]

1) First of all, Azelf pretty much outclasses Gardevoir in the Psweeping Psychic category.

Although Gardevoir has 125 Sp. Atk, Calm Mind and many moves at her special disposal, including Psychic, Thunderbolt, Shadow Ball, Focus Blast and Grass Knot, Gardevoir's Speed is only 80. That doesn't cut it when it comes to sweeping Pokemon.

2) At her supportive movepool, Gardevoir can use Will-o-Wisp, Hypnosis, Thunder Wave, Healing Wish, Toxic, Light Screen, Reflect, and Trick Room. She can also function as a Special Wall thanks to her 115 Special Defense. Will-o-Wisp also helps her take some unboosted, not SE physical hits.

Who else agrees with mii that Gardevoir is better as Support?

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

:raises hand:

It's kinda obvious. Even though I don't know much about Gardevior.

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

:raises hand:

It's kinda obvious. Even though I don't know much about Gardevior.

You made the right choice, O D I N. Even though you don't know much, just trust ol' Wii4Mii.

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[KirbyMan3000]

Wow that was fast. Thanks for all the help!

 

[ss118]

Dragonite @ Leftovers
Male
Inner Focus
Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
________________________
Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Thunder Punch
Earthquake

Lead; Physical sweeper. Dragon Claw for STAB and neutral damage to all types but steel types and gets Kingdra/Palkia x2, Ice Beam to take care of pesky Garchomps, other Dragonites, Salamences and Rayquazas. Thunder Punch for water types likely to carry an ice beam and Earthquake to counter steel types.
Possibly Life Orb? And Focus Punch?

Lucario @ Choice Specs
Female
Steadfast
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 176 Spd, 80 Def
_________________________
Calm Mind
Aura Sphere
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse

Special sweeper; Calm Mind self explanatory, Aura Sphere for STAB and never misses, Dark Pulse to take care of Psychics and Ghosts and Dragon Pulse for neutral damage to all types but Steel.
Why is Calm Mind being used with Choice Specs?
Use leftovers with calm mind, or use Shadow Ball with Choice Specs, or maybe HP Fire

Ninetales @ Focus Band
Female
Flash Fire
Timid
EVs: 252 Spd, 176 Def, 80 Sp Def
_________________________
Attract
Toxic
Confuse Ray
Flamethrower

Annoyer; Flamethrower for STAB and an attack move, Toxic for deadly poison, Confuse Ray to cause half a chance of damage to enemy, and Attract to lessen chances of attack on Ninetales as well.
Never seen Ninetails, couldn't tell you what to do :/
but attact is n00by.

Gardevoir @ Wise Glasses
Female
Trace
Modest
EVs: 172 Hp, 136 Def, 136 Sp Def, 46 Sp Atk, 26 Spd
__________________________
Psychic
Calm Mind
Thunderbolt
Will-O-Wisp

Special Sweeper/Wall; Psychic for STAB, Thunderbolt covers most everything else, Calm Mind obvious and Will-O-Wisp gives better chances against physical pokemon.
Fine

Sceptile @ Lum Berry
Male
Overgrow
Modest
EVs: 252 Sp Atk, 252 Spd, 6 Sp Def
_________________________
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Dragon Pulse
Toxic

Special Sweeper; Energy Ball for STAB, Focus Blast to handle most Steel types, Dragon Pulse for neutral to all but Steel and takes care of pesky dragons and Toxic is self explanatory.
Those steels are the exact reson you need HP Fire, IMO. Or Leech Seed incoming Blissey's

Milotic @ Leftovers
Female
Marvel Scale
Bold
EVs: 252 Def, 106 Sp Atk, 56 Sp Def, 12 Spd
__________________________
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Mirror Coat

Double Wall; Surf for STAB, Ice Beam for dragons and neutral damage to Kingdra/Palkia, Recover is obvious and Mirror Coat to counter any Grass/Electric attackers and possibly try to counter any Water threats.
That speed is uneeded, since this should be moved into a Thunder Wave or some other type of status not named toxic. You need some HP, also



So yeah, that's my team. Tried making the most balanced team possible using my favorites. Constructive criticism please!!

good team, mate. 7/10