Ok, being a 'veteran' spritecomic artist, I gotta give some opinions, not all of them are good tough...
1.- Ur comic needs a name, corny, lame or something u came up with in 2 secs, it doesnt matter, it needs a name:
AN ANGLE OF ZERO(cam to me in the toilet)
2.- I really like how ur using the text, and if this is ur 1st time makin sprite comic, im impressed...
i thank you as it is my first time
3.- Use expressions, the bass edited fellow doesnt move his mouth, and the other guys could use diferent expressions, it makes the comic feel much better...
gotchya ill try to that.
4.- What exactly is going on? if ur planning to reveal what exactly pika-dude and the guy with glases want to join to later on, give us a heads up, knowing why ur characters are in that position is important...
oh fare enough ill do that in the chrcter profile bit
5.- VERY IMPORTANT: Dont rush things, so far ur doing a good job, but Ive met guys that for the sake of coolness they rush their comic in a way the fight HAS to be in the 1st 5 comics, which pisses me off more than anything, check my comic out in the little icon in my sig...
1. okay ill stick to my weekly deadline and 2.you where the one who wanted to make me start