Revealing Mist

[Mr.Talk]

Your brought out in this world with a blank mind
Everyone tells you what you need to find

Your walking all alone on a one way road
The clouds suddenly come down in a hazy load

Your lost among the secrets of the mist
Worthless questions seem to give you a twist

So what do you do now?.....

Where is the question we seek?.....

What will your mind allow?.....

Has your intelligence reach it's peak?......

How many limits can your mind resist?
What makes you think your revealing the mist?

shortest poem I've ever written and also advertisement of my site but I won't post the link

 

[Akebo]

You kow, for someone who doesn't like to get that serious with poetry, that was very sentimental. Maybe you do have a poet's soul after all..

 

[Mr.Talk]

and what does that suppose to mean? lol kidding but I right what I feel when I feel like it. If it's good or not is all on your opinion

 

[Akebo]

Well, I can tell this came from the heart. It's just the writing composition, as always, that bothers me. Nothing I can do much there, though. You'd hate my girlfriend. She's even more hypercritical than I am when it comes to grammar.