Rate our vids(Lone and Puff)

[Puffinator]

Hello, my dear smash buddies!!!!!!!!!
Here are four vids of me, Puffinator, and my friend, Lonejedi!
Puffinator- Jigglypuff-I'm no Zulu, but hey, I sure do try!

- Marth-I'm no Ken Hoang...I'm better! Well maybe not! But hey, I try!

Lonejedi- Falco-He's no Bombsoldier, but hey, I'm sure he tries!

- Sheik-He's no (I dont know any Sheik pros so, *insert a better Sheik player's name here*) but hey, he tries!

We would really appreciate your constructive criticism/advice! But please! No need to state out the obvious!
-We suck!
-Don't kill yourself!
-The falco really shouldn't twitch! (To answer your curiosty, the twitching is Lone's wavedashing!)
-Yes we like to dodge alot! Maybe cause we suck!
Anyways here are the links! Sorry that it's Rapidshare! Merry Christmas!

Puff vs. Falco

http://rapidshare.de/files/9782615/Smash_Video_1.wmv.html (cmon u have to admit the music is awesome!)

Marth vs. Zelda

http://rapidshare.de/files/9783264/Smash_Video__2.wmv.html

Puff vs. Falco

http://rapidshare.de/files/9783132/Smash_Vid__3.wmv.html

Marth vs. Falco

http://rapidshare.de/files/9782859/Smash_Video__4.wmv.html

Thanks!
Puffinator

 

[Tapion013]

Comments on Falco vs Puff (first vid on the list)

Puffinator- It's nice to see that you've improved. However, still wayyy too much rolling! your back throw and edgeguarding was nice though, and so was your upthrow to resting.

Lonejedi- Also, wayyy too much rolling! And I only say a total of I think 6 lasers? and no forward smash spamming! Remember, falco's strength is that he's very difficult to grab! If you keep forward smashing, you take away that great strength! And against a puff, well... you got 4 stocked. I think that says enough. and you need to apply fastfalling to your game! You short hop your air attacks, but I didn't notice a single fast fall, even if you didn't short hop! At White3, I'll give you a reminder on how annoying falco should be.

 

[James Sparrow]

lone SHL more... please?

 

[James Sparrow]

http://www.ourmedia.org/node/117953 here's a vid of me and my friend, so you guys can get an idea of how good we are...

this was like 3 weeks ago, and we've gotten a decent amount better since then

 

[Puffinator]

Comments on Falco vs Puff (first vid on the list)

Puffinator- It's nice to see that you've improved. However, still wayyy too much rolling! your back throw and edgeguarding was nice though, and so was your upthrow to rest.

Thanks Tapion...When you say rolling, I'm guessing you're referring to dodging, right?

And did you see any of the vids with marth in it(maybe perhaps the marth falco vid cause i do better in that one )? I just started with marth a while ago so I dont know how good I am with him or not so could u check those out and tell me how im doin? (cause i trust u lol)

Edit:Also nice vids Sparrow!

 

[Tapion013]

Comments (Marth vs Sheik)

Puffinator - Still wayyyy too much rolling (rolling is a type of dodging. There's rolling, and then ground dodging, and then air dodging) Nice to see you wavedashing though, especially for the edge hogs. You didn't really attempt to edge guard at all though. you sort of let him get back every time. Also, Fastfall! every neutral air I saw you do was not fast falled.

Also, apply ledge hopping to your game (When on the edge, press down and then whatever button you use to jump. You can then do any aerial attack you want while still being able to get back to the edge.)

Marth as better throw combos against sheik. try up throwing to up tilt combos. up throw, then up tilt, up tilt, up tilt, yadda yadda yadda. also, more downtilts and forward airs, especially on a very ground based sheik like jedi.

LoneJedi-Again, too much rolling! But also... let's look at your first 10 attacks.
1.) Transform
2.) Dash attack
3.) Dash attack
4.) Dash attack
5.) Dash attack
6.) Dash attack
7.) Dash attack
8.) Dash attack
9.) Forward Smash (looked like an attempted dash attack)
10.) Dash Attack.

I think there's something wrong there! One of sheik's best weapons is grab combos. against marth, down throw grab combos are key, not constant dash attacking! (Also, hold A before the match starts k? )

You need some work getting back to the edge too. Sheik can grab the edge right before she teleports, and right after. Instead of being exposed to a forward smash after teleporting, try grabbing the edge right before you teleport, but after pressing up+b. your invincible for that time afterall, so it's perfect

Also, edge guard! Sheik has an amazing edge guard game because she has such great vertical recovery, don't be afraid to just walk off the edge and slap him with that forward air.

 

[Puffinator]

k once again thanx tapion...Ill work on all those things u mentioned...especially the rolling...then maybe after i improve on those things, and maybe if lone improves on his problems, we'll put new *improved* lol videos up later! thanx once again.

Merry Christmas-Puffinator

 

[Puffinator]

man I would think that at least one other person would check out our vids and rate us

Edit: oops double post

 

[James Sparrow]

is bumping allowed? lol.

 

[viperboy_74]

lone - click the link in my sig... just a little idea on a decent falco. I didnt SHL much when i recorded this vid... i do much more now. None the less, it's a decent falco. My combo vid should be ready soon and i'll be sure to get you that when it comes out.

 

[TOYC]

Wow...how old are these...you've gotten a bit better since you made these

 

[eighteenspikes]

The vids are approximately 522 days old.