Rate my gameplay and my friend's too plz

[KusakaKyo]

Ok first of all we r from Manzanillo, Colima in Mexico so we cant go to pro tournamets, we wish we cud tho... anyways these r the last 3 vids we recorded last week, can you ppl plz rate our gameplay?, im a Falco main and my friend is a Falcon main, but he was using Roy at these vids:

Fight 1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vuf2aWj1f1U

Fight 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KX1gGNOp5s

Fight 3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1vjsENGzfw


Btw, we've been trying to record vids for a long time but saddly for us we found the way too late, the good thing is that Melee isnt dead yet =D

 

[m&m1992]

höhö i love your gaming style, pretty fast and aggressive :D
there are little mistakes like platformdashes, but who cares
hmm but how about down b against falcos up b ?
you both are insane !

 

[qwaszx7410]

Very nicely done by both of you. Falco, excellent aggression. You never let up for a moment. Just be sure that you aren't so willing to throw yourself over the edge. The suicide bomb dair is understandable with a large percentage gap or on your opponent's last life, but Falco is usually safer with lasers to throw off their recovery timing, ledge hopped bairs back onto the level (obviously not against Roy, but just in general), and edge hogs because if you miss, a Falco off the level is relatively easy for a grounded opponent to edge guard or even gimp kill. Remember that rolling back onto the stage occupies the edge for the longest time. There were a couple times where you jumped back up off the ledge where Roy would have died if you had returned with a roll.
Roy, very nice use of the side b as unpredictable shield pressure and as set up for finishers. I like the variety in your game. You constantly shifted between controlling the game with well managed spacing to being comboed more because your friend is a great Falco than because of any fault of your own. I would suggest that you work on your smash DI so that you could cut down the damage you take from those combos. You might be able to cut off as much as half the damage and to turn missed hits against him by starting a combo of your own.

Overall, fantastic play by both of you. Your play is impressive enough that with a few more vids like this, you could probably put together a decent combo video.