Not too bad for how long you've been with the boards.
-You can WD very consistently, but try to time them better. Don't just do them to do them. A lot of times you WDed into bombs or rangs. Just a thought.
-End stocks faster. First vid, that first stock of Links was very over-lived. Work on Dairs into knees. You missed a few of those early on.
-Combos weren't horrible. Link can be a pain to combo because of bombs exploding on himself or returning rangs.
That's all I can remember. I didn't watch them too in depth... I'm sure you can get more advice
Something I think a lot of people will agree with is that your Falcon is kind of basic (No offense meant!). It's average and nothing REALLY shines about it. But it's not like it's impossible to get better. If you've only been playing seriously for a few months, then you're way ahead of where I was. You've got a good grip on all the basics, you just need to polish them. You need a LITTLE of everything. When to WD, better combos, shielding, mindgames, pick your battles better instead of being all offense (Actually, I saw a few times when you didn't come down with a move at the proper time. That was very good! No one does that when they start playing, usually).
Maybe I'll add more tomorrow. Kind of tired.