R.O.B Critique Thread

[6Mizu]

In the past few weeks our ROB boards have had beginners or just people that want there ROB critiqued. All of these people want there ROB critiqued so they decide the fasted way is to just make a new thread......well...it's sort of pointless. So I made this thread so any and everyone can come here and have there ROBs critiqued and critique others ROBs.
ENJOY!

(post all critiques below)

 

[Silhouette]

Here let me help this out.

http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=257792

 

[6Mizu]

LOL nice help.......but that sort of old now becausae the person that wanted us to critiqe it...pretty much got all of the help he need, but good job.

 

[GwJ]

We had another critique thread, I'll try and dig it up, hold on.

 

[6Mizu]

mmmmm....when I was think about the old one we use to have....but it is no longer "new"....+ since tis is new Beginners will see it faster.

 

[GwJ]

http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=224192&page=4

There's already examples, rules, and actual critiques in this one. I'll bump it and you should let this one die, IMO.