Plz critique my Pichu

[Cia]

Please rate and critique my Pichu. Any advice would be appreciated.

VaNz (Pichu) vs Jman (C.Falcon)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kz-O1rRpcC4

VaNz (Pichu) vs Jman (Marth)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fisKafp3dR0

 

[robyextreme]

Well I only watched the first one, you're pretty good. Gotta stop rolling, and throw in some mind games most of the time I could see what you were about to do.

 

[Cia]

Thank you, i noticed the obsessive rolling too.

 

[Itchi]

Well.. first off you do good edge guarding and your shffls are nice though you do need to play more mind games. Overall pretty decent Chu you have there.

 

[Pine]

omg nice edgehog mindgame on da first video....YOU ARE TOO LEET

 

[Sariku]

Alittle better than me, lol. But I main Marth, Secondary as Pichu.

 

[Cia]

Thankz everyone for the feedback. i have gotten my pichu a bit better since than. I'll try to have some more vidz up soon.

 

[T0MMY]

My critique: you suck
My suggestion: get better

Start off by not calling Pichu "Picho".

 

[Cia]

My critique: you suck
My suggestion: get better

Start off by not calling Pichu "Picho".

!! that was funny.. and a bit brutal..

but thankz

 

[T0MMY]

!! that was funny.. and a bit brutal..

but thankz

haha, glad you could take a joke, I used to have somewhat of a bad rep here because I'd say silly things like that and people take things too seriously.

Try not to miss edge hogs when they go for a sweet spot. Try different edgeguards like d-tilts. And go after them with a D-air when they're off the stage. Practice out-of-shield techniques like U-Smash out of shield, Sliding out of shield, and Up+B out of shield. Then just get your combos down (u-tilt to grab, up throw to u-air, u-air juggles, f-air to u-air/n-air, u-air/u-tilt to d-air, etc.)
Take some time to read my guide and play to have fun more than anything.

 

[Cia]

LoLz.. ok, thankz.. I'll figure away to implement all of that advice into my strategy

 

[T0MMY]

You implement it by practicing solo and then doing a lot of friendlies keeping the practice you did in mind until you do it without thinking. Then enter tournaments and beat all the pro'z.

 

[Cia]

wow.. haha, thank you. as soon as I get newer pics, u guys can see my improvement.