hey, not bad so far
i´d recommend to use Nair or Bair edgeguarding instead of fair against falco, just because you wont get hit by the forwarB that easy ^^ you did it good 2 times though, respect^^
use more needles, i know its what you always get told, but you hardly used any needle to grab stuff as far as i remember!
also a thing everyone tells any not so good shiek player : less Forward smash XD
counts for me too though ^^ i always do it by accident
oh, when you hit him with an jab a, dont continue to press a, rather grab him or do a tilt, so you can get him into a combo... another thing, against fox/falco, you can techchase pretty easy, you should try to do it ^^
well, so far for me, hope it helped... improve you WDshing a little bit (or just do more)
yome