New Captain

[puckgood]

So I just recently decided to start using Captain Falcon because, honestly, I wish I had a pink suit like that. This is one of my first attempts... please teach me to live up to the sexiness of the pink suit.

http://www.youtube.com/user/NoobyPiecesOfCrap#p/a/u/1/_tADR_OzuDU

 

[Wenbobular]

It looks like you're missing L-cancels, so practice SHFFLC-ing some more.
As a general tip, don't roll/sidestep too much...and work on your DI it was ... suboptimal, shall we say ~_~ (Roy's Fsmash shouldn't really be killing you cross-stage until probably like 180% at least )
As you get faster, the combos will probably come naturally.

 

[FoxLisk]

You open up the game by dash dancing randomly and then running up with a raptor boost. Raptor boost is not an approach.
Falcon generally has to play by running around and waiting for opportunities, not approaching recklessly.

Also, not only do you not know your combos, which makes sense and is natural because you just picked up the character, you also don't seem to understand the concept behind comboing. I can't count how many times you hit your opponent, and then just waited for him to do whatever he felt like before moving again. You'd hit him and then stay out of his range and shield when you really needed to be putting on the pressure.
When you get an advantage, milk it. Run up, scare him, cover some of his options with dash-dancing or dairs or something. Don't let him get back up unmolested.