fleapy
Smash Journeyman
I'm begining in school a unit on poetry, yet am not to good. I have spent some time doing this one, but would like it to reach it's optimmum potential. Here it is.
Bats
Hanging, icicles of the summer day.
Through wind they glide, all-over, with mind
Forests cover their skin, but the leaves are dead
One fly’s down on the equestrian, and feasts.
Any feedback would be greatly apreciated.
Bats
Hanging, icicles of the summer day.
Through wind they glide, all-over, with mind
Forests cover their skin, but the leaves are dead
One fly’s down on the equestrian, and feasts.
Any feedback would be greatly apreciated.