My brother made this poem.

[Knome]

Fire and Ice:

Fire
hot,red
burning,heating,cooking
flame,bonfire,icberg,slushie
freezing,shivering,snowing,
blue,cold
Ice
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This was made by my brother for his school.
It was featured in "A Cherished Moment".

I hope you guys liked my brothers work.

 

[Zook]

Original style. I like it.

Meh, there's no hidden meaning, is there?

 

[Vicious Delicious]

My cousin wrote this about his bike, it is a Haiku.

Riding on my bike
Fell off on my FRIGGIN balls!
Sore, swollen, and red

Knome, I like how you're brother's poem kinda went in reverse with Fire/Ice, yet kept ties so you had the feeling they would eventually collide at the middle of the poem.

 

[Zook]

That sounds like something I would say, UM.

 

[demoncaterpie]

Wow, everyone's got a poet in there family.

Sure would be nice to see some orignial stuff though.

 

[Red Granola]

lolol I got one!!

I'm a rapper, yo
My pants are hangin' low!

lol!

 

[demoncaterpie]

lolol I got one!!

I'm a rapper, yo
My pants are hangin' low!

lol!

You know what? At least it's original.