My Battling Poke's - Please rate :D

[ToiletRoll]

Righto, Here's how its going to be and in the same layout for every one of my battlers respectively. I dont have a set 6 pokemon, i tend to shift whithin what i have

*NOTE : Moves and held items MAY change to suit the opponent.*

KEY =
(Name of pokemon - Nickname)/(level)/(nature)/(Moves)/
(Held Item)
(List of pokemon's stats)


BATTLERS -

Empoleon - Empoleon/100/Sassy/Ice Beam-Toxic-Surf-Aqua Jet
-Zoom Lens-
[ HP : 314
[ Attack : 233
[ Defense : 254
[ Sp. Atk : 249
[ Sp. Def : 247
[ Speed : 164
[ Ability : Torrent

Gengar - Jessica/100/Modest/Shadow Ball-Dest. Bond-Sludge Bomb-Hypnosis
-Choice Scarf-
[ HP : 262
[ Attack : 159
[ Defense : 155
[ Sp. Atk : 333
[ Sp. Def : 182
[ Speed : 277
[ Ability : Levitate

Darkrai - Darkrai/100/Brave/Dark Void-Thunder-Dark Pulse-Double Team
-Dread Plate-
[ HP : 298
[ Attack : 221
[ Defense : 244
[ Sp. Atk : 303
[ Sp Def : 216
[ Speed : 265
[ Ability : Bad Dreams

Staravia - Staravia/30/Lax/Endeavor-Fly-Aerial Ace-Quick Attack
-Focus Sash-
[ HP : 79
[ Attack : 51
[ Defense : 47
[ Sp. Atk : 31
[ Sp. Def : 31
[ Speed : 59
[ Ability : Intimidate

Staraptor - Kamakaze/100/Impish/Close Combat-Take Down-Brave Bird-U turn
-Life Orb-
[ HP : 317
[ Attack : 262
[ Defense : 202
[ Sp. Atk : 126
[ Sp. Def : 142
[ Speed : 251
[ Ability : Intimidate

Infernape - Infernape/100/Docile/Close Combat-Overheat-Grass Knot-U turn
-Flame Plate-
[ HP : 294
[ Attack : 271
[ Defense : 171
[ Sp. Atk : 266
[ Sp. Def : 187
[ Speed : 250
[ Ability : Blaze

Rayquaza - Rayquaza/100/Quiet/ExtremeSpeed-Earthquake-Dragon Dance-Outrage
-Life Orb/Focus Band*-
[ HP : 375
[ Attack : 360
[ Defense : 226
[ Sp. Atk : 338
[ Sp. Def : 217
[ Speed : 223
[ Ability : Air Lock

Palkia - ToiletRoll/100/Bold/Aura Sphere-Earth Power-Shadow Claw-Spacial Rend
-Lustrous Orb(until i can find a berry that weakens Dragon moves-
[ HP : 314
[ Attack : 247
[ Defense : 261
[ Sp. Atk : 350
[ Sp. Def : 278
[ Speed : 242
[ Ability : Pressure

Blissey - Bertha/100/ - /IceBeam-Thunderbolt-Calm Mind-Softboiled
-Leftovers-
(Stats are unknown at this time, Im breeding it in the daycare centre for a Bold Natured Chansey, which i will be evolving and using instead of Bertha. Ty)
[ Ability : Serene Grace


Although the number of Battlers i use is 9, I have a full box of pokemon I am going to train WITH EVs. (See bottom of entry)

So leave a comment, constructive critizism or just compliments. I need all the help im gonna get


*A note for my Rayquaza, depending on if I use Kamikaze in battle depends on the held item.
Not using Kamikaze = Rayquaza Holds Life Orb
Using Kamikaze = Rayquaza Holds Focus Band*

~NOTE - My pokemon arent the best and i dont claim that they are so~
~PLEASE ALSO NOTE - I found out about EV training, natures and stat items AFTER I trained these up, im training replacements with better stats as you read this.~

If anyone wants a battle, leave me your friend code and i'll get bak to ya as soon as possible

Comment

 

[Platypus]

The first four, sixth, and seventh make a passable team. Though I can't pinpoint it, exactly, I'm positive that something is wrong with your Rayquaza...

 

[ToiletRoll]

What you think is wrong then?

Stats?
Moves?
uhh... ability?

 

[Deleted member]

The first four, sixth, and seventh make a passable team. Though I can't pinpoint it, exactly, I'm positive that something is wrong with your Rayquaza...

needs a choice band IMO.

 

[ToiletRoll]

There is nothing wrong with my Kamikaze either, dont argue with the fact that it'll go down fast, because thats practically what its made for.

Kamikaze's motto : Hit Hard - Die Fast

My Kamikaze has completely annihilated a full team of lvl 100s on its own before. it IS capable

I have had tons of different ideas for my Rayquaza but since i have already got Jessica with a choice item, i dont want to limit myself.
For example, if my Rayquaza is the last pkmn left on my team and it has 3 diff pokes to take down if its holding a choice item, the foe could deliver a counter i cannot stop. thats how it holds the life orb mostly.

 

[Zook]

I just cried a little.

Righto, Here's how its going to be and in the same layout for every one of my battlers respectively. I dont have a set 6 pokemon, i tend to shift whithin what i have

*NOTE : Moves and held items MAY change to suit the opponent.*

KEY =
(Name of pokemon - Nickname)/(level)/(nature)/(Moves)/
(Held Item)
(List of pokemon's stats)

Before I say anything.... If you don't know how to post a moveset, don't post. This is a pain to read. I take it you don't know what EVs are?


BATTLERS -

Empoleon - Empoleon/100/Sassy/Ice Beam-Toxic-Surf-Aqua Jet
-Zoom Lens-
[ HP : 314
[ Attack : 233
[ Defense : 254
[ Sp. Atk : 249
[ Sp. Def : 247
[ Speed : 164
[ Ability : Torrent

Why Sassy? Anyhow, this set blows. You have 2 water moves (Sure, one has priority, but still), Toxic is okay for a Stall Emploeon, I guess. Your EVs are completely screwed up.

No Zoom Lens. Give this ***** leftovers.

Gengar - Jessica/100/Modest/Shadow Ball-Dest. Bond-Sludge Bomb-Hypnosis
-Choice Scarf-
[ HP : 262
[ Attack : 159
[ Defense : 155
[ Sp. Atk : 333
[ Sp. Def : 182
[ Speed : 277
[ Ability : Levitate

Why's he so slow? The set itself isn't bad, nor is the nature, but his (Her?) EVs are in all the wrong places.

Darkrai - Darkrai/100/Brave/Dark Void-Thunder-Dark Pulse-Double Team
-Dread Plate-
[ HP : 298
[ Attack : 221
[ Defense : 244
[ Sp. Atk : 303
[ Sp Def : 216
[ Speed : 265
[ Ability : Bad Dreams

-_-

A couple things. First, Double Team is banned from competitive play. Second, Dread Plate isn't worth giving an extra boost to Dark Pulse. If you wanna make your moves more powerful, use Life Orb or something. Third, Thunder sucks without Kyogre support. Fourth, do you Def-EV train these guys or what?

Staravia - Staravia/30/Lax/Endeavor-Fly-Aerial Ace-Quick Attack
-Focus Sash-
[ HP : 79
[ Attack : 51
[ Defense : 47
[ Sp. Atk : 31
[ Sp. Def : 31
[ Speed : 59
[ Ability : Intimidate

Watch out for Sand Storms/Hail. Ratata does this job better, btw.

Staraptor - Kamakaze/100/Impish/Close Combat-Take Down-Brave Bird-U turn
-Life Orb-
[ HP : 317
[ Attack : 262
[ Defense : 202
[ Sp. Atk : 126
[ Sp. Def : 142
[ Speed : 251
[ Ability : Intimidate

Impish?! Why have a +Def Nature if he dies so quickly anyways? Uff... He's too slow and his HP is too high. Take Down is ****, use Return or something. If this thing's taken down entire teams, your friends really must suck.

Infernape - Infernape/100/Docile/Close Combat-Overheat-Grass Knot-U turn
-Flame Plate-
[ HP : 294
[ Attack : 271
[ Defense : 171
[ Sp. Atk : 266
[ Sp. Def : 187
[ Speed : 250
[ Ability : Blaze

Okay set, bad item, nature, and EVs. Breed for a Hasty Chimchar. EV train him the right way. It looks like you leveled him up by feeding him Rare Candies.

Rayquaza - Rayquaza/100/Quiet/ExtremeSpeed-Earthquake-Dragon Dance-Outrage
-Life Orb/Focus Band*-
[ HP : 375
[ Attack : 360
[ Defense : 226
[ Sp. Atk : 338
[ Sp. Def : 217
[ Speed : 223
[ Ability : Air Lock

-SPEED NATURE.

Is Extremespeed really necessary with DDance? Focus Band is banned.

Palkia - ToiletRoll/100/Bold/Aura Sphere-Earth Power-Shadow Claw-Spacial Rend
-Lustrous Orb(until i can find a berry that weakens Dragon moves-
[ HP : 314
[ Attack : 247
[ Defense : 261
[ Sp. Atk : 350
[ Sp. Def : 278
[ Speed : 242
[ Ability : Pressure

Replace Shadow Claw with Flamethrower or Ice Beam or something. Why's he so slow?!

Blissey - Bertha/100/ - /IceBeam-Thunderbolt-Calm Mind-Softboiled
-Leftovers-
(Stats are unknown at this time, Im breeding it in the daycare centre for a Bold Natured Chansey, which i will be evolving and using instead of Bertha. Ty)
[ Ability : Serene Grace

No, breed for a Bold Chansey with Heal Bell. I suppose you could go with the (vastly inferior) CMBliss if you really wanted.

Although the number of Battlers i use is 9, I have a full box of pokemon I am going to train WITH EVs. (See bottom of entry)

So leave a comment, constructive critizism or just compliments. I need all the help im gonna get


*A note for my Rayquaza, depending on if I use Kamikaze in battle depends on the held item.
Not using Kamikaze = Rayquaza Holds Life Orb
Using Kamikaze = Rayquaza Holds Focus Band*

~NOTE - My pokemon arent the best and i dont claim that they are so~
~PLEASE ALSO NOTE - I found out about EV training, natures and stat items AFTER I trained these up, im training replacements with better stats as you read this.~

Ah, that makes sense now. Once you EV train new Pokes, I'll rate you.

If anyone wants a battle, leave me your friend code and i'll get bak to ya as soon as possible

Comment

Ratings in bold.

 

[ToiletRoll]

Right. I understood most of that....
but 1 part confuses me.

Breed with Heal Bell?

uhh, isnt that an item that increases HP every turn like leftovers?
or was that shell bell?

Ahhhh! tell me what you meant in detail please

Before i found out about the EVs and stuff, I was training everything at the Pokemon League. So i'm thinking balanced?

 

[ToiletRoll]

Oh and by the way, My Kamikaze was actually grown to level 100 as part of a bet XD

Hear me out.

Went to school, Friend(whom has never played pokemon) said i couldnt get a lvl 1 of something common up to lvl 100 within 2 weeks. A starly was just what i bumped into first.(be thankful it wasnt bidoof!) There was no EV training for the Kamikaze, just a race against time
I got myself a Fiver out of it too :D

So the nature and stuff for my staraptor wasnt planned in any way whatsoever.

 

[Zook]

Right. I understood most of that....
but 1 part confuses me.

Breed with Heal Bell?

uhh, isnt that an item that increases HP every turn like leftovers?
or was that shell bell?

Ahhhh! tell me what you meant in detail please

Before i found out about the EVs and stuff, I was training everything at the Pokemon League. So i'm thinking balanced?

Heal Bell is a move that clears all of your Pokemon's status problems. For example, if you have one sleeping pokemon, 3 poisoned, and Blissey is burned, Heal Bell will clear away all of those.

EV train using the Macho Brace (If you can't get one, use the Powe items) up until maxed out, then take on the Elite 4 to get them up to level 100. Remember, the EXP share passes on EVs, too!

 

[ToiletRoll]

Which is better?

The Macho Brace or the Power items?

cuz for my Blissey im training at the minute, ive been using the power items for defense and HP.(i want protection from earthquakes )
Should i start again with the macho brace?

 

[Zook]

Which is better?

The Macho Brace or the Power items?

cuz for my Blissey im training at the minute, ive been using the power items for defense and HP.(i want protection from earthquakes )
Should i start again with the macho brace?

Macho is better. Double EVs ftw!

Just go and fight a bunch of lv. 2 Bidoofs to get massive HP EVs. The Ruin Maniac's cave is good for Def EVs.

Question: Do you have the Pokerus?

 

[ToiletRoll]

yeah i had the pokerus for double the evs

it ran out about 9/10ths of the way through my bidoof HP training though, so im kinda stumped battling them now

Also, what stats would you reccomend for a foretress?
most forgotten pokemon since Forever and i think it has good defense.

 

[Zook]

yeah i had the pokerus for double the evs

it ran out about 9/10ths of the way through my bidoof HP training though, so im kinda stumped battling them now

Also, what stats would you reccomend for a foretress?
most forgotten pokemon since Forever and i think it has good defense.

Actually, your Bliss still has the Pokerus. Once a Pokemon has it, they have it forever. The smiley-face only means that they can't pass it on any more. Pokerus is like neverending happy and win.

Just stick with Bidoofs and Shellos, I'd say.

Forretress should have max HP evs, and some Def/SpDef.

 

[ToiletRoll]

Oh? here i was thinking that it was gone completely :D
I'll go to Sunnyshore and check if me trainings complete

Here's a Forretress I already have, it kinda sucks and little work has went into it...

Forretress @ Exp Share(for now)
Nature: Brave
Ability: Sturdy
Evs: absolute rubbish
Explosion
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball
Double-Edge

 

[ToiletRoll]

A friend of mine is very cunning with his EV training and movesets and kicks *** most of the time.

Heres roughly what one of his pokemon goes like,

Heracross - Brawler @ Flame Orb
Im guessing Adamant
Guts
EVs: 252 atk, 252 spd (i think)
Close Combat
MegaHorn
Protect
Facade

The cheesy get uses protect on the first turn, gets burned and then lets loose with facade. and if he can he'll get a supereffective move in there too.
My plan is :

Lopunny @ Choice specs
Lonely?
Clutz
EVs: 252 spd, 252 atk
Switcheroo
Skill swap(is it possible for a lopunny to learn that?)
Facade
Focus Punch

First, i steal his item; then his ability, And lastly i facade him. If he tries to switch out i'll see it coming and he'll get a sore face cuz of the focus punch.
You got any better ideas? o.O

 

[Mewter]

A friend of mine is very cunning with his EV training and movesets and kicks *** most of the time.

Heres roughly what one of his pokemon goes like,

Heracross - Brawler @ Flame Orb
Im guessing Adamant
Guts
EVs: 252 atk, 252 spd (i think)
Close Combat
MegaHorn
Protect
Facade

The cheesy get uses protect on the first turn, gets burned and then lets loose with facade. and if he can he'll get a supereffective move in there too.
My plan is :

Lopunny @ Choice specs
Lonely?
Clutz
EVs: 252 spd, 252 atk
Switcheroo
Skill swap(is it possible for a lopunny to learn that?)
Facade
Focus Punch

First, i steal his item; then his ability, And lastly i facade him. If he tries to switch out i'll see it coming and he'll get a sore face cuz of the focus punch.
You got any better ideas? o.O

Why use Lopunny? Couldn't you just counter with a poke like gengar?none of his attacks seem to hurt gengar. I he swithches, try ti predict that and use hypnosis or something like that to put him to sleep.
If you Do use lopunny, give it the beryy that heals burns and switch with him, thus increasing your power, draining his severely, and getting yourseelf burned. you might want to try replacing skill swap with sweet kiss or something. your blissey will heal it once the heracross is done.

 

[ToiletRoll]

Yes i know that lmao he has more than just the heracross, and if i switch in a gengar, he'll switch in his blissey. as it is good at taking special attacks.
Good idea for putting it to sleep though

 

[0RLY]

*facepalms*

People need to seriously learn how to read the stickies...

It clearly says READ THIS BEFORE POSTING

 

[JesiahTEG]

http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=110421
http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?t=116651

Please read these threads before posting any more rate my teams. Thanks.