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mario's special day

Steven9wii

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Link to original post: [drupal=3445]mario's special day[/drupal]



i know this seems important but look at the first capital letter in each line,

Mario has a piece of cake
And he wants to share with
Red yoshi! he says,
I have
One slice of cake for somebody

Hi red yoshi, hello mario, i want
A slice!!!
So he gives red yoshi

Some cake!
Eat up say mario. oh, i bought a
Xylophone for you!!!

Wow!!! for me!! he says
I am so happy, i am going
To play it now!!! mario, play your
Harmonica! he does and then
Peach walks in listening!! music to my
EARS!!! i will get
A piano! she does. i
Can play a song calked yoshi
Had a little lamb!!! the end!!! (read the capitals)
 

highfive

Smash Lord
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Buhl, Idaho
Horrible acrostic poem. Needed correct punctuation and grammar. Sentence fluidity was mediocre at best. I give it a B- for mistakes and effort.

The Grammar Nazi has spoken.
 
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