JJROCKETS' Critique Me V2.0

[JJROCKETS]

I had another thread but its way old by this point so I'm just gonna post some videos from my most recent tournament, Get Hype II in Kansas. We were using Alabama's record every single bracket match system so I'll have a good amount of new videos. Please critique every single thing you can think of, I'm really trying to improve

They aren't all uploaded yet but I'll post them here when they are.

Pools Matches:

Vs. Fino (Olimar):
http://www.twitch.tv/cosmash/b/334046497

Bracket Matches:

Vs. Domo (Snake):
Coming soon

Vs. MJG (Toon Link):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6GpD_uWn5BQ&feature=plcp

Vs. Zeton (Fox):
Coming soon

Vs. Fino (Olimar):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uvQiw5zjC1s

Thanks for watching/critiquing!

Edit: Added bracket match vs. Fino

 

[GOofyGV]

I saw that you ave a lot of trouble with his projectiles. try to get better at handling that pressure. Your diddy overal is pretty good and I think you did really well vs MJG. You are also kinda predictable with picking up your banana's. You use dash attack for this a lot.

My advice is to pluck banana's but before you do ensure that he can't hit you with anything. Full hope and then double banana plauck is great. This is great because it's MJG and most importante TL he won't try to uproach you and punish you for plucking your banana's.

Last thing I am going to say. Bait him more into situations he doesn't like. like he is in the air in frnt of you and you wait for that airdodge to fair him. Try to jump to him and do nothing. Then punish whatever he does.


last last thing. abuse your amazing grab more and use SideB grab as well. It's so damn good<3