I'm kinda terrible. Critique me please?

[AngryPiratehat]

I lose pretty often with Fox. I've been told my fundamentals are bad, but I'm not really sure what that means and with that, I'm unable to fx my problems... So here's some videos of me playing Fox against some people I know. Please be as thorough as you want with this. Any advice is probably good advice for me right now. Thanks.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9RqcpcB564
(I'm red )

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1h3xKwFiNus

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUWVgJwxN7o

I can probably find more videos if you guys think that'll help you with your analysis, but these are the most recent.

 

[MH | Joeschmo]

Grab more and put your tech skill to more use, using waveshines into aerials or upsmashes. Work on your conversions and follow ups, because they are pretty much non-existent. Idk a lot of problems you need to fix simple ones like getting your SHops, l-canceling, and stop double jumping so much. You get punished super hard and get knocked out of your jump a lot causing you to die or panic.That's all I'll say for now. Re-watch your sets and see all the issues you have like the misspaced attacks you put out and things such as that.

 

[AngryPiratehat]

Grab more and put your tech skill to more use, using waveshines into aerials or upsmashes. Work on your conversions and follow ups, because they are pretty much non-existent. Idk a lot of problems you need to fix simple ones like getting your SHops, l-canceling, and stop double jumping so much. You get punished super hard and get knocked out of your jump a lot causing you to die or panic.That's all I'll say for now. Re-watch your sets and see all the issues you have like the misspaced attacks you put out and things such as that.

thanks! that was much faster than i expected. I'll work on it more. Short hopping is a huge issue for me. Some days I can do it every time when I'm practicing. Other days, I doubt that it's even possible. I don't practice as often as I should. So this is great advice really, and I'll need to come up with some way to practice short hopping out of shine to do aerials.