I need help.

[Confetti]

I've improved a lot since the last time I ever videotaped.
But I know I still have a lot of work to do.
Critique it, please?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k43lrB16PMI

 

[elvenarrow3000]

L-cancel.

Use more fireballs.

Stop approaching with the fair so much.

Work on moving around more so you aren't so linear.

 

[jwkirby64]

tech more

b-airs are fun

 

[Pine]

dont fair

dont cape

grab cambo remember link sucks

dont edgeguard with forward smash he just cant sweetspot so dont get used to that

 

[HiIH]

Jab combos? At least Jab>grab.