i didnt know there existed a critique thread already, im sorry

[Elder Sister]

the following pic is a draft i have drawn on a school trip
i actually like it(gee, how arrogant^^) but i would like to improve much more, such as coloring or shading
i would be pleased if you gave me some tips or anything else
thanks!!!!

 

[The Dinkoman]

It's above average. Thats all I am going to say.

Ok, a couple problems with it:

1. Are they on a cloud? because I do not see any shadows beside either Marth or Zelda.
2. They both do not have pupils.
3. Zelda's forearm is a bit long in my opinion.
4. Marth's neck shading looks weird o.o
5. The stone on Marth needs more shading
6. Grass needs more shading.

Thats about all the problems I see. *Waits for Neon Ness to post*

 

[Lythium]

There is a critique topic for this type of thing. It's stickied at the top of the forum.

 

[Elder Sister]

thank you for your response!
i really want to solve tha problems, but honestly, i dunno how..??
1. i understand how you got that impression
no, there supposed to lie i the meadow^^
i simply cant shade...
marth is wearing a cape thats why theres no shadow beside him and as for zelda...dunno?
guess i have to shade tha cape..
2.youre right... they look weird witha pupils hahaha(if i draw them)
3.ok
4. itll look weird but ill try
5.oh ive forgotten...?!
6.alright(how does grass shading look like anyways??)

ok ill try to fix it, but it wont be any great shading....

if anybody is bored and is able to shade
youre welcome to give it a try ^^

EDIT:
i didnt know there was something like that critique thread already
sorry><