I could also use some fox critiquing

[Zodiak-Lucien]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P2EgYejpm4g

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwqjdkBDly0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=onCnAq4HNtQ
Any advice or tips will be greatly appreciated.

 

[pirate-404]

Kind of lazy, so I only watched the first video. When you're approaching from below the platform, it's better if you use the U-air instead of the B-air usually. Other than that, I don't know much else to say.

EDIT: Oh, two more things. Try to time your shine to block an incoming Falco Phantasm or Fox Illusion. It's probably easier than trying to land a U-smash. And also, with the Fire Fox, try to aim it so it's at about a 30 degree angle and DI hard towards the ledge when you're recovering from a far distance. You could've made it if you did that at around 1:59.

 

[ESAM]

You didn't use u-air nearly enough. When he was recovering with up-b, you could have gotten an easy shine spike. You also didn't play fast really.

 

[Doc_Holiday]

I noticed in the second match that the Falco was in control the whole time and he kept you in your shield, this is normal for Falcos but don't be afraid to shieldgrab>chainthrow him>Fsmash>Shinespike, you can shinespoike Falco when he is in the beginning of his Firebird(when it's charging up) without getting hurt! Or you could Shieldgrab>Uthrow>Uair juggle, you will need to shffl the Uair, if you can't do that, just press Y then up on the Cstick, follow his DI and just keep Uairing, that is how I deal with Falcos.