How's my fox now?

[JJBro1]

This is what my fox was before http://www.smashboards.com/showthread.php?p=5721471#post5721471

I took what you guys and other people from other forums and youtube comments said along with Kheldars video, and applied them to my game(hopefully successfully). I had some matches with a pretty good player imo. Yes i know i sd'ed alot but the button lag over wifi kinda threw me off. Anyway how is my fox now? What do i still need to do to get better? What should i do more or what should i do less? Thanks for the advice guys it really helped!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUK5LangOhA&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=clgNM35JA3g&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QO8nx2gO1lc&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBuuiTMdsSQ&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mq41YpwksHg&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ut35NlwkSR4&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVO8F10hd1c&fmt=18
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYeS2OHqrcE&fmt=18

 

[Jinha44]

you must go space more dont attack two fast and more shining! keep up!

 

[NeverKnowsBest]

Work on grabbing. Watch those lasers when fighting G&W, he eats them up. I will watch more videos later, I've got work then school =(.

 

[ZeroFox]

Well it looks like you're improving. Just keep it up. You're getting there.

 

[JJBro1]

Anymore suggestions?

 

[smasher?o.0]

nice but you are like me
you dont grab a lot
you need to grab a lot
and dont be afraid to spam

 

[tom2bomb]

Try shine spiking

 

[JJBro1]

Try shine spiking

i usually do that alot especially to my brother's mario. I guess the wifi's button lag had me afraid to attempt it.

 

[PhilMcCloud17]

yeah dude when in doubt... grab. lol