How is my Sonic

[Shoop70]

Thanks to darkNES386 for the footage


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCQgEPuRb_8

May I get advice on what I did right/wrong/improvements etc. please?

He definitely surprised me with his spring to uair knocking me out, I'll practice more against that, and doing it myself.

 

[Boxob]

Neutral combos, tilts, shorts hops, less B attacks, more Bair. At 2:48, he stayed on the edge and you didn't run off and Bair for a stage spike, learn to stage spike.