help ME help My falco *critique plz*

[SgtPepper]

i know i need to work on a lot, so don't be harsh because I know i suck.
just tell me what i can do to make him better please

so far i just know not to D-air as much.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_7fC1Eu7DA

also i forgot to mention (i don't use it as an excuse either) i don't have a lot of coordination, and i have little feeling in my left hand from my dumb medical condition so i gotta play extra hard lol. i use the side of my thumb instead of the tip

 

[Driz]

I thaught your Falco was actually pretty good, but you have to wavedash out of your shine a little more and work on following your opponents DI to string together some more combos

 

[Adi]

Technically both of you guys are pretty good, what you really need to work on is your mindgames, espicially your approach. Against this particular fox, a full hopped D-air may work well for an approach but on the tourney level you'll find yourself getting punished many-a-times over for it. Throw in some more lasers, go in and then run out throwing a RSHL. The key in your approach is unpredictability. That is what you were lacking.

 

[SgtPepper]

yeah looking back i thought i was predictable too ... thx tho ill try it out soon :D

 

[Leoneri]

All I can say is maybe waveshine a bit more and maybe dont full jump too much on Final Destination, leaves Falco open. Also, be more random with your approach and don't kick mindgames to the curb.

 

[d_shep04]

your falco was pretty good. my opinion. the only bad thing that i saw really was that you didnt fast fall a couple of your combo starters which allowed fox to get away or attack you. and another thing i saw was that you didn't l-cancel right away (a couple of times) when you d-air. but b-sides that... that was a good match...