help me get better!!!

[GOTM]

ok, this is my fox....ive improved from when i last put some vids online so im just tryin to get some tips on my current level

now these were friendlies so like i wasn't into them as much as i should be, i think i have some SD's , etc., but if you could just give me some tips i'd appreciate it, thanx

heres the vids:

http://blip.tv/file/431317/

http://blip.tv/file/431322/

in the second one i do better

 

[bjduo]

i only watched the first one but one of the problems is ur predictablity. try not to tech in place so much and vary ur recoveries and angles of recovery. otherwise though pretty decent fox

 

[brawlpro]

Where are the waveshine to upsmash/dsmash combos...? Your fightin a samus man...

 

[GOTM]

yea i definitly should go for more....i dont even know why, lol