First Match Recorded-Please critique my falco

[Engo]

Well, I finnaly recorded a video of my Falco, and I didn't play too good in the video but I want some feeedback anyways so here it is:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Cmn4A-pe_M (Jamarac is another name tag I go by)

It's against my brother who does not use Advanced Techniques so yeah don't bother saying anything about his fox.

Anyways I think I have improved a bit since when I recorded this so I'm going to try to record some more matches soon.

 

[SCOTU]

you need most to improve on your shine comboing, SHL, and movement.

 

[Engo]

Yes, I thought people would say that but like I mentioned in the description in the video my SHL and pillaring were bad in that match and I can do better. Thanks for posting though, and I still want some more feedback from different people.=D

 

[Adi]

Yeah it was pretty slow, I actually got bored a little less than halfway through and turned it off =(. You know what you need to work on, shape up those advanced techniques and use them!

 

[daddy neptune]

Basically everything was said that was needed to be said. Get in the lab and practice. Look over the stickied threads, and watch videos plenty of videos.

 

[Vro]

Don't take it personally.

You made a mistake by:
Lasering without Short Hop
Rolling more than once in a row
Using F-Smash reliantly
Full Jumping while opponent was on ground
Charging a smash while opponent was very far away
Failing ledge guards
Air Dodging when not necessary
Walking too much (not running or SHL)

You have strong technique, you can wavedash perfectly, you can shine, waveshine, L-cancel.. you have all the abilities, you just need to apply them. =)