FIREBIRD #5 (monthly Asian super heroine comic strip)

[Ashton099]

hello all,
my name is Ashton and I'm just a comic fan who likes to draw this crazy comic strip for fun. in the past I've been posting it on the laundry room for my kids to read but now I've decided to expand its exposure, not because I think its so great but just because its kind of fun to have an audience.
any comments, good or bad, are welcome~ its a work in progress so I don't mind any critiques at all and I'd like to make it better. Right now this story line is a homage to the Asian horror movies- Ring and Dark Water.

hope you enjoy~

http://www.flickr.com/photos/36664072@N03/3381438310/sizes/l/
(for larger pic)

 

[Neon Ness]

Looks fine thus far, the only thing is it's somewhat difficult to determine the order in which the panels should be read. For a second I got confused because I went from the third panel to the last one.

Just for future reference...

 

[Ashton099]

Looks fine thus far, the only thing is it's somewhat difficult to determine the order in which the panels should be read. For a second I got confused because I went from the third panel to the last one.

Just for future reference...

thanks for the input Neon Ness, that happens to be a common complaint from other readers and something that I will definately work out with the next installment.