Eternl - An original story by Ouendanation

[Ouendanation]

ATTN: This story may contain blood/gore at some point. Current version doesn't.

Here's a preview of a story I'm working on writing. Advice would be greatly appreciated. I have some of chapter II done, but it feels too incomplete to post.

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~ETERNL~
~BY OUENDANATION~

[Table of Contents]

[Chapter I] Prologue

[Chapter I - Prolougue]

One hundred thirteen years ago, the Earth was thrust into a major
crisis. It became overpopulated, and would soon become entirely
uninhabitable. Scientists were forced to work furiously at something
to help this crisis. They came up with a device that transported
people to other planets, which they dubbed "MTD", short for
"Molecular Transport Device". Unfortunately, the first test run
failed, and the scientist that went in never came out. It eventually
got fixed, and became mass-produced.

300,000,000 workers were sent to each planet to help build cities
and set up more MTDs. After 10 years, every planet was at least partially
habitable. People migrated to each planet, and everything went
smoothly. From then on, this was referred to as the "Great Migration".

One hundred thirteen years later, the planets are finished,
and people are living peacefully. No one knew that peace was about to
end.

 

[demoncaterpie]

As long as this story is Gundam-free, I'm sure it'll be fine.

Just try to dodge the cliches that are bound to appear in this story

 

[Blackadder]

You've set yourself up for a pretty epic story it seems.

As Demon said, try and avoid cliche's that could really easily end up in your story.
try to give it some reall diverse characters while you're at it!
I can already see the easy cast which would be "The old wise proffesor" "The naive young hero" the "Annoying love interest". All with thick middle American accents.

I'd love to see some awesome unique people in this story.

 

[Ouendanation]

You've set yourself up for a pretty epic story it seems.

As Demon said, try and avoid cliche's that could really easily end up in your story.
try to give it some reall diverse characters while you're at it!
I can already see the easy cast which would be "The old wise proffesor" "The naive young hero" the "Annoying love interest". All with thick middle American accents.

I'd love to see some awesome unique people in this story.

I've put a lot of thought into the villan(s), I hope it pays off :D
There is one character who will be cliche, but he's kind of vital to the story...