Eminem Super Smash Rap

[guerillawar]

Fear the Top Tier
Cause you ain't coming near
My Pit's Rear

What is that?
A bat?
You whack, no wonder your not back
You should be in SuperSmack br.

Your samus is like a famas, it blows
Metroid sucked harder than battletoads

What did you say
You don't play?
That's ok, go play your halo in may
As a matter of fact, Go Away

... i like samus and Ness, this is just for the rap

 

[Akebo]

Uh...Why not? I'll humor you. It was...okay. Maybe not professional. I might be able to do better, but I never gave it a shot. Just...stick with a single flow. It's all over the place.

 

[Sandy]

What song of Eminem's is this based on?

 

[Akebo]

It was based off of an Eminem song? I hadn't noticed.

 

[demoncaterpie]

Your samus is like a famas, it blows
Metroid sucked harder than battletoads

Blasphemy! Battletoads was awesome!

This could be a lot better. Even for a parody, it was a pretty poor rap. Your style is all over the place, and it's pretty hard to pin down just what you're trying to say.

It could at least be a bit funnier.

 

[Akebo]

Blasphemy! Battletoads was awesome!

This could be a lot better. Even for a parody, it was a pretty poor rap. Your style is all over the place, and it's pretty hard to pin down just what you're trying to say.

It could at least be a bit funnier.

Battletaods WAS a good game.

I didn't think it was funny at all. His style did seem to bounce a lot, but I think he did okay, at least.

 

[-ZERO-]

Like Akebo said, maintain the same flow, and try to be a little more complex with your words.

I fail to see what Eminem has to do with this.