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Shadow Chaos

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Chapter 10: Darkness Persues

Gerald's fist smashed onto the control pannel.

gerald: My..I mean OUR... Plans are falling apart! How could you let them get away!!

Shadow leaned against a wall, arms crossed and eyes shut.

Gerald: Are you listening to me?

Shadow: You worry too much, doctor. You forget I am the ultimate life form. I'll get the chaos emeralds back, as well as the two remaining super emeralds. I promise you, by tommarow night no hero will remain alive..
***
Knuckles flew from the mushroom kingdom, eyes slanted as he pushed forward, flying towards his flating island and landing in its foilage. Gerald's ship was still crashed there, the holes in its side causing malfunctions. Knuckles slowly began to head towards the ship.

A red blur came of of the tree next to him. He recieved a blow to the head, sending him to the ground. He looked up to see Metal Knuckles.

Knuckles: You again! What do you want.

Metal Knuckles' eyes glew yellow as the two echidna's went into a staredown. A second seemed like an hour, a minute like an eternity. The echidnas seemed to not need words, like mind talk.

Knuckles leapt at his mechanical counterpart, his fists pulled back. He launched a fist into Metal Knuckles' face, knocking the droid into a tree.
***

Ganondorf's body lay on the cave floor, long since dead. Gerald entered the gave and inspected the fallen warlock. He smiled and pulled out a green box. It creaked open, a green light emerging, and soon a mask floated out. It was Majora's Mask. The mask floated to Ganondorf's lifeless body and latched onto his face. The limbs twitched as he stood up in Ganondorf's body. The mask and the head tilted at the same time.

Majora: Fufufufufu, Finally a body of my own. Boy will link have a heart attack, His two enemies combined into one...

Gerald: Majora, your first mission is to go get the super emeralds.

Majora: I'll get your **** emeralds, but you are not my master. I am more of a mercenary. Once my job is done, you can expect me to rule the planet, not you.

Majora took off, running with Ganondorf's legs.
***
Sonic scooped up the Chaos Emeralds from Tails.

Tails: SONIC!

Sonic: Tails, stop whining. Shadow will come for these and I should be in super sonic mode when we fight. Super Sonic vrs. Normal him should be a peice of cake dude!

Tails: I am sick of being your lacky, Sonic.

Sonic: Whats your problem, Miles!

The heroes had started to gather in peach's castle. Sonic, Tails, Rouge, Eggman, Metal Sonic, Amy, Roy, Peach, Goombario, Kooper, betty, Big the cat, Popo and Nana, Link, Luigi, Mario, Cortex, Crash, Kirby, Fox, Samus, Waluigi, E.Gadd, Game and Watch, Zelda, Chaos, Tikal, and Mewtwo.

Sonic: Whats the plan guys?

Link: I hid the two Super Emeralds as requested, Sonic.

Tails: And who is guarding them?

Link: Romani and Cremia of the Romani Ranch near Termina.

Sonic: You have two chicks guarding them?!

Rouge: And whats wrong with that, Hedgehog!

Mario: We fight too much to actually save the world.

Crash: I say we storm their ship! All of us at once would overpower a hedgehog, his metal clone, and a fat old guy!

Eggman: Hey!

Crash: No offense.

Parakeete flew in, out of breath, falling to the throne's floor.

Parakeete: link! Termina...Under attack!

Link: ****... I'm on it!

Mario & luigi: We'll go with you!

Tails: Me too...I can't stand sonic anymore.

Zelda: Sonic, I need you to go to Kokiri Forest and find the elder.

Sonic: Im on it.
**

Sonic walked across the field of Hyrule. He sighed and kicked his feet. 'Am I loosing tails?'

Shadow from a tree: So we meet again Sonic the Fakehog.

Sonic: Shadow!

Sonic realized he didn't have the chaos emeralds with him, and just when he needed them the most!

Shadow: Hand over the chaos emeralds, blue fake.

Sonic: Never, Imposter! I'll kill you.

Shadow: No I'm sorry, Faker, WE will kill you.

Sonic: Um...We?

Metal Shadow stepped out from a bush next to the tree.

Sonic: ****! Two on One isn't fair!

Shadow: Who said darkness plays fair, faker. You lost this hand, and unfortunatley its the final round.

Metal Shadow punched Sonic with a metal fist, sending him backwards and spiraling through the dirt. Shadow leapt from the tree and landed on his spine, Sonic's eyes widened in pain as he coughed up blood.

Sonic: Arg...I need help...

Shadow: Now then its time we fini-Ow ****!

Shadow was sent into the air from an uppercut from a mysterious figure, then the figure leapt up and elbowed Shadow, sending him hurdling into Zora River. Shadow crawled out, bleeding and dripping wet.

Sonic: metal!!

Metal Sonic landed next to Sonic, picking him up. He pointed at himself, then to metal Shadow. Sonic understood clearly.

Sonic: Got it.

Metal Sonic charged at Metal Shadow, ramming into the droid. Sonic on the other hand, ran at Shadow picking up speed.

Sonic: here I come, Shadow!
***

Link, Mario, Luigi, and Tails arrived at Termina. The town was up in flames and people were scattering. Link saw the four giant deities fighting some mysterioud figure midair. The deities were loosing!

Link: What...

The deities fell to the ground and faded away, the land beginning to shake over their guardians' deaths.

Link: What the ****? Is that Majora or Ganondorf!

Majora landed on the ground in front of them, smirking and crossing his arms.

Majora: Both, in a way. Muahahaa, Link you won't succeed this time. Darkness reigns, get use to it.

Link weilded his master sword: Not if I have anything to say about it, *******.

Mario: I'm in, Time for an asswhupping!

Luigi: Mumamea! me too!
***

King Boo laughed a ghostly smile as his boos carried Cremia and Romani away, Majora perfectly distracting Link as planned. He grabbed the two super emeralds from the cow barn, spinning in circles and poofing to Gerald. He chuckled and gave them to Gerald, who placed them into the cannon.

Gerald: My plan is almost complete...Time to start the countdown...

King Boo: But we're missing the chaos emeralds....

Gerald: Screw them. Oh and here is your reward.

A black bolt of lightning struck King Boo, who screamed as the volts pursed his ectoplasmic form. He exploded in a white fog, his red crown fell to the floor.

Gerald: Muahhahaa!

He pressed the big red button, a voice called out.

Computer: Countdown started, 30 minutes....
***

Shadow smirked as he felt the super emeralds in the cannon, a bolt of energy struck him as he began to glow, and he activated Hyper Shadow form.
he laughed and floated into the air.

Sonic: Oh ****...What to do ugh....

Big the cat ran up to them: Sonic catch!

The seven chaos emeralds flew from big's hands and surrounded Sonic, spinning and spinning. With a blast of gold light, Sonic became super sonic. The emeralds went back to Big.

Sonic flew up at Shadow, the two golden hedgehogs fighting eachother with multiple punches, their punches were fast and furious, you couldnt see them.

Metal Shadow smirked as he suddenly energized with gold, and his metal was gold, he was Mecha Shadow. Metal Sonic glared, and made fists.
***
Metal Knuckles cried out as he fell to the ground, a kick from Knuckles sending him into the wall of the shrine. Metal Knuckles leapt up encased in green and red, elbowing Knuckles. He glared and spit out a tooth.
***
Link, Mario, Luigi, and Tails all charged at Majora, who began to transform. His transformation fused with Ganondorf's body, and he stood 12 feet tall, with whips and armor.

Majora: You'll fail!
***

All the heroes were in their final battles. Gerald laughed.

Gerald: Shadow, that stupid pawn. He isn't the ultimate life form. And he doesn't know the story. He wouldn't help me if he knew I had pushed Maria from the escape capsule, ensuring her death! Muahhaa! THat whole insane over her death was a coverup for my plans. And one the 'cannon' is ready in 20 minutes... AHAHAHAHA!
 
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SMM: Link, catch! (throws Link the Fierce Deity Mask)

Link (transforming into Oni Link): Majora! Now you die!

Majora: Not this time, fairy boy. Not when Ganondorf's body transforms into Ganon's body. Haha! You're finished.

Tails: But he's not alone, right guys?

Mario: We're with ya.

Luigi: Mumamia! 100%.
 

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Super Sonic: Bring it on, Shadow! Chaos-

Shadow: You'll never beat me! Chaos-

Both: CONTROL!

******

Gerald pushed Maria out?! That ba*****! But Link doesn't stand a chance... unless the Fierce Deity Mask pops in.....
 

Elginive

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*roy has back up agianst a wall with head down and eyes closed. Suddenly he brings he head up and opens eyes.* I'm Sick of this, I've lost my Best friend, Marth, Andm ore are dieing, I won't let this world end like this! *he wandered over to a table and smashed his fist agianst it*

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Roy roxors.... sorry, lol, O.o you make the chapters sooo long, lol... takes forever to catch myself up, but its awesome, cant wait for the next chapter ^_^

:grrr: lol cool face! Gnight all :sleep:
 

Shadow Chaos

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Chapter 11: Gerald's Plan Revealed

Two fists collided against Sonic's face, from each side one following the other. He spit blood and floated backwards a little. He glared as he wiped his face.

Shadow: This is pointless, faker.

Sonic charged up, engulfed in gold energy. He flew at Shadow, head first and charged into the hedgehog's gut. Shadow felt his breath leave him as he flew back and into a mountain wall. The mountain shook from the force and imploded on itself, crumbling in and the rubble engulfing Shadow. Sonic flew at the rubble, just as shadow shot up. He pulled back to punch, but shadow flew at him from higher then expected. He charged into sonic's spine and elbowed him, sending them plowing into the dirt, Shadow riding sonic by his elbow. He leapt up and came down with his foot, but Sonic rolled to the side, Shadow's foot plowing into the ground.

Metal Shadow and Metal Sonic exchanged punches, their metal forms clashing loudly and spraying sparks all over. Metal Sonic punched Metal Shadow in the face, sending the droid into the dirt. Metal Shadow responded with a kick to his oppinent's left leg, sending the metal part zipping into a hillside. Metal Sonic's wounded area sprayed sparks and surged with lightning. Metal Sonic charged at Metal Shadow and uppercutted him, sending him into the air. He flew up and elbowed the midair black droid, sending Metal Shadow back into the ground.
***
Knuckles glared as he felt Metal Knuckles' fist collide with his face, knocking the echidna into the wall of the master emerald shrine. Metal Knuckles held out his arm, metal spikes came out all down his arm, and he proceeded to whip them at knuckles. Knuckles felt searing pain down his right eye as a huge gash was formed. This clone was way powerful, more powerful then Metal Sonic. It was over, unless he did something quick. He punched at the clone, his fists engulfed in red energy. Metal Knuckles took a few minor steps back. There was a rumble from the right, both echidnas turned and looked, as a drill car came rolling towards them.

Armadillo: Chaotix to the rescue!

Crocodile: Muhaa!

Bumblebee: Yes indeedy!

Chameleon: Want a peice of us, bolt bag?

Knuckles: Mighty, Vector, Charmy, Espio? Whered you guys come from!

Mighty the armadillo: Meh we've been around.

Vector the Croc: You've been so busy with that blue hedgehog you never noticed.

Charmy Bee: Yeah, you airhead!



They rammed their drill into Metal Knuckles, sending him flying back, a hole in his chest. He began to go haywire, arms flailing, eyes glowing. Mighty leapt into the air, and in a sonic like manner curled up and hommed in on Metal Knuckles. He rammed into him and smashed him to the ground. Vector span into the air and came down on the droid, followed by Charmio. Espio kicked Metal knuckles in the neck, sending his head flying into the ship.

Knuckles: Wow...You guys were fast.

Metal Knuckles' body began to glow.

Knuckles: TIME TO GO!

The Chaotix team leapt into the car and drove off, just as Metal knuckles exploded.
***

Gerald: Talk you idiot!

Omochao: Press the B button to do a summersault!

Gerald: WHat the ****?

Omochao: I give useless information.

Gerald: Where is Metal Knuckles!

Omochao: There are 10 animals here!

Gerald whipped him across the face.

Omochao: Thats it, Im not helping you anymore!

gerald: What are you babbling?!

Omochao: Im Omochao! imhere to help you!

Gerald watched in suprise as Metal Knuckles' head sped in and hit Omochao, making him exploded into peices

Omochao: Awaaawaaaaa!!!

Gerald: What the **** was the point of this?
***
Link slashed his sword at Majora, cutting the creature in the shoulder. Majora laughed and whipped Link, sending him into the ground. Mario leapt from behind with a meteor punch, hitting him in the back of the head, sending him forward a bit. Majora turned and waved his hands. The four guardian masks appeared from midair, shooting fireballs at Mario, sending him backwards.

Luigi: Oh no! Mario!

Luigi used his Luigi Rocket and fired himself at Majora engulfed in flames. Majora side stepped him and whipped him, sending him into Mario. Tails flew into the air and came down on Majora, whipping him with his two tails, barely scratching him.

Link: Ugh...Need power.

Subconcious Zelda: Link! Play your Ocarina! Play the song of time!

Link: Where'd you come from?!

Zelda: im a vision, you ****! Now do it!

Thats when StarFox flew in, out of it came Fox, Ness, and Roy.

Fox: Zelda said you needed help!

Roy: Yeah, how was she right? Is she pyschic?

Ness: thats me!

Link: Yeah Uh-

Mario: Um guys... Alittle helpa here!

Ness: oh right! PK THUNDER!

The PK thunder smashed into Majora, Majora growled angirly and unleashed Ganondorf's warlock punch.
Link pulled out the ocarina of time, playing its soothing melody the song of time. The ground shook and a blue ball floated from the sky, as the goddess of time sent an item to link.

Link: the feirce deity mask! Yes!

Link put it on and screamed, transforming into Feirce Deity Link in a flash.

Mario: Wow!

Luigi: Lookin cool Linky!

Link: this ends, Majora!

He slashed his sword at majora, firing an energy blast.

Majora: Gyaaaah. I have to transform!

The ground shook as green bolts launched from the pits of ****, and Majora's body began to change. Soon He was Majora on Ganon's body, roaring and slashing his daggers.

Link: AH ****int!
All: lets do it!
***
Sonic glared at Shadow, both of them in a standstill. The ground began to shake.

Shadow: My plan is almost complete, The doctor and I shall rule the world! Muaha

Sonic: **** you Shadow!

The ground shook more and the clouds glew black. The chaotix team landed next to Big the cat.

Metal Shadow whipped his hand at metal sonic, cutting him in half. His upper body floated there, Metal Sonic trying to stay activated. He had one chance. he lunged onto Metal Shadow and grabbed him in a bear hug. His eyes became numbers. 3...2...1..

On one Metal Sonic...smiled. He then exploded in a brilliant fireball, taking metal Shadow with him. Their remains sprayed across the battle field, fire everywhere.

Sonic: Metal!

Suddenly the floating island exploded in a brilliant light, killing everyone on it. Gerald's ship floated away from the explosion and over to Super Sonic and Hyper Shadow. It began to glow.

Shadow: And 5...4...3...2...1... Bye sonic!

They waited as the ship glew.

Shadow: this isnt right....

The ship's center opened, showing the super and master emeralds. They began to glow and feed the ship and cannon energy. The ship began to morph, growing limbs and more. It soon became a giant black shadow robot. A black orb appeared in the sky.

gerald's intercom voice: Muahhaha Meet Mecha Shadow 32X. The real ultimate creation. Using its power, I can now destroy the world.

Shadow: doctor this wasnt the plan!

Gerald: You gullible hedgehog! I tricked you! It was I who killed Maria! Not the army! I used you, the so called ultimate lifeform, to help me. I want to destroy the world, not rule it. And no one will live. Not even you SHADOW!

Shadow: M-Maria...You killed here?!

Shadow cried...for the first time.

Shadow: You'll pay for this!

He flew at Mecha Shadow, engulfed in gold. The mecha robot smacked him aside like a small fly, which was how big he was.

Sonic: Shadow!

Knuckles: This is not good.

Shadow growled and flew at the robot's chest.

Shadow: lets see how you do with this!

The super emeralds fell from their containers, to the ground. Sonic and Knuckles glew brightly as they became their hyper forms. The chaotix team smirked and saw a door on the mech's foot. Taking this opportunity, they snuck into the robot as Knuckles and Sonic flew up next to Shadow.

Sonic: Ready?

Shadow: We have to destroy that orb! Careful the mech still has the master emerald, hes more powerful still.

Shadow: he tricked me.

~Flashback~
Shadow fell towards earth, he had fullfilled Maria's wish. Suddenly, he heard a voice.

Gerald's Voice: Shadow! Its me! Gerald Robotnik, you're creator! Use chaos control! I am still alive on earth at Area 51, Come free me and we can get Maria's killer.

~End flashback~

Shadow: I caused all this destruction...and I was just a pawn!

Sonic: We’ll get Robotnik for this.

Knuckles: The master emerald is feeding the orb!
***

Gerald laughed as he watched his Mecca shadow begin combat with the three. He smirked and turned…when he felt a punch.

Eggman: Grandfather, we have a bone to pick.

Gerald: Once that orb gets big enough, it will collide with Earth and cause a huge explosion! The only thing that will live is this Mecha! Then I AM THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM! Not Shadow!

Eggman: You’re off your rocker!

Eggman pulled his fist back and punched Gerald in the face, sending him into the controls.

Mighty: Its war of the fat robotniks!

***

Roy screamed as the dagger cut him across the chest, sending him back into a pile of hay.

Ness: Roy! **** you!

Link took the opportunity and slashed at the multicolored tail with his double sized sword, Majora screamed. Link slashed twice more.

Majora: You won this round….

The body of gannon fell from Majora.

Majora: I’ll be back!

Link watched him vanish, then rushed to Roy.

Link: he is alive…for now.

Mario: **** LOOK AT THAT!

They looked up and saw the Mecha Shadow in the distance.

Link: This isnt good….
***

Sonic: Guys! If we can get that master emerald the orb will disperse into nothingness!

Knuckles: Getting close to it will be hard!

Shadow: Lets go!

Sonic & Shadow: CHAOS CONTROL!

They launched at the Mecha and hit it in the face, Mecha slapped them all away like the small flies they were.

Shadow: Chaos Spear!

Sonic: Sonic Wind

Knuckles: Chaos Storm!

Their attacks hit the mecha, but they did no damage.
TBC
 

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1600 characters over? lmao thats pretty funny, u could have also posted multiple posts for one chapter... i thought that would have happened already cuz of how much uve done already, lol.
 

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Great story, dude.

And idiots -

Metal Knuckles debuted in Sonic R.

"real life updates" were two different complete thoughts, and it goes more like "real life, updates."
 

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Chapters 9, 10, & 11

So, after all the pain death, and destruction Shadow has caused,he has finally seen the light-
an emerald colored light with tinges of blood red. Will our heroes and their new ally prevail against the ultimate evil,
Mecha Shadow?
We can only hope as we eagerly await Chapter 12!
Bravo, Shadow Chaos! Very well written.
PEGASUS
 

Ocarina

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Battle against finalhazard music plays

Live and Learn!

Yeah, that would be the music for these battles! Go Shadow, Knuckles, and Sonic! Go Eggman! Kick their sorry @$$es! Majora lost, even with Ganon's powers! HAHAHAH! But Gerald wants to be the ultimate lifeform?!
 

Shadow Chaos

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Chapter: Extra

Taking a break from the usual story, and since I dont have much time. Heres a chapter of bloopers. The story's end will have a DVD like menu to be a parody, with a running bloopers updates, a mini fic of how Master Hand created nintendo world, a behind the scenes, and more.

BLOOPER REAL ONE

Take 1
**

Shadow is falling towards earth.

Shadow: Maria..This is what you wanted right? This is the promise I made-- AAAH!

SNAP! Wire falls and Shadow falls, smashing through the earth bluescreen and leaving a big hole.

Director: What the ****? SONIC!

Sonic: Muahhaha! *holding Scissors*

Take 2
****

Master Hand: I am the ruler of this dimension!

Pizza guy walks out.

Pizza guy: Pizza for Mr Hand?

Master Hand: Thank You

He pays the guy and shoves pizzas into his wrist opening.

Shadow: ARG! We're loosing footage!

Take 3
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Shadow: CHaos Spear!

The spear hits tails and he vanishes.

Sonic: What'd you do to him?!

Sonic trips over a wire.

Sonic: Kyuu!

Nine lights, six cameras, and two plants fall on sonic and burry him.

Sonic: Owie...

Director: Arg!

**
Take 4
***

Eggman leaps down

Sonic: This is all your fault! You did this didnt you!

Eggman: I didnt do it!

Omochao: Press B to do a summersault!

Mario: GYAAAAH! ITS THE SATAN!

Sonic: I thought we saw the last of HIM when Sonic Adventure 2 finished!

Director: Gyah! The horror!

Omochao: Im your ally! I can give you hints!

Eggman: Whos ally! You say that to evil and good in SA2!

Yoshi eats Omochao

Take 5
****
Sonic: this game of tag is boring! Im outta here! Oh, Finally decided to show up eh? Ok! Bring it on!

Luigi: What the?

Director: SONIC! WRONG GAME!

Sonic: Oopsie!
***
Take 6
***

Sonic: SHADOW! I'LL NEVER FORGIVE YOU FOR THIS! LOOK WHAT
YOU DID TO KNUCKLES!
Knuckles: Uh...Yo

Sonic: oops!

Take 7
***

Sonic leaps at Shadow.

Shadow: Chaos Control!

He leaps...and it doesnt work. Sonic and Shadow collided and smash to the ground

Shadow: Aaaah! My toof! iff miffing!

Sonic: Fah Fah Fah! Fait! Fine fis foo!

Shadow: Fhis fisnt tfhe Chafos Femerald! Fits a Cracfer Fack Mood Fing!

Tails: Hehehehhehe! Mahahahhahaa!

Director: Tails youre fired!

Tails: Doh!

***

more to come!
 

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Shadow growled and zipped at the robot Shadow, aimed right at its chest. Its eyes glew to life as he neared, however. Two lazers fired from its eyes, smashing into the ground under Hyper Shadow. The ground exploded with great force, a pillar of fire engulfing Shadow and sending him back into Sonic, both of them hurdiling into the ground.

Knuckles growled as he watched the hedgehogs smash into the ground, creating a huge crater.

Knuckles: Dont send a hedgehog to do an echidna's job.

Knuckles flew at the mech, gaining speed as he zipped it it, sparks being created by his velocity. The Mech's chest glew, as did the master emerald. Out of the emerald shot a gigantic green energy blast, which smashed Knuckles and sent him into the forest.

Sonic: Its too powerful! Everytime we get near it, it attacks!

Mario: Muumamea!

Mario flew in, two angel wings having sprouted on his cap. He smashed into the Mech's back.

Sonic: Huh?!

Luigi: Yaha!

Gliding with his magic yellow cape, Luigi smashed into its face, the mech's eyes slanted in anger. From the right, huge energy blasts began to fire.

Knuckles: Whos that?!

Samus was firing from her arm cannon, keeping her place as she powered up blasts. From behind, Fox and Krystal were firing their lazers.

Shadow: Its working, Watch!

Shadow was encased in gold energy as he shot at the mech. He smashed into its chest, creating a loud explosion. The mech turned and went to back hand him, but Luigi pushed Shadow out of the way and took the blow. Luigi flew back and smashed into the ruins of Hyrule castle.

Link: Hey mech!

Link, still in fierce deity mode, began to slash his sword in the air, shooting energy blasts at the mech's body.

Sonic: Good! Lets take this ooportunity to attack!

Ness: PK Pulse!


The green blast exploded and knocked the mech into the air. The master emerald began to glow brightly, and a loud roar could be heard.

Shadow: That sounds like...The prototype!

The shadow mech suddenly grew a long tail, and scales down its back.

Sonic: Kyuu!
***

Eggman belted Gerald across the face, sending him to the floor. Gerald kicked up, aiming right between eggman's legs. Eggman wasnt effected.

Eggman: You dult I dont have a thing there!

Gerald: Thats wrong!

Gerald punched upward, hitting Eggman between the eyes and breaking those dorky sunglasses he wears. Eggman growled and fell to the ground, Gerald leaping up and kicking him in the side. Suddenly the mech shook violently. Gerald fell and tumbled across the floor, eggman following and landing on him.

Gerald: Those idiotic heroes are messing up my plans!
***

Sonic and Shadow smashed into the Master emerald's holder at the same time, the mech whirring in anger. It backhanded them into the ground. Mario came from behind, and smashed into its back, the mech turned in confusion.

Knuckles: Sonic! The orb is getting close to completion!

The mech's eyes morphed into a countdown ticker 0::21

21 seconds!


Shadow: Sonic! lets do it! Here I come you copy! Hyper Chaos Spear!

Five chaos spears, all at once smashed into the mech, causing it to hurdle to the ground.

Sonic: All together now!

Sonic, Shadow, Knuckles, Mario, and Luigi zipped at the chest of the mech all at once, causing an explosion. The Master emerald flung into the air and smashed to the ground. The mech began to shake and jitter, its head spinning in circles. The black energy orb exploded in the air, spraying fireballs all over.
**
Gerald: Noo! ****it! But I haven't failed yet! Activating Escape mode!
***

The mech's back opened, and out came a smaller Mecha Shadow, this one looked far less capable of battle. It grabbed the master emerald.

Gerald's Voice: I'll take this, head to ARK, and replan!

The robot zipped up into space.

Sonic & Shadow: No!

Knuckles: Lets go!

The three hypers zipped off after it, tacking off into space. They followed the robot through hords of meteors, some of the meteors smashing into them and causing them to almost loose balance.

Gerald: You rodents don't give up!

Its chest opened and began to fire missles at them, the heroes barely dodging.
***

As everyone watched from earth at the events in space unfolded, the mech fell to its knees. Inside were Eggman and the Chaotix.

Eggman: This thing is going to blow!

The inside flashed the red warrning light, the siren whirred to live, smoke filled the bot.

Mighty: Lets get out of here! Fast!

Charmy: You said it!

They ran out of the bot, jumping out its mouth just as it exploded, barely dodging the fire.

Tails: Im not letting sonic get all the credit!

Tails leapt onto a super emerald and they all glew with him, and he transformed into Super Tails, flying after them with 5 flickies following him.
***

Sonic: We have to get him before he gets to ark!

Tails: Sonic wait up!

Sonic: Tails this is my fight not yours!

Tails: Blow it out your hole, pighedge.

Shadow: May I remind you bumbleheads that hes escaping!

Knuckles: Look!

The starfox flew in from the right.

Fox: Target Sighted! Lock on!

Slippy: Gotcha Fox!

Krystal: On it!

The ship fired rapid fire at Gerald's escape shadow. The Bot had to slow down to dodge. The four heroes zipped from behind, smashing into Gerald's mecha.

Gerald: No! this isnt happening!

Shadow: Take this Gerald!

He smashed into the robot's head, Sonic into its back, and Knuckles into its rear. Tails smashed it in the side.

Gerald: Take this! Hyper Cannon!

The master emerald fired a blast at them, it smashing into Knuckles and tails, sending them backwards into some meteors, deactivating their forms. StarFox opened its hatch and caught them just as they neared the atmosphere.

Sonic: Its just us now!

Shadow: Lets do it!

They grabbed hands and engulfed in a single gold case, powering together as they smashed into the robot. The thing began to explode bit by bit, the master emerald floating from its grasp. They grabbed it and flew to earth.

Gerald: Nooooo!

The head, where he was, exploded in a bright fireball, taking ARK with it. Sonic and Shadow landed in the center of the Smashers, dropping the emerald. They were given a heroes welcome as everyone cheered, and they powered down.

Sonic: Shadow! We did it.

Shadow: That may be...but I caused too much death....I feal guilt...

Sonic: So? You're a hero now! You can repent.

Shadow: I'll repent in my own time. OH SONIC! LOOK A CHILLI DOG!

Sonic: Where?!

He turned and look, then blinked.

Sonic: heeey! Hyrule doesnt have chilli dogs!

He turned and saw shadow had left. That night they all had a huge bash, to celebrate their victory.

Eggman: Sonic, dont think this hardboiled egg has gone soft! You havent seen the last of my evil schemes... I still have Metal's data, he will be rebuilt!
***
Epilogue:

Sonic: Sonic went on a mission to find shadow. They don't see him much, as he is always wondering Nintendo World.

Knuckles: He found a back up floating island, and now guards the master emerald with Chaos and Tikal at his side.

Tails: Fed up with being in Sonic's shadow, he left Sonic's team and became Tails the Fox. He has a series of video games, a Japanese Anime, and saves the ugly men from the hysterical ladies stealing their purse oO;

Mario & Luigi: Went to be janitors as they are on Gamecube, with their waterpack and vaccum buisness.

Link: Helped Zelda rebuold Hyrule, and is now Prince of Hyrule (it FINALLY Happened)

Eggman: Went into seclusion in his lab, working on a better Metal Sonic...

Shadow: Who knows, he wont show his face. Their are sighting of him from time to time, but hes seen less then Loch Ness or Big Foot.

The rest went on with their daily lives...


THE END?
 

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Extras

(( http://shadowchaos0.tripod.com/dvdoptions/id1.html))

After the fic, you see a main menu pop up ((see above)) I'm going to choose your options :-D Muahhahaa!

The super sonic TV moves down to Preview for "Darkness Chronicles 2: Chaotic Ring"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The following preview is rated PG-13

A SHADOWCHAOS Production

Four years after a world went through troubled times, and peace had finally restored to the land... Evil got a new face


Majora: The destruction and enlavement of all on earth shall commence in 7 days..

But evil...isnt alone.

\\\Eggman////

Eggman: I'll get you hedgehog!

\\\Uka Uka///

UkaUka: Time to die, Aku Aku!

\\\Daggerz///
A black echidna with red crest on his chest, resembling Knuckles.

Daggerz: Grah, I will rule all!

\\\Gerald///
Hes an android, with half artifical face, and an arm and leg.

Gerald: All you ungratedful humans, who took everything away from me..will feal my loss ad despair!

\\\Bowser///

Bowser: graaah! Diie Plumber!

\\\Cortex///
Cortex: Muahahhahaha!

\\\Mecha Metal Sonic///
MMS (as seen in Sonic 3 & Knuckles): Vrrrrr!


These evil foes will harness the power of earth's long sealed away evil tool, the Chaotic Mobius Ring.

Vixyus: The Chaotic Ring was sealed away by the former sages Eons ago, after Eggman's great great great ancestor attempted to use it in order to conquer earth for a dark era of 3 decades.

Sonic: Thats because we werent around!

But they arent going to get it that easy!

Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, Mighty, Tikal, Amy, Mario, Luigi, Link, Roy, Waluigi, Fox, Samus, Ness, and More are out to stop him! But they have an...unexpected ally.

Shadow: We only have 5 days left! Come on!

Coming soon...to a smashboard near you.....

DARKNESS CHRONICLES SAGA 2: THE CHAOTIC RING

***
More bonus to come! ((Next: Blooper Real 2 and MiniFic "Master Hand creates nintendo world"
 

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AWWWWW! IT ENDED!!! No..... at least we have a sequel! This fic was great! Can't wait for the sequel, Shadow Chaos!
 

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The sonic tv moves to bloopers and flashes, then selects Reel 2
***

Take 8
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Ganondorf:Well then I might as well take it and make you have a challange, Echidna.

Link: Ganondorf?!

Ganondorf: Thats right Link, I have pledged my alliance to the flag of the united...Doh **** you mrs. Applebee for making me recite that!

director: Who knew evil warlocks went to school...
***

Take 9
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Director: yes! We've been going real great with no screw ups! Ok next scene!

Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You-

The fil screws up, and the lights start flashing.

Shadow: What the ****?

A gremlin from Gremlins walks on camera and slashes the the picture, and turns to audience.

Gremlin: Gyahahahahahahaha!

Director: Who let the gremlins out?!

Sonic: WHO LET THE GREMLINS OUT! WOOF WOOF WOOF!

Dirctor: oh gimme a break!
***

Take 100
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Director: OK the gremlins seem to have left and...wait! Fix the sign!

crewman: Sorry!
**

Take 10
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Director: HEY! This is take 11 now thanks to you!

Crewman: My apologies!
***

Take 666
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Director: What?

Sonic: AAAAH! THE MARK OF THE BEAST!

Devil Chaos Chao: Muahahahahahah!

Crewman: April Fools!

Director: ****it! You're fired!

Crewman: D'oh!

Director: And you're fired too! I dont know why but you are!

Pikachu *snaps finger*: Pich!

Director: I am not a *****

Sonic: He said Pich, not *****!
***

Take 12
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Shadow had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Shadow: I know hes around here somewhere...

Sonic watched from a log in the distance.

Sonic: Looking for me faker?

Shadow: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Sonic: Me? Good? HA! I haaaad to save the world, because then I wouldn't be able to conquer a world that had blown up.

Director: Great! Print...Hey wait! Dont! SONIC! SHADOW! DONT SWITCH PLACES ANYMORE!

Shadow: haha!
***

Take 13
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You were good on AR--AAAAH!

Sonic slips as he says the word Ark, falling into a river.

Director: Cut! Someone fish him out!

Big the cat: Im on it!
***

Take 14
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here someWOAAAH!

Sonic slips again, falling forward and hitting his face on the ground.

Sonic: ****it! This cant get worse!

An overgrown Trap Door Spider opens its door, grabs Sonic, and pulls him into its den underground quickly.

Director: Gah! Someone save him!

Shadow leaps in after sonic, and Shadow and the Spider can be heard fighting, the spider making karate noises.

Director: Someone call pest control..

***

Take 15
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Metal Sonic: Vrrr

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Metal Sonic: Vrrrrrr! Beep! Beep Beep!

Shadow: Me? Good? HA! I haaaad to save the world, because then I wouldn't be able to conquer a world that had blown up.

Director: Cut! Print! Sonic you finally did something right!

Metal Sonic: Vrrrrr

Director: What the ****? SONIC!

Sonic: Whaaat? All good actors have stunt doubles!
***

Take 16
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me fa-

The log cracks and breaks in two, it and Shadow fall twenty feet to the forest floor.

Shadow: Ow I broke my *** bone!
***

Take 17
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Knuckles had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Knuckles: I know hes around here somewhere...

Tikal watched from a log in the distance.

Tikal: Looking for me faker?

Knuckles: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Tikal: Me? Good? HA! I haaaad to save the world, because then I wouldn't be able to conquer a world that had blown up.

Director: Great....Wait! Wheres Sonic and Shadow?!

Knuckles: they went to snag a couple chilli dogs, they paid me 20 bucks to play sonic's role.

Tikal: Hahaha! They paid me 100!

Knuckles: WHAT?! Whyd I get 20 and she gets 100!

Tikal: because Im female....

Knuckles: Point Taken
***

Take 18
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Sonic: I dont want to do this!

Director: You're waisting film Sonic!

Sonic: Every take I either slip, get attacked by a spider, or screw up!

Director: At least it cant get worse

Three gremlins run by them when they dont notice. You hear their manical laughter as nine lights suddenly fall, all landing on sonic and the director.

Director: OW! cc....cut

A tenth falls on the camera and blacks out.

***

Take 19
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Shadow: Me? Good? HA! I haaaad to save the world, because then I wouldn't be able to go to JC Pennies high heels clearance sale!

Sonic: Uhh...

Shadow: Uh...You never heard that...

***

Take 20
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Shadow: Me? Good? HA! I haaaad to save the world, because then I wouldn't be able to conquer a world that had blown up.

Omochao: Shadow is fast! You can't just attack him! try to attack him!

Sonic: Aaah! Hes back!

Shadow: What the ****? We havent started fighting yet! ANd you arent in this till later!

Omochao: Hi my name is omochao! DId I mention my name was omochao?

Sonic: Ugh!

Omochao: To raise chao, give them animals...They love animals in a wrong way.

Sonic: THATS IT!

Shadow: Hand me the canopener!

Omochao: AAAH! THATS A CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT!
***
 

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Take 21
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Sonic Chao had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic Chao: Boo! Beep Beep!

Shadow Chao watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow Chao: Undugachug Oondugachugchug!

Sonic Chao: Voo Voo! Beep! Nyaaaaah!

Shadow Chao: He hash Bee vroo breep!

Director: Now thats just stupid!
***

Take 22
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Mario had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Mario: I know hes-a around here somewhere-a...

Wario watched from a log in the distance.

Wario: Looking for-a me faker? Gyaaah!

Mario: What-a happened! You were good on ARK!

Log snaps under Wario's fatass and he falls to teh ground and makes a crater.

Director: SONIC! SHADOW! ENOUGH STAND INS!
***

Take 23
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me laker?

Sonic: I love the lakers!
***

Take 24
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Shadow: Theres no time to play games! You wont even get the chance!

Director: Wrong Game, Shadow!

***

Take 25
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: What happened! You were good on ARK!

Shadow: Theres no time to play games, you wont even gets some pants!

Director: Wrong Game again Sha--Wait?

Sonic: I dont get it....
**

Take 26
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around...

Bursts out laughing

Sonic: I get it now! hahahahaaa!

Director: Thats not funny!

Cameraman: Actually it kind of is

Director: You're fired!
***

Take 27
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Sonic: Is the director Watching?

Shadow: No, teehee.

Sonic: Ok write this down, shadow.

Dear Omochao,

I am your #1 fan. Everytime you give me advice it makes me horny. I love the way you float around. Please come to my house tonight at 2 AM making loud noises shouting "Im going to rob you!" to tell me its you, so we can have fun.

Sincerly, ShadowChaos


Shadow: MUahhahahahah!

Sonic: **** the camera was running!

***

Take 28
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Director: Ok lets get this right people, Ive had a long night after omochao broke in claiming I told him to.

Sonic: Teehee

Shadow: ahhahhahaha!

Director: Grrrr! Thats it! You two dont get that raise now!

Omochao: SHADOWCHAOS!

Director: AAAAAH HES BACK!
***

Take 29
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Sonic: I found you! Faker!

Shadow: I will have...Revenge! Maria!

Sonic: What you see is what you get, just a guy who loves adventure. Im sonic the hedgehog!

Shadow: You know I cant let you live. Your adventuring days are coming to an end!

Director: WRONG GAME!

***

Take 300
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Sonic had purpousley ditched the group, he was walking in the jungle.

Sonic: I know hes around here somewhere...

Shadow watched from a log in the distance.

Shadow: Looking for me faker?

Director: WAIT! Fix the sigN! Whos the new crewman!

Tails: Gyahahahaha!

Director: I thought i fired you!

Tails: You cant, contract says I cant be fired!

Omochao: Tails is a fox, did you know that? He can be used to raise chao!

Tails: No I cant!

Dozens of chaos dog pile Tails

Tails: AAAAAAAH!

Sonic: hahahahaha!

Omochao: Sonic likes to read romance novels while wearing a dress at night. Did you know that?

Sonic: I DO NOT!

Shadow: AHAHAHA!

Omochao: Did you know by pressing B you can see that Shadow has a crush on teh women of DBZ?

Shadow: WHAT?!

Director: GET HIM!
***

Take 31
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Sonic: REady?

Omochao: Have you tried pressing A to jump? Try it its fun!

Shadow: You again?! Dont you have to go get an oil change or something!

Sonic: We're still on scene 12! We'll never finish!

Omochao: To press a button press your finger in a downward motion when it is placed on a button. try it, its fun!

Shadow: What annoyance!

Sonic: Someone shut him up!

Omochao: Did you know that if you touch fire it will burn you? Try it! Its fun!

Director: Definitly not Parental Approved advice.

Sonic: WHERES MY CANOPENER!

Shadow: I lent it to Knuckles so he could eat his dog food.

Sonic: Knuckles is an echidna....

Shadow: GRAH! ITS COMING BACK!

Omochao: Have you tried...

Sonic: My can opener! Hey omochao? Have you tried dieing!

Shadow: Its fun.

Omochao: yes, in SA2 when Shadow grabbed me in final chase and jumped off the platform into the atmosphere holding me. Sooo...

Shadow: WHY WONT YOU DIE.

Omochao: Have you tried dieing? its fun!

trees and lights begin to fall, crushing Sonic, Shadow, Omochao, and camera. Gremlins cover the black screen adn begin singing "Hi Ho" From snow white.

TO BE CONTINUED
 

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:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :laugh: :laugh: :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:
LOL! That was hilarious! Make more bloopers!

Quote:
Take 27
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Sonic: Is the director Watching?

Shadow: No, teehee.

Sonic: Ok write this down, shadow.

Dear Omochao,

I am your #1 fan. Everytime you give me advice it makes me horny. I love the way you float around. Please come to my house tonight at 2 AM making loud noises shouting "Im going to rob you!" to tell me its you, so we can have fun.

Sincerly, ShadowChaos

Shadow: MUahhahahahah!

Sonic: **** the camera was running!

--------------------------------------------------

LOL!
 

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Darkness Chronicles Shadow Attacks Nintendo World

Great fic, Shadow Chaos! Masterful story-telling! I'm very much looking forward to the next one! Thank you!

Be Well,
PEGASUS

:hungry: :love:
 

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Hey Hey Hey!!!!!! I just wanted to say hello to all of u , if u don't mind. Maybe u wanta chat with me on AIM, if so here's my sn: Lyra1178893 and I'm on right now so come and chat. :p
 

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Link's Adventure

Link is on his way to save Zelda......
Link: Hey!!!!!!!!! Where is Zelda!!!!!!!! I've looked all over the castle for and still nothing!!!!!! Man this sucks!!!!!!!
Zelda: God ****it!!!!!!! Where is he!!!!!! It's been over an hour since I told him!!!!! He really is a slow one.
Castle guard: Hey, you!!!!! What are you doing here?
Link: Me? Umm.... I'm delivering a pizza to the castle, but I can't find a way in though.
Guard: Well..... there is a secert passage inside the castle.
Link: Really? Where is it?
Guard: There's a little area of grass. Cut it and you will find some stair. That leads you to the castle.
Link: Thanks
Link finds the grass, burns it and finds the stairs
Link: Finally!!!!!!!!!!! Now I'm getting somewhere!!!!!!!!!!

To be contiuied

Srry if anyhting is spelled wrong
 

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uh lyra

You're new so I understand, but this is my fic's post. You're story should be posted on the main CreativeMinds board, and the thing about chatting and your AIM name should go in your profile where it asks you for your user name and just saying HI on a social board.

Im just trying to keep you from gettin flamed.
 

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Blooper reel 3

Take 32
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Sonic ran at Shadow: I'll make you pay for what you did to Tails!

He leapt into the air along with Shadow, both doing homing attacks. They collided at the same time, creating sparks and being sent back, but they didnt even land they kept homing at eachother repeadely, their sparks looked like fireworks and they were going so fast it was hard to see. They both landed, turning viciously. Shadow spindashed into a ball, green energy gathered around him, floating like cosmos.

Shadow: Theres no time to play games, you won't even get some pants, Faker! BAH!

Sonic: Haha! Wait...Hes right! I dont have pants!

Shadow: Muahaha!

Sonic: You dont have any too!

Shadow: erf....

Take 33
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Sonic and Shadow walk on camera wearing jeans.

Director: Loose the jeans, you dont look right with them on.

Tails: Ok that sounded queer.
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Take 44
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Director: ****it! Im sick of this sign buisness!

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Take 35

Sonic ran at Shadow: I'll make you pay for what you did to Tails!

He leapt into the air along with Shadow, both doing homing attacks. They collided at the same time, creating sparks and being sent back, but they didnt even land they kept homing at eachother repeadely, their sparks looked like fireworks and they were going so fast it was hard to see. They both landed, turning viciously. Shadow spindashed into a ball, green energy gathered around him, floating like cosmos.

Shadow: Theres no time to play games, you won't even get the chance, Faker! BAH!

He launched at Sonic encased in this green energy and his usual ornage, going around Sonic five times before smashing into his back, sending him to the ground. Sonic leapt into the air when Shadow landed and had his back turned for a split second, homing at him. His homing attack misses by a mile and smashes into the director instead.

Director: OW ****!

Sonic: Arg my back! Oops! Sorry ShadowChaos!

Director: You're fired!

Crewman: He cant be fired, hes a star.

Director: Oh..well...then you're fired!
--


Take 36
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Sonic ran at Shadow: I'll make you pay for what you did to Tails!

He suddenly slipped and fell backwards, hitting his head on a log.

Director: Who put that bannana peal there?!

Shadow: hahahaa!
--

Take 37
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Samus, Fox, Krystal, Ness, Waluigi, and DK walked through the jungle now, following a strange noise. They came to a river bank, with dozens of little light blue creatures with yellow tipped heads.

Samus: Are those Sonic Chao?

Fox: I think so, What are they surrounding?

The chao scream and move to reveal...Omochao!

Omochao: Move your foot forward to take a step, try it its fun!

All: AAAAAH!
--

Take 38
**
Metal Shadow and Metal Sonic darted at each other, hovering off the ground a few inches as their booster shoes made them fly. Sparks flung as the two metal beings connected in combat. Both hitting each other with their clawed hands and blocking some hits, sparks flying everywhere. They communicated via electric beeps.

Sonic: You won't win this, impostor. I am the real Sonic!

Shadow: You are the impostor! I am the Ultimate Robot! You are just a bucket of bolts compared to me!

Sonic: I'll make you eat those words!

Director: great! Wait...Sonic and Shadow! Your metals are suppose to do this!

Shadow: They needed oil changes...

Sonic: Yeah! Someone programmed them to talk like Omochao.

Omochao: MY omochao army will enslave the world! Muahhaha!

Director: Their own they take dozens of takes to do, their metal robots can be done in one!

((More soon, im too tired))
 

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Hmm I guess this fic took a looooooooooooooooooooooooooong time to write with all the interuptions huh?
Great Bloopers!
 
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Absolutely Excellent!

This HAS to be the best Sonic fic on Smashboards (I know it had Nintendo and other characters, but it was mainly a Sonic fic). The chapters were full of action, a compelling storyline, and the bloopers were hilarious (especially the ones with Omochao). I'm going to read your other one now, but you asked me a question yesterday, and now I can answer:

No, Kirby didn't die in this fic.
 
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