Really like your style. That set was pretty fun to watch. Here's my critique.
Negative:
- You almost always recover aggressively with an aerial. In general you go in a little too much. I understand that its your style and i like the mentality, but it gets too predictable after a while. If you mix it up with playing defensive, your aggression will become much more effective.
- At high %, don't use dthrow. Either get him offstage with fthrow, or uthrow him for an easy kill if he doesn't DI it perfectly
- He spotdodged A LOT when pressured. Cover that **** with knee/stomp.
- In the first game it became way too obvious that you are loving the walljump. You pretty much ****ed yourself up by styling and getting destroyed by a 0815 edgeguard (+ falcon kick offstage. Wtf dude :D).
- You missed so many edgeguards. He up-bed a ton, adapt to that and go out there to kill him (which you did 2 times and those were great, but many times you missed it, when the recovery situation was a little different). At 0:33 you had him by the balls but let him go. A ledgedrop - bair would've killed him easily. In general be prepared to bair him as an edgeguard. Bair is op.
- Remember to always hold in when getting shined, so you slide to the ledge. This is so crucial.
Positive:
- Great movement.
- Some crisp and safe pressure with bair/nair/spaced uair.
- Insane recovery string from the edge at 0:21 (so crisp!!).
- Two beautiful edgeguards in game 2.
- Nice shielddrop uair from the top platform game 1.
You could've taken this set for sure. Focus on closing out the stocks with safe follow-ups + edgeguards and mixing up your recovery and next time you'll defeat him ezpz.
