I've read about half of it now, and it was pretty interesting, even though I don't give a flying **** about American football. Glad you kept the humour in there, it was indeed very South Park-ish, since you mentioned it. It was easy to imagine, something vital for screenplay, so kudos on that.
The interview with the pastor has very comical elements, particularly this part:
"Authenticness makes the world go round, you know"
"Aesthetics make the world go round, you know"
It's also quite an absurd encounter and the speed of it all adds to the "what"-factor. I don't have any time now, but I definitely will try to continue reading this.
Question: Do you actually do something with your screenplays? Is there someone/some place that produces something out of them? They seem pretty good, but then again, I've only read 2 screenplays before
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