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Critique Please
- Thread starter Purple
- Start date
Nihongo-ookami
Smash Journeyman
Huh, not bad.
Although you could have a little more definition in the face.
The facial area feels kinda bland.
You're pretty much good on anatomy(could make the legs a little bit wider, though) and clothes, but the only thing I'd work on is details.
Good try. I would post my art on SWF, but I needz a scanner.
Although you could have a little more definition in the face.
The facial area feels kinda bland.
You're pretty much good on anatomy(could make the legs a little bit wider, though) and clothes, but the only thing I'd work on is details.
Good try. I would post my art on SWF, but I needz a scanner.
Purple
Hi guys!
there more than one picture you know..
PMKNG
Smash Ace
Sora and the girl one, it bothers me that grass is growing of of their feet. and I agree their faces look a bit odd. I also don't think the use of the soft shadow works well with anime-styled drawings, and since most of you're work is anime-ish I wouldn't use that.
http://antiximo.deviantart.com/art/Lineart1-121943318
this one has to be the one I like the most, the difference in line weight is what catches my eye.
http://antiximo.deviantart.com/art/Lineart1-121943318
this one has to be the one I like the most, the difference in line weight is what catches my eye.
Purple
Hi guys!
yeah i've been doing my lineart differently now since it takes too long, but perhaps i'll change back?
ZeldEmblIcar
Smash Rookie
"If you want to know anything about me know i never give up on anyone how dire the situation, even if i say i do i tend to always come back and help before you know it. I love to help i guess, so if you need help in photoshop or flash things feel free to leave me a comment on it :]"
He fights for his friends!
Sorry, had to get that in. The picture is pretty good, I like it, but it sort of looks like the people are floating.
He fights for his friends!
Sorry, had to get that in. The picture is pretty good, I like it, but it sort of looks like the people are floating.
Beat me to it zrky 
I'll be completely honest with you Pervatasaurus. I find this type of artwork to be a complete waste of time. It's distasteful and an eyesore. And no, this is not my bias against Kingdom Hearts, because even if you had drawn Zelda characters, I still would dislike it.
I'll critique this once this thread is locked and the artwork reposted in the critique thread.
I'll be completely honest with you Pervatasaurus. I find this type of artwork to be a complete waste of time. It's distasteful and an eyesore. And no, this is not my bias against Kingdom Hearts, because even if you had drawn Zelda characters, I still would dislike it.
I'll critique this once this thread is locked and the artwork reposted in the critique thread.