Critique My ZSS

[[FBC] Papa Mink]

ZSS CRITIQUING
The Falco boards have a critiquing thread so i thought it would be a good idea to create one as well. I mean, i'm sure i'm not the only ZSS who records videos and wants someone to look at their matches and tell them what they did right and wrong. There's only X amount of stuff you can critique about yourself. So, if anyone would like to critique some of my vidoes that would be great. Hopefully this thread helps out people.

Here are my most recent matches against Snake:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pz_wp_22QcQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GvGiPbdohk4&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OstBf_4zink
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUMAq5dvrgo&feature=related

And here are a few falco.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IXmE_h-WWw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P22hDk38Ko4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kkYQwLVo74Y
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BiTfge-1vgE

Obviously the falco's are god awful. So don't judge. Just help me out.
Spot any bad habits? Etc.

Thanks :D.

Anyone else feel free to comment any videos you would like to have critiqued, or comments about my videos.
Just... no trolling please. Haha. This is to help me be a better player. Not wanna quit. And you can't get better without playing more, eh?​

 

[NickRiddle]

First, there's a video thread, which is used for critiques.
I'll watch these later.

 

[Deathfox30]

I only had time to watch one. :/ The only thing that stood out was you either didn't go for the bair or missed at higher percents after a D smash. You don't even have to time it, rising SH bair hits Snake when he's standing. Was it just wifi/tv lag or something?

 

[Supermodel From Paris]

First, there's a video thread, which is used for critiques.
I'll watch these later.

Actually it's acceptable and within the board's rules to make your own video threads, even though it is a little annoying because it breaks everyone up.

 

[[FBC] Papa Mink]

Alright, ill post this to the video thread.