Critique My Snake!!!

[AdmiralStarshade]

Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SgqNNN7zDT8

Please comment and criticize; need some help! Thanks everybody!

 

[The Cunning Weasel]

first!!!!!!!

 

[Bizkit047]

Not too bad. Something I'll point out immediately is that you really need to mix up landing. You land too predictable. Learn pivot nading to mix things up more so you don't get punished as much, especially against Marths. Speaking of which, Up B immediately if you go off the edge vs Marth, to avoid getting punished easily. And roll/sidestep just a little less. Also use nades more effectively, and in general.

 

[AdmiralStarshade]

Alright thanks! Do you think you can link me to a guide where I can find how to use grenades more effectively? Thanks again!